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kiwy

Sept. 12, 2021

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A bad Day

My stomach felt bad today. I felt like to vomit many times, but failed all the time. I think it is because of the work pressure. When I was a high school student in the fisrt term, I got stomachache before every exam. At first, I thought that there might be something wrong with my stomach, but when I became numb, I'd never suffered like that.
I bought a lot of food and snack online tonight. I wanted to live a little unhealthy for a few days.

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A bad Day

My stomach felt bad today.

I felt like I had to vomit many times, but failed all the timenever did.

I think it is because of the work pressure at work.

When I was a high school student in the fisrt termfirst started high school, I got stomachache before every exam.

Not sure about British grades but in American English 高一=sophomore, 高二=junior,高三=senior. We also have a fourth year of high school before 高一 called freshman year.

At first, I thought that there might be something wrong with my stomach, but when I became numb, i realized I'd never suffered like that before.

I bought a lot of food and snacks online tonight.

I wanted to live a little unhealthily for a few days.

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Seems like you've been having a real rough patch. I actually bought some Pocky today for the same reason, very stressed with school.

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kiwy

Sept. 13, 2021

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Let's hug virtually.
But maybe I am also preparing the ILETS exams at the same and I want to pass it quickly, so I am suffering like that.

My stomach felt bad today.


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I felt like to vomit many times, but failed all the time.


I felt like I had to vomit many times, but failed all the timenever did.

I think it is because of the work pressure.


I think it is because of the work pressure at work.

A bad Day


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was a high school student in the fisrt term, I got stomachache before every exam.


When I was a high school student in the fisrt termfirst started high school, I got stomachache before every exam.

Not sure about British grades but in American English 高一=sophomore, 高二=junior,高三=senior. We also have a fourth year of high school before 高一 called freshman year.

At first, I thought that there might be something wrong with my stomach, but when I became numb, I'd never suffered like that.


At first, I thought that there might be something wrong with my stomach, but when I became numb, i realized I'd never suffered like that before.

I bought a lot of food and snack online tonight.


I bought a lot of food and snacks online tonight.

I wanted to live a little unhealthy for a few days.


I wanted to live a little unhealthily for a few days.

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