Oct. 24, 2022
A beautiful homework.
This homework it's called "a happy day", here I need to write about the happiest day of my life.
What was the happiest day of your life?
My happiest day of my life was 2 months ago when I studied chemistry online.
What happened?
I took a shower, and then I opened my notebook. I watched my professor's video about mol and he was so funny explaining it.
I fell in love with the process of learning and how he was explaining.
He was making jokes and I laugh for a long time.
Since I was in highschool I thought that chemistry was boring and hard but I never felt that when I was studying with him.
How did you feel?
I felt really happy, and sad because I thought about the end of the class.
I felt love about the way he was teaching.
I felt admiration because I want to teach like him.
Why was the happiest day of your life?
Because I had a new perspective in science and I also was having some fun learning it.
I enjoyed when he really appreciated the students and how he was doing his best to make it fun to understand.
Why it's important to know about past events?
I think it is important because we can detect patterns and that could help to change our attitude and have different perspectives about things.
That can be benefitial to know how to act and to be more happy as well because we can remember what is important for us, and keep in mind that the life is short and what truly matters is to enjoy the life that we fortunately have.
It could be also healtier for the brain remembering beautiful past moments to be more grateful; this is important to love ourselves, and take care of our mental health.
I honestly think that this is really useful to notice how things are changing and to be more concious about our lifes.
Trying to live each day as a unique one instead of running all the time.
It is also helpful to take a break to analyze and find better ways to solve our problems.
Have a nice day!
Thank you for correcting me :)
He was making jokes and I laughed for a long time.
Laugh is present tense.
Oct. 24, 2022
Thank you :)
Have a nice day.
A bBeautiful hHomework.
Titles always all have capitals, homework is always plural so we do not use ‘a’!
This week’s homework it's called "a happy day", here I need to/must write about the happiest day of my life.
‘I need to eat’ - tengo que comer
‘I need to take a shower’ - tengo que bañarme
‘She needs to eat’ - (ella) tiene que comer
Must is very formal, it suites your tone so you could use this instead; must is also very imperative/a high modality!
What was the happiest day of your life?
MyThe happiest day of my life was 2 months ago when I studied chemistry online.
Do not repeat my, this is already implied in ‘my life’; it is like in Spanish this is incorrect: “Mi duele mi cabeza” but this is correct: “Mi duele la cabeza” :)!
What happened?
I took a shower, and then I opened my notebook.
I watched my professor's video about mol and he was so funny whilst he explained/explaining it.
I fell in love with the process of learning and how is method of explanation/the wasy he explaininged it.
The first suggestion is very formal (it suites your particular tone)
He was making jokes and I laugh for a long timehe made me laugh throughout the video.
This is more natural! We always say:
‘She made me laugh’
‘He was making me laugh while he was talking”
Since I was in highschool I thought that chemistry was boring and hard but I never felt that when I was studying with him.
How did you feel?
I felt really happy, and sad because I thought about the end of the classhow the class came to an end.
Very formal and natural English saying!
I feltl in love aboutwith the way he was teaching.
It’s always ‘I fell in love with… (subject).’
I felt admiration because I wanted to be able to teach like him.
To be able to; as teaching is an ability, you want to be capable of the skill. It is like: “capaz de enseñar cómo él.” (I think!)
Why was it the happiest day of your life?
Because I had a new perspective in science and I also was having some fun learning it.
I enjoyed whenhow he really appreciated the students and how he was doing his best to make it fun to understand.
How + representation, if that makes sense:
“I enjoyed how she put mayonnaise in the sauce.”
“I enjoyed how the actor said his name.”
Why it'ss it important to know about past events?
I think it is important because we can detect patterns and that could help to change our attitude and have different perspectives about things.
That can be benefitial to know how to act and to be more happy as well because we can remember what is important for us, and keep in mind that the life is short and what truly matters is to enjoy the life that we fortunately have.
It could be also healtier for the brain remembering beautiful past moments to be more grateful; this is important to love ourselves, and take care of our mental health.
