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galoarellano1987

Dec. 11, 2024

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A Better Future

Today when I woke up, for a moment I though "God, today will be a new start of my life"

Suddenly, one negative though arrived to my mind but I had decided "Today is a new start of my life".

Last week had been an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and one friend were diagnosed with Cancer.

I hope, they can overcome their diseases and God give them the enough wisdom for facing the process.

Thanks for reading

God bless you

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Today when I woke up, for a moment I though "God, today will be a new start of my life"


Suddenly, one negative though arrived to my mind but I had decided
"Tthat "today is a new start of my life".

Last week had been an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and one friend were diagnosed with Ccancer.

I hope, that they can overcome their diseases and God gives them the enough wisdom for facing the process.

Thanks for reading


God bless you

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Mainly putting commas when not needed. Good job!

Today when I woke up, for a moment I thought "God, today will be a new start of my life"


Suddenly, one negative though
arrived tot crossed my mind but I had already decided, "Today is a new start of my life".

Last week had been an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and one friend were diagnosed with Cancer.

my sincere sympathies.

I hope, they can overcomebe healed of their diseases and God can give them the enough wisdom forto facinge the process.

Thanks for reading


God bless you

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Good job mate, and sorry for your tribulations.

Today when I woke up, for a moment I thought, "God, today will be athe new start of my life" ¶
."¶

Suddenly, one negative though
arrivedt came to my mind but I had already decided, "Today is a new start of my life"."

Last week had beenwas an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and oneanother friend were diagnosed with Ccancer.

I hope, that they can overcome their diseases and God will give them the enough wisdom forto facinge the process.

Thanks for reading


God bless you
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Hope things get better soon!

A Better Future


Today when I woke up, for a moment I though "God, today will be a new start of my life" Suddenly, one negative though arrived to my mind but I had decided "Today is a new start of my life".


Today when I woke up, for a moment I thought, "God, today will be athe new start of my life" ¶
."¶

Suddenly, one negative though
arrivedt came to my mind but I had already decided, "Today is a new start of my life"."

Today when I woke up, for a moment I thought "God, today will be a new start of my life"


Suddenly, one negative though
arrived tot crossed my mind but I had already decided, "Today is a new start of my life".

Today when I woke up, for a moment I though "God, today will be a new start of my life"


Suddenly, one negative though arrived to my mind but I had decided
"Tthat "today is a new start of my life".

Last week had been an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and one friend were diagnosed with Cancer.


Last week had beenwas an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and oneanother friend were diagnosed with Ccancer.

Last week had been an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and one friend were diagnosed with Cancer.

my sincere sympathies.

Last week had been an emotional week, because my uncle died, and another uncle-in-law and one friend were diagnosed with Ccancer.

I hope, they can overcome their diseases and God give them the enough wisdom for facing the process.


I hope, that they can overcome their diseases and God will give them the enough wisdom forto facinge the process.

I hope, they can overcomebe healed of their diseases and God can give them the enough wisdom forto facinge the process.

I hope, that they can overcome their diseases and God gives them the enough wisdom for facing the process.

Thanks for reading God bless you


Thanks for reading


God bless you
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Thanks for reading


God bless you

Thanks for reading


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