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A Bar Chart Report from IELTS Writing Part 1

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This bar chart illustrates proportions of the young from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

Overall, the youth in Portugal exceeded their peers in other three countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

Regarding Portugal, there were not less than 40% young people solving this environment problem through all these three ways; particularly in life style, approximately 44% young people in Portugal prefer this way. interestingly, adolescents in Romania just halved the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually all ways.

With respect to other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heating slightly more than that in Netherlands, around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent young Polish. On the contrary, most young Dutch preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

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A Bar Chart Report from IELTS Writing Part 1

(This link below is the Cchart from the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html)



This bar chart illustrates proportions of the young from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

Overall, the youth in Portugal exceeded their peers in the other three countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

Regarding Portugal, there were not less than 40% young people solving this environmental problem through all these three ways; particularly inthrough life style, as approximately 44% young people in Portugal prefer this waymethod.

interestingly, adolescents in Romania just halvedwere only half of the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually allevery ways.

With respect to the other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heating slightly more than that in the Netherlands, of around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent of young Polish.

On the contrary, most of the young Dutch preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

(Thise link below is the Chart from the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html)



Th
ise bar chart illustrates the proportions of the young people from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

Overall, the youthng people in Portugal exceeded their peers in other threefrom three other countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

‘Exceeded’ is a strange word choice. It would depend on the chart, of course.

RegardingIn Portugal, there were not less than 40% of young people solving this environmental problems through all these three ways; particularly in life style,ree ways, with life style in particular, having approximately 44% of young people in Portugal preferring this way.

iInterestingly, adolescents inyoung Romanians had just halvedf the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually all ways.

With respect to the other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heating slightly more than that ine Netherlands, with around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent of the young Polish.

OIn the contraryst, most young Dutch preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

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Great work!

(Thise link below is the Cshows a chart from the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html)



This bar chart illustrates p
roportionercentages of the young people from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

I am not sure what is meant by "original question". Global warming does not use an article.

You could say, "this link below..." but "The link below," is used more often.

Overall, the youth in Portugal exceeded their peers in ofrom ther three other countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

Regarding Portugal, there were not less than 40% young peopleof youth who would solvinge this environment problem through all these three ways; particularly in life style, approximately 44% young people in Portugal prefer this way/method.

iInterestingly, adolescents in Romania justdemonstrated halvedf the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually all ways.

With respect to the other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heatingwarming only slightly more than that in Netherlands, around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent young of Polish youth.

On the contrary, most young DutcDutch youth preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

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Hello, I hope some of my corrections were helpful.

A Bar Chart Report from IELTS Writing Part 1


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(This link below is the Chart from the original question https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html) This bar chart illustrates proportions of the young from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.


(Thise link below is the Cshows a chart from the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html)



This bar chart illustrates p
roportionercentages of the young people from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

I am not sure what is meant by "original question". Global warming does not use an article. You could say, "this link below..." but "The link below," is used more often.

(Thise link below is the Chart from the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html)



Th
ise bar chart illustrates the proportions of the young people from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

(This link below is the Cchart from the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA3MTQ1NDg=.html)



This bar chart illustrates proportions of the young from four countries opting for various ways to tackle the global warming in 2008.

Overall, the youth in Portugal exceeded their peers in other three countries in almost every method to solve global warming.


Overall, the youth in Portugal exceeded their peers in ofrom ther three other countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

Overall, the youthng people in Portugal exceeded their peers in other threefrom three other countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

‘Exceeded’ is a strange word choice. It would depend on the chart, of course.

Overall, the youth in Portugal exceeded their peers in the other three countries in almost every method to solve global warming.

Regarding Portugal, there were not less than 40% young people solving this environment problem through all these three ways; particularly in life style, approximately 44% young people in Portugal prefer this way.


Regarding Portugal, there were not less than 40% young peopleof youth who would solvinge this environment problem through all these three ways; particularly in life style, approximately 44% young people in Portugal prefer this way/method.

RegardingIn Portugal, there were not less than 40% of young people solving this environmental problems through all these three ways; particularly in life style,ree ways, with life style in particular, having approximately 44% of young people in Portugal preferring this way.

Regarding Portugal, there were not less than 40% young people solving this environmental problem through all these three ways; particularly inthrough life style, as approximately 44% young people in Portugal prefer this waymethod.

interestingly, adolescents in Romania just halved the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually all ways.


iInterestingly, adolescents in Romania justdemonstrated halvedf the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually all ways.

iInterestingly, adolescents inyoung Romanians had just halvedf the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually all ways.

interestingly, adolescents in Romania just halvedwere only half of the percentages of young Portuguese in virtually allevery ways.

With respect to other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heating slightly more than that in Netherlands, around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent young Polish.


With respect to the other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heatingwarming only slightly more than that in Netherlands, around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent young of Polish youth.

With respect to the other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heating slightly more than that ine Netherlands, with around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent of the young Polish.

With respect to the other two countries, young people in Poland participated in solving global heating slightly more than that in the Netherlands, of around 30% in general ways, with the exception of advanced technology, chosen by only 10 percent of young Polish.

On the contrary, most young Dutch preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.


On the contrary, most young DutcDutch youth preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

OIn the contraryst, most young Dutch preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

On the contrary, most of the young Dutch preferred to reduce global warming through technology and other means, which made up about 60% collectively.

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