I honestly think that this is really useful to notice how things are changing and to be more conscious about our lifves.
Trying to live each day as a unique one instead of running all the time.
It is also helpful to take a break to analyze and find better ways to solve our problems.
Analyse for British/Australian English
Analyze for American (I don’t know which one you are going for, of course !)
Have a nice day!
Thank you for correcting me :)
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Lovely read, you express yourself very eloquently and concisely, and a beautiful message well done! :)
Oct. 24, 2022
Thank you!
You're really good giving feedback, this is very useful.
Jan. 23, 2023
MyThe happiest day of my life was 2 months ago when I studied chemistry online.
Thank you so much. I'm using your corrections right now and your detailed comments, examples and so on are amazing!
Note: the correct spelling is "Me duele la cabeza" (I hope you find this correction to be helpful).
Jan. 24, 2023
Oh thank you for your correction, Lil! 😄 I am glad to be helpful to you.
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A beautiful homework.
Titles always all have capitals, homework is always plural so we do not use ‘a’! |
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This homework it's called "a happy day", here I need to write about the happiest day of my life. This week’s homework i ‘I need to eat’ - tengo que comer ‘I need to take a shower’ - tengo que bañarme ‘She needs to eat’ - (ella) tiene que comer Must is very formal, it suites your tone so you could use this instead; must is also very imperative/a high modality! |
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What was the happiest day of your life? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My happiest day of my life was 2 months ago when I studied chemistry online.
Do not repeat my, this is already implied in ‘my life’; it is like in Spanish this is incorrect: “Mi duele mi cabeza” but this is correct: “Mi duele la cabeza” :)! |
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What happened? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I took a shower, and then I opened my notebook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I watched my professor's video about mol and he was so funny explaining it. I watched my professor's video about mol and he was so funny whilst he explained/explaining it. |
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I fell in love with the process of learning and how he was explaining. I fell in love with the process of learning and h The first suggestion is very formal (it suites your particular tone) |
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He was making jokes and I laugh for a long time. He was making jokes and This is more natural! We always say: ‘She made me laugh’ ‘He was making me laugh while he was talking” He was making jokes and I laughed for a long time. Laugh is present tense. |
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Since I was in highschool I thought that chemistry was boring and hard but I never felt that when I was studying with him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How did you feel? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt really happy, and sad because I thought about the end of the class. I felt really happy, and sad because I thought about Very formal and natural English saying! |
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I felt love about the way he was teaching. I fel It’s always ‘I fell in love with… (subject).’ |
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I felt admiration because I want to teach like him. I felt admiration because I wanted to be able to teach like him. To be able to; as teaching is an ability, you want to be capable of the skill. It is like: “capaz de enseñar cómo él.” (I think!) |
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Why was the happiest day of your life? Why was it the happiest day of your life? |
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Because I had a new perspective in science and I also was having some fun learning it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I enjoyed when he really appreciated the students and how he was doing his best to make it fun to understand. I enjoyed How + representation, if that makes sense: “I enjoyed how she put mayonnaise in the sauce.” “I enjoyed how the actor said his name.” |
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Why it's important to know about past events? Why i |
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I think it is important because we can detect patterns and that could help to change our attitude and have different perspectives about things. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That can be benefitial to know how to act and to be more happy as well because we can remember what is important for us, and keep in mind that the life is short and what truly matters is to enjoy the life that we fortunately have. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It could be also healtier for the brain remembering beautiful past moments to be more grateful; this is important to love ourselves, and take care of our mental health. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I honestly think that this is really useful to notice how things are changing and to be more concious about our lifes. I honestly think that this is really useful to notice how things are changing and to be more conscious about our li |
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Trying to live each day as a unique one instead of running all the time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is also helpful to take a break to analyze and find better ways to solve our problems. It is also helpful to take a break to analyze and find better ways to solve our problems. Analyse for British/Australian English Analyze for American (I don’t know which one you are going for, of course !) |
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