Nov. 7, 2024
A Bar Diagram Report from IELTS Writing Part 1
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The diagram compares the electronic loss where per 100 units are generated from brown coal and black coal.
Overall, consumers can obtain more amount of electricity through the generation from black coal than that of brown coal.
Regarding the electricity loss of brown coal, it involves 4 stages: firstly, if 100 units fuel energy are input from brown coal, they will lose 70 units energy after passed by Power Station. Then, the maintained 30 units have a loss of 3 units when they have been transmitted by Transportation and Distribution. Finally, the consumer will receive 27 units energy in this way.
With respect to black coal offering electricity, it also includes 4 stages, but initially, it just lose 68 units compared to the way by brown coal. After that, there will be 32 units electricity used for Transportation and Distribution to present them to consumers.
A Bar Diagram Report from IELTS Writing Part 1
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The diagram compares the electronic loss where per 100 units, which are generated from brown coal and black coal.
Overall, consumers can obtain more amount of electricity through the generation ofrom black coal than that of brown coal.
Or "a higher amount of electricity"
Regarding the electricity loss of brown coal, it involves 4 stages: firstly, if 100 units of fuel energy are input from brown coal, they will lose 70 units of energy after passed bying through the Power Station.
Then, the maintained 30 units have a loss of 3 units when they have been transmitted by Transportation and Distribution.
Finally, the consumer will receive 27 units of energy in this way.
With respect to black coal offering electricity, it also includes 4 stages, but initially, it just/only loses 68 units compared to the way byat of brown coal.
After that, there will be 32 units of electricity used for Transportation and Distribution to present themed to consumers.
Feedback
Fantastic!
Nov. 13, 2024
THX!
Can I say "through the generation from black coal than that from brown coal"?
Nov. 13, 2024
I think its correct but very awkward, If you want to use "from", say "More electricity can be generated from black coal than from brown coal"
Nov. 13, 2024
You are right. Thank you again
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A Bar Diagram Report from IELTS Writing Part 1 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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(The link below is the diagram image from the original question https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3NDI1MjQ=.html) The diagram compares the electronic loss where per 100 units are generated from brown coal and black coal. (The link below is the diagram image from the original question |
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Overall, consumers can obtain more amount of electricity through the generation from black coal than that of brown coal. Overall, consumers can obtain more Or "a higher amount of electricity" |
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Regarding the electricity loss of brown coal, it involves 4 stages: firstly, if 100 units fuel energy are input from brown coal, they will lose 70 units energy after passed by Power Station. Regarding the electricity loss of brown coal, it involves 4 stages: firstly, if 100 units of fuel energy are |
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Then, the maintained 30 units have a loss of 3 units when they have been transmitted by Transportation and Distribution. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, the consumer will receive 27 units energy in this way. Finally, the consumer will receive 27 units of energy in this way. |
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With respect to black coal offering electricity, it also includes 4 stages, but initially, it just lose 68 units compared to the way by brown coal. With respect to black coal offering electricity, it also includes 4 stages, but initially, it just/only loses 68 units compared to th |
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After that, there will be 32 units electricity used for Transportation and Distribution to present them to consumers. After that, there will be 32 units of electricity used for Transportation and Distribution |
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