Feb. 14, 2021
A Big Earthquake
Last night there was a big earthquake in Japan, the Tohoku region. The earthquake was estimated at magnitude 7.1, which is the biggest one I've ever experienced. The vibration was strong, so some of my dishes fell and broke, and my humidifier spilled water on my carpet. It was just before going to bed, but I had to clean my room and stayed up for a while to evacuate if I needed to. Fortunately, a tsunami didn't happen and I didn't get hurt. However, an elevator in my apartment still doesn't work. I also can't use gas, so I can only use cold water. This earthquake is said the aftershock of the Great East Japan Earthquake, which happened 10 years ago.
A Big Earthquake
Last night there was a big earthquake in Japan, the Tohoku region of Japan.
The vibration was strong, so some of my dishes fell and broke, and my humidifier spilled water on my carpet.
It was just before going to bed, but I had to clean my room and stayed up for a while to evacuate if I needed to.
Fortunately, a tsunami didn't happen and I didn't get hurt.
I also can't use gas, so I can only use cold water.
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うわー、あなたはとても近かった！ あなたが無事で怪我をしていなかったのはとてもうれしいです！
Feb. 15, 2021
ありがとうございます！
A Big Earthquake
Last night there was a big earthquake in Japan, the Tohoku region.
The earthquake was estimated at a magnitude of 7.1, which is the biggest one I've ever experienced.
The vibration was so strong, so that some of my dishes fell and broke, and my humidifier spilled water on my carpet.
You have a really strong first sentence, but the result is not that strong - so I changed it a little bit.
The vibration was so strong that many of my dishes fell and smashed all over the floor. My humidifier too also fell and water spilled all over my carpet.
It wasThis happened just before going to bed, but I had to clean my room and stayed up for a while to evacuate if I needed to.
Fortunately, a tsunami didn't happen and I didn't get hurt.
However, an elevator in my apartment complex still doesn't work.
Unless you do have an elevator in your apartment
I also can't use gas, so I can only use cold water.
This earthquake is said to be from the aftershock of the Great East Japan Earthquake, which happened 10 years ago.
Feb. 15, 2021
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The earthquake was estimated at magnitude 7.1, which is the biggest one I've ever experienced. The earthquake was estimated at a magnitude of 7.1, which is the biggest one I've ever experienced. |
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The vibration was strong, so some of my dishes fell and broke, and my humidifier spilled water on my carpet. The vibration was so strong You have a really strong first sentence, but the result is not that strong - so I changed it a little bit. The vibration was so strong that many of my dishes fell and smashed all over the floor. My humidifier too also fell and water spilled all over my carpet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was just before going to bed, but I had to clean my room and stayed up for a while to evacuate if I needed to.
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Fortunately, a tsunami didn't happen and I didn't get hurt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, an elevator in my apartment still doesn't work. However, an elevator in my apartment complex still doesn't work. Unless you do have an elevator in your apartment |
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I also can't use gas, so I can only use cold water. I also can't use gas This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This earthquake is said the aftershock of the Great East Japan Earthquake, which happened 10 years ago. This earthquake is said to be from the aftershock of the Great East Japan Earthquake, which happened 10 years ago. |
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