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Nov. 21, 2022

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A Bitter-Sweet Perspective

A bitter sweet perspective means being concious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about light and darkness.

We can mention sakura trees as an example. Why does people love them? They only blossoms for a short period of time but that's what makes them so beautiful: they remember us trascendency and our ephemeral lifes.

It's said that the happiest people is grown up people because they're aware of life fragility and his/her own death.

The point is to remember our short life in order to enjoy it.

I read before in a Walter Riso's book that everything is ephemeral and it's true.

Whenever you're facing a hard moment just think that it will cease, no matter how beautiful or difficult it is.

You see, it's better to accept the bad things because it allow us to free ourselves. Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone feel sad and happiness.

Summary from Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's book.

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A bitter sweet perspective means being conscious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about the difference between light and darkness.

We can mention sakura trees as an example.

Why does people love them?

They only blossoms for a short period of time but that's what makes them so beautiful: they rememberind us of transcendency and ourf the ephemeral nature of our lifves.

It's said that the happiest people isare those who have grown up people because they're aware of life’s fragility and his/, consequently, of their own death.

You see, it's better to accept the bad things in our lives because it allow us to free ourselves.

Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone can feel sadboth sadness and happiness.

Summary from Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's book.

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 23, 2022

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Thank you so much again :)

A bitter sweet perspective means being conscious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about light and darkness.

I am a native speaker and I still spell conscious and it's variants incorrectly sometimes.

We can mention sould use Sakura trees as an example.

You don't have to, but the S is capitalized because it's a proper noun.

Why does people love them?

They only blossoms for a short period of time, but that's what makes them so beautiful: they remember usind us of our transcendency and ourt (temporal/temporary) and ephemeral lifves.

or you could say "they let us remember our..."

It's said that the happiest people iare adults (grown -up peoples), because they're aware of life's fragility and his/their own death.

The point is to remember our short life in order to enjoy it.

I've read (before) in aone of Walter Riso's books that everything is ephemeral and it's true.

Whenever you're facing a hard moment just think that it will cease, no matter how beautiful or difficult it is.

Perfect sentence. I am just correcting it to say that it's amazing!!!

You see, it's better to accept the bad things, because it allows us to free ourselves.

Let's understand, that, some over times, everyone will feel sadness and happiness.

Summary from Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's books, respectively.

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 21, 2022

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Thank you so much!

A Bitter-Sweet Perspective

A bitter sweet perspective means being conscious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about light and darkness.

We can mentionuse sakura trees as an example.

Why does people love them?

They only blossoms for a short period of time but that's what makes them so beautiful: they remember us trascendency and ourind us of our temporal and ephemeral lifves.

This is a very good example of how to use a colon.

It's said that the happiest people isare grown up people because they're aware of lifthe fragility andof life and thus of his/her own death.

The point is to remember our short lifeves in order to enjoy it.

I read before in a Walter Riso's book that everything is ephemeral and it's true.

Whenever you're facing a hard moment just think that it will cease, no matter how beautiful or difficult it is.

You see, it's better to accept the bad things because it allows us to free ourselves.

Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone feels sad andor happinessy.

or

Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone feels sadness or happiness.

SThis is a summary ofrom Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's book.

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Very well done!

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 21, 2022

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Thank you so much!

A Bitter-Sweet Perspective


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A bitter sweet perspective means being concious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about light and darkness.


A bitter sweet perspective means being conscious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about light and darkness.

A bitter sweet perspective means being conscious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about light and darkness.

I am a native speaker and I still spell conscious and it's variants incorrectly sometimes.

A bitter sweet perspective means being conscious about beautiful and bad things, similar to being aware about the difference between light and darkness.

We can mention sakura trees as an example.


We can mentionuse sakura trees as an example.

We can mention sould use Sakura trees as an example.

You don't have to, but the S is capitalized because it's a proper noun.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why does people love them?


Why does people love them?

Why does people love them?

Why does people love them?

They only blossoms for a short period of time but that's what makes them so beautiful: they remember us trascendency and our ephemeral lifes.


They only blossoms for a short period of time but that's what makes them so beautiful: they remember us trascendency and ourind us of our temporal and ephemeral lifves.

This is a very good example of how to use a colon.

They only blossoms for a short period of time, but that's what makes them so beautiful: they remember usind us of our transcendency and ourt (temporal/temporary) and ephemeral lifves.

or you could say "they let us remember our..."

They only blossoms for a short period of time but that's what makes them so beautiful: they rememberind us of transcendency and ourf the ephemeral nature of our lifves.

It's said that the happiest people is grown up people because they're aware of life fragility and his/her own death.


It's said that the happiest people isare grown up people because they're aware of lifthe fragility andof life and thus of his/her own death.

It's said that the happiest people iare adults (grown -up peoples), because they're aware of life's fragility and his/their own death.

It's said that the happiest people isare those who have grown up people because they're aware of life’s fragility and his/, consequently, of their own death.

The point is to remember our short life in order to enjoy it.


The point is to remember our short lifeves in order to enjoy it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I read before in a Walter Riso's book that everything is ephemeral and it's true.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I've read (before) in aone of Walter Riso's books that everything is ephemeral and it's true.

Whenever you're facing a hard moment just think that it will cease, no matter how beautiful or difficult it is.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whenever you're facing a hard moment just think that it will cease, no matter how beautiful or difficult it is.

Perfect sentence. I am just correcting it to say that it's amazing!!!

You see, it's better to accept the bad things because it allow us to free ourselves.


You see, it's better to accept the bad things because it allows us to free ourselves.

You see, it's better to accept the bad things, because it allows us to free ourselves.

You see, it's better to accept the bad things in our lives because it allow us to free ourselves.

Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone feel sad and happiness.


Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone feels sad andor happinessy.

or Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone feels sadness or happiness.

Let's understand, that, some over times, everyone will feel sadness and happiness.

Let's understand that, sometimes, everyone can feel sadboth sadness and happiness.

Summary from Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's book.


SThis is a summary ofrom Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's book.

Summary from Susan Cain's book and Walter Riso's books, respectively.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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