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July 16, 2022

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A & B Talk95

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, is this where you catch the Thunderbird train?
A: Sorry, I don't know much about trains here. If you want, I can look it up for you right away.
B: It's ok, thanks.
A: I'm sorry I can't help you.
B: No problem.

ใƒผใƒผใƒผ5 minutes later
A: Did you find the train?
B: No, actually not yet.
A: I just checked and it seems to leave from platform 11.
B: Oh! That's very helpful. Thank you very much.
A: No problem at all. Take care.
B: You too. Thanks, bye!

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A & B Talk 95

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, is this where you catch the Thunderbird train?

A: Sorry, I don't know much about trains here.

If you want, I can look it up for you right away.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: It's ok, thanks.

A: I'm sorry I can't help you.

B: No problem.

ใƒผใƒผใƒผ5 minutes later

A: Did you find the train?

B: No, actually not yet.

A: I just checked and it seems to leave from platform 11.

B: Oh!

That's very helpful.

Thank you very much.

A: No problem at all.

Take care.

B: You too.

Thanks, bye!

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sho

July 20, 2022

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ใ”่ฟ”ไฟกใซใฏๅŠใณใพใ›ใ‚“๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

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A & B Talk95


A & B Talk 95

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, is this where you catch the Thunderbird train?


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A: Sorry, I don't know much about trains here.


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If you want, I can look it up for you right away.


If you want, I can look it up for you right away.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: It's ok, thanks.


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A: I'm sorry I can't help you.


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B: No problem.


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ใƒผใƒผใƒผ5 minutes later


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A: Did you find the train?


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B: No, actually not yet.


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A: I just checked and it seems to leave from platform 11.


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B: Oh!


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That's very helpful.


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Thank you very much.


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A: No problem at all.


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Take care.


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B: You too.


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Thanks, bye!


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