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I usually buy a bread for my breakfast on my way to work.

I like Walnut bread which price icosts 200JPY.

I can get one point when I buy asome bread.

And if I collect 5points, it is worth 50JPY.

This bakery haves cafe in the shop.

Some people eat themstraight after buying their breads.

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I like Walnut bread which is price isd 200JPY.

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This bakery haves a cafe inside the shop.

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However, I eat it before work at my company's canteen.

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I'm not sure if it's your office.

I usually buy a bread for my breakfast on my way to work.

I like the Walnut bread which price icosts 200 JPY.

I can get one point when I buy athe bread.

And if I collect 5points, it is worth 50 JPY.

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Some people eat themre after buying breads.

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A bBakery, 1

Instead of just 1, you can say Part 1, or First Entry, if you intend to have a series of writing entries on this subject

There is a nice bakery in the Yachiyodai train/subway station.

What kind of station is it (train, subway)?

When I go to work, I get off at this station.

I usually buy asome bread for my breakfast on my way to work.

We don't say "a bread" in English. You can say "some bread" which doesn't specify a specific quantity but would be commonly used in this scenario.

I like Wthe walnut bread, which price icosts 200 JPY.

Since you are talking about their menu item, you use "the" here. You could also say "I like their walnut bread."

I can get one point when I buy a bread.

And I've collected 5 points, itwhich is worth 50 JPY.

Another option, for the case if you don't have the points yet: And if I collect 5 points, it's worth 50 JPY.

This bakery haves a cafe in the shop.

Some people eat themre after buying breads.

However, I eat it before work at my company's canteen.

This is a regional difference, but just to mention it, we would call it a cafeteria and not a canteen in America.

The wWork starts fromat 9 am , and I arrive at my office at 8：:50 am, so I have to eat it for 5minutes5 minutes to eat.

When I go to work, I get off at this station.

I go pastwalk by the bakery if I goon my way to my office.

I usually buy a bread for my breakfast on my way to work.

I like Wwalnut bread which price icosts 200JPY.

I can get one point when I buy a breadone bun.

And I collectEvery 5 points, its worth 50JPY.

This bakery haves a cafe in the shop.

Some people eat themre after buying breads from the bakery.

However, I eat it before work at my company's canteen.

The work starts fromat 9am ,and I arrive my office at 8：:50am so I have to eat it forwithin 5 minutes.