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July 16, 2022

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A & B Talk94

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me. How much does this cost to get in?
A: I have no idea. I've never been here. Should I check?
B: That would be great.
A: Okay. Gimme a minute. Well... Oh, it’s says it’s free to enter the park.
B: Oh, that's great! That's awesome.
A: Good for you.
B: Thank you so much!
A: No problem. Have fun.
B: Thanks! Bye.
A: Bye bye!

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A & B Talk 94

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

B: Excuse me.

How much does ithis cost to get in?

US alternative

A: I have no idea.

I've never been here.

Should I check?

B: That would be great.

A: Okay.

Gimme a minute.

Well... Oh, it’s says it’s free to enter the park.

B: Oh, that's great!

That's awesome.

A: Good for you.

B: Thank you so much!

A: No problem.

Have fun.

B: Thanks!

Bye.

A: Bye bye!

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A & B Talk94

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

I’d specify that you’re talking about native speakers here

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in mythese sentences?

“My sentences” in this context sounds unnatural. I think “these” sounds better in this context but I don’t think “My” sounds incorrect

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

🙏

Also, I'd like to gethear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

How much does ithis cost to get in?

In this case you’d use it. “This” is used for talking about something that’s not specified in the sentence like “how much does this cost”. Because you’re referencing what you’re asking about (the price of getting in), “it” would be used in this case

A: I have no idea.

I've never been here.

Should I check?

B: That would be great.

A: Okay.

Gimme a minute.

Well... Oh, it’s says it’s free to enter the park.

“It’s says” means “it is says”. Then you’re mixing two different tenses(it is saying and it says). Often, “it says” is used in spoken English but either one really work but you can’t really mix them.

B: Oh, that's great!

That's awesome.

A: Good for you.

B: Thank you so much!

A: No problem.

Have fun.

B: Thanks!

Bye.

A: Bye bye!

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sho

July 18, 2022

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Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️

A & B Talk94


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A & B Talk 94

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


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I want to speak like a native!!


I want to speak like a native speaker!!

I’d specify that you’re talking about native speakers here

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Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in mythese sentences?

“My sentences” in this context sounds unnatural. I think “these” sounds better in this context but I don’t think “My” sounds incorrect

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

🙏


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


Also, I'd like to gethear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


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B: Excuse me.


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How much does this cost to get in?


How much does ithis cost to get in?

In this case you’d use it. “This” is used for talking about something that’s not specified in the sentence like “how much does this cost”. Because you’re referencing what you’re asking about (the price of getting in), “it” would be used in this case

How much does ithis cost to get in?

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A: I have no idea.


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I've never been here.


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Should I check?


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B: That would be great.


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A: Okay.


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Gimme a minute.


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Well... Oh, it’s says it’s free to enter the park.


Well... Oh, it’s says it’s free to enter the park.

“It’s says” means “it is says”. Then you’re mixing two different tenses(it is saying and it says). Often, “it says” is used in spoken English but either one really work but you can’t really mix them.

Well... Oh, it’s says it’s free to enter the park.

B: Oh, that's great!


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That's awesome.


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A: Good for you.


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B: Thank you so much!


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A: No problem.


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Have fun.


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B: Thanks!


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Bye.


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A: Bye bye!


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