July 13, 2022
A & B Talk88
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know much does this cost to get in?
A: I don't know, I've never been here. Do you want me to look it up?
B: That would be graet!
A: Gimme a minute. Well, the admission fee is 700 yen per adult, 500 yen per child, and free for children under 3 years old. So you and you are free.
B: Really? Do we look 2 years old?
A: You all definitely don't look 2 years old! But you all can probably get through if you say we're 3! If you persist, though, you could be arrested.
B: That's dangerous. We'll pass then.
Anyways, can we also bring my pet?
A: Oh, that's not written, so ask the staff before you buy the ticket.
B: Okay, thank you!
A: You're welcome.
A & B Talk88
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know how much does thisit costs to get in?
A: I don't know, I've never been here.
Do you want me to look it up?
B: That would be graeat!
A: Gimme a minute.
Well, the admission fee is 700 yen per adult, 500 yen per child, and free for children under 3 years old.
So you and you are free.
B: Really?
Do we look 2 years old?
A: You all definitely don't look 2 years old!
But you all can probably get through if you say we're 3!
If you persisttry too hard, though, you could be arrested.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: That's dangerous.
We'll pass then.
Anyways, can we also bring my pet?
ใธใผ๏ผ
A: Oh, that's not written anywhere, so ask the staff before you buy the tickets.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Okay, thank you!
A: You're welcome.
Feedback
ใใๅบๆฅใพใใ๏ผ
July 14, 2022
ใใใใจใใใใใพใ๏ผ๐โโ๏ธ
|
A: You're welcome. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A & B Talk88 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I want to speak like a native!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Or you can change whatever you want! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
๐ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Excuse me, do you know much does this cost to get in? B: Excuse me, do you know how much |
|
A: I don't know, I've never been here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Do you want me to look it up? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: That would be graet! B: That would be gr |
|
A: Gimme a minute. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Well, the admission fee is 700 yen per adult, 500 yen per child, and free for children under 3 years old. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
So you and you are free. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Really? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Do we look 2 years old? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: You all definitely don't look 2 years old! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
But you all can probably get through if you say we're 3! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
If you persist, though, you could be arrested. If you This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
B: That's dangerous. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
We'll pass then. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Anyways, can we also bring my pet? Anyway ใธใผ๏ผ |
|
A: Oh, that's not written, so ask the staff before you buy the ticket. A: Oh, that's not written anywhere, so ask the staff before you buy the tickets. This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
B: Okay, thank you! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium