Nov. 5, 2021
A Better World
Yes. In general I think that women are more peacefull and efficient that men. They know to manage better the problems and resolves them in a more effective way that men. For another hand, they are mothers and I presume they do not will like to play to soldiers, so there would be few or no wars. Is possible that differents countries helping each other so the contrast among the richer and poorest were more low that now. Medical investigations sure would be better and is possible that scientific investigation too. I think all this go would better, but I could be wrong. What do you think about this?
A Better World
Yes.
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Nov. 8, 2021
Thanks for your feddback, aryeh86.
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In general I think that women are more peacefull and efficient that men. In general, I think that women are more peaceful |
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They know to manage better the problems and resolves them in a more effective way that men. They know how to manage |
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For another hand, they are mothers and I presume they do not will like to play to soldiers, so there would be few or no wars.
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Is possible that differents countries helping each other so the contrast among the richer and poorest were more low that now. It's possible that different |
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Medical investigations sure would be better and is possible that scientific investigation too. Medical |
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I think all this go would better, but I could be wrong. I think all this |
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What do you think about this? |
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