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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



B: Excuse me, do you know where you can get a ticket you can hop on and off anytime?
A: I'm not sure, but you might want to ask at the train station.
B: Okay, and do you know where that is?
A: I don't know the one here at the station, but most of the ticket windows are around the ticket gates, so I can venture a guess. Would you like me to take you there?
B: That would be very helpful.
A: Okay. Let's go.
B: Yes.

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A & B Talk 98

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, do you know where you can get a ticket where you can hop on and off the train anytime?

This sounds a little more natural in the US.

A: I'm not sure, but you might want to ask at the train station.

B: Okay, and do you know where that is?

A: I don't know the statione here at the stationvery well, but most of the ticket windows are around the ticket gates, so I can venture a guess'd look there first.

This sounds a little more natural in the US.

Would you like me to take you there?

B: That would be very helpful.

A: Okay.

Let's go.

B: Yes.Awesome, thanks!

This sounds a little more natural in the US. We wouldn't really reply, "yes," to a "let's go" statement.

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July 20, 2022

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mari

July 20, 2022

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A & B Talk98


A & B Talk 98

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Excuse me, do you know where you can get a ticket you can hop on and off anytime?


B: Excuse me, do you know where you can get a ticket where you can hop on and off the train anytime?

This sounds a little more natural in the US.

A: I'm not sure, but you might want to ask at the train station.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Okay, and do you know where that is?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: I don't know the one here at the station, but most of the ticket windows are around the ticket gates, so I can venture a guess.


A: I don't know the statione here at the stationvery well, but most of the ticket windows are around the ticket gates, so I can venture a guess'd look there first.

This sounds a little more natural in the US.

Would you like me to take you there?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: That would be very helpful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let's go.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Yes.


B: Yes.Awesome, thanks!

This sounds a little more natural in the US. We wouldn't really reply, "yes," to a "let's go" statement.

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