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sho

July 16, 2022

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A & B Talk92

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something. I want to go to Ueno, but is this the right train?
A: To Ueno?ใ€€
B: Yes.
A: Ok. Let me search. Yes, this's right!
B: Also, is there a faster way than this train?
A: One minute. No. This train is the fastest one.
B: Ok! Thank you!
A: You're welcome.

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A & B Talk 92

It's better with a space before the number.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something.

I want to go to Ueno, but is this the right train?

A: To Ueno?

B: Yes.

A: Ok. Let mme searchcheck.

This is US slang which sounds more natural. We'd never say, "Let me search," in the US.

Yes, this's righup, you got it!

US slang which sounds more natural in conversation.

B: Also, is there a faster way than this train?

This is okay, too.

A: One minute.

No.

This train is the fastest one.

B: Ok!

Thank you!

A: You're welcome.

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sho

July 20, 2022

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A: Ok. Let me search.


A: Ok. Let mme searchcheck.

This is US slang which sounds more natural. We'd never say, "Let me search," in the US.

Yes, this's right!


Yes, this's righup, you got it!

US slang which sounds more natural in conversation.

A & B Talk92


A & B Talk 92

It's better with a space before the number.

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to go to Ueno, but is this the right train?


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A: To Ueno?


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B: Yes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Also, is there a faster way than this train?


B: Also, is there a faster way than this train?

This is okay, too.

A: One minute.


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No.


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This train is the fastest one.


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B: Ok!


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Thank you!


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A: You're welcome.


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