Aug. 6, 2022
A big tomato
John was preparing a meal for his girlfriend Alice, it was a surprise as it was his first time cooking. He prepared rice and soup with a big tomato and two cumbersome pieces on a single plate.
Alice replied no way with laughter as John brings his first ever meat, but what this big tomato has to do with meal, Alice asked
Well this is salad, john replied
No way, Alice replied, then she grasped the tomato and went to the kitchen to cut it into slices.
I don’t guess this was hard, John, she said with laughter
So when you are faced with a difficult tomato(task), slice it, cut it into digestible pieces that you can achieve.
For example you got difficult homework instead to tackle it all in one shot, try taking 5 minute rest after every 25, too easy? Try 10 minutes rest every 50 minutes, this is a technique known as pomodoro (the Italian word for tomato!).
Have you ever tried pomodoro or similar techniques, tell us on commects
And don’t be like John, slice your tomatoes!
This is a practice of writing a essay, I watched some YouTube on writing like what is a hook, and now I try to put all what I learned on this essay.
The Hook was the story of john and Alice and the thesis is the pomodoro technique.
I hope you have fun reading my journal and sorry if the story is somehow silly, hehe
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Try to rest 10 minutes rest every 50 minutes, t. This is a technique known as pomodoro (the Italian word for tomato! ).
Have you ever tried the pomodoro or similar techniques, ttechnique or something similar? Tell us oin the commecnts!
And don’t be like John, slice your tomatoes!
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He prepared rice and soup with a big tomato and two cumbersome pieces on a single plate. He prepared rice and soup with a big tomato and two cumbersome pieces(??) on a single plate. I’m not sure what exactly you mean here, so I can’t actually fix this. Two cumbersome pieces of what? He prepared rice and soup with a big tomato and two cucumber |
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Alice replied no way with laughter as John brings his first ever meat, but what this big tomato has to do with meal, Alice asked Alice I fixed it to sound more smooth and natural. |
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Well this is salad, john replied “Well, this is salad, |
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No way, Alice replied, then she grasped the tomato and went to the kitchen to cut it into slices. “No way,” Alice replied, then she gra |
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I don’t guess this was hard, John, she said with laughter “I don’t I’m not sure what exactly you mean here, so I fixed it in a way that makes sense to me.
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So when you are faced with a difficult tomato(task), slice it, cut it into digestible pieces that you can achieve.
So when you are faced with a difficult tomato(task), slice it |
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For example you got difficult homework instead to tackle it all in one shot, try taking 5 minute rest after every 25, too easy? For example, if you |
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Try 10 minutes rest every 50 minutes, this is a technique known as pomodoro (the Italian word for tomato! ).
Try to rest 10 minutes |
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Have you ever tried pomodoro or similar techniques, tell us on commects Have you ever tried pomodoro or similar techniques Have you ever tried the pomodoro |
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And don’t be like John, slice your tomatoes! And don’t be like John This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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