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sho

July 13, 2022

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A & B Talk86

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, where can I get information on Himeji Castle?
A: There should be some pamphlets at the information center.
B: Whereโ€™s the information center?
A: There should be one by the ticket counter.
B: In this station?
A: Yes! And thereโ€™s also probably a website in English.
B: Oh, really?
A: Gimme a minute. Look, there you go.
B: Oh, nice.

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A & B Talk86

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, where can I get information on Himeji Castle?

A: There should be some pamphlets at the information center.

B: Whereโ€™s the information center?

A: There should be one by the ticket counter.

B: In this station?

A: Yes!

And thereโ€™s also probably a website in English.

B: Oh, really?

A: Gimme a minute.

Look, there you go.

B: Oh, nice.

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ใพใŸใ‚ˆใๅ‡บๆฅใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

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sho

July 14, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ˜

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mari

July 14, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ˜

ใŠใƒผใ€่Šฑไธธใงใ™๏ผ

B: Excuse me, where can I get information on /about Himeji Castle?

on is not wrong! Just wanted to tell you that you can also use about. It is personal preferences. I think about sounds a bit more formal.

Look, thHere you go.

This is the expression that I would use that sounds a bit more natural.

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Great job๐Ÿคฉ It sounds very conversational.

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sho

July 14, 2022

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Thank you so much!๐Ÿ˜„

A & B Talk86


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Excuse me, where can I get information on Himeji Castle?


B: Excuse me, where can I get information on /about Himeji Castle?

on is not wrong! Just wanted to tell you that you can also use about. It is personal preferences. I think about sounds a bit more formal.

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A: There should be some pamphlets at the information center.


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B: Whereโ€™s the information center?


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A: There should be one by the ticket counter.


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B: In this station?


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A: Yes!


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And thereโ€™s also probably a website in English.


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B: Oh, really?


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A: Gimme a minute.


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Look, there you go.


Look, thHere you go.

This is the expression that I would use that sounds a bit more natural.

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B: Oh, nice.


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