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Tammy

March 27, 2024

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A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago. It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.


正在读的书

几个月前,一个朋友推荐了一本书给我,就是《原子习惯》。

我在天猫买了本英文版,超喜欢!

里边的英文对我来说刚好,不太难。

更重要的是,作者呈现了一个非常有用的系统,帮助像我这样的人培养更好的喜欢。

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AThe Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

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Tammy

April 8, 2024

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Thank you!

It's... called "Atomic Habits".

You could join this sentence from the previous one if you want a sentence with more flow. Not sure how else to describe it but it can be written like that too.

I bought an English version on Tmall and liked it very much.

The level of difficulty of the English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

The latter part seems a bit redundant i think this could work too.

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Zachary

March 31, 2024

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To add on a bit, i just saw your original message. I can see what you mean now but in English perhaps it could be a bit differently expressed. I suppose for me "just right" and "not too difficult" are slightly repetitive? Dont take my word for it but just some thoughts haha.

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Tammy

April 1, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and feedback!

I am indeed in the Chinese mind when I speak English. I'm trying to avoid that, but it's really hard.

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Zachary

April 1, 2024

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I definitely understand. I realise from learning other languages that English has a lot of nuance also. But your English is really good already. 加油!

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Tammy

April 1, 2024

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谢谢你!一起加油学外语!

A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

OR: One of my friends recommended me a book a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and I like it very much.

The English level inof the book is just right for me,; it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

Feedback

Great!!

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jeemeegee

March 27, 2024

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It should be: I bought THE English version ....

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Tammy

March 28, 2024

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Got it! Thank you so much!

A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought anthe English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, i. It is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

March 28, 2024

1

Thank you for your corrections!

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.


I bought anthe English version on Tmall and like it very much.

I bought an English version on Tmall and I like it very much.

I bought an English version on Tmall and liked it very much.

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The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.


The English level in the book is just right for me, i. It is not too difficult.

The English level inof the book is just right for me,; it is not too difficult.

The level of difficulty of the English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

The latter part seems a bit redundant i think this could work too.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.


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A Book I'm Reading


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AThe Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

OR: One of my friends recommended me a book a few months ago.

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It's called "Atomic Habits".


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It's... called "Atomic Habits".

You could join this sentence from the previous one if you want a sentence with more flow. Not sure how else to describe it but it can be written like that too.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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