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sho

July 13, 2022

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A & B Talk80

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me. Is Souka station on this map?
A: Japanese route maps are hard to see, right? I don't usually use it, hmm, well, weโ€™re here now. Souka station is right here.
B: Oh, I see. Thank you!

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A & B Talk80

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me.

Is Souka station on this map?

A: Japanese routetrain maps are hard to see, right?

This sounds more natural in the US.

I don't usually use ithem, hmm, well, weโ€™re here now.

We used plural "maps" earlier so we have to use the plural pronoun, "them," here.

Souka station is right here.

B: Oh, I see.

Thank you!

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sho

July 14, 2022

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A & B Talk80


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me.


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Is Souka station on this map?


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A: Japanese route maps are hard to see, right?


A: Japanese routetrain maps are hard to see, right?

This sounds more natural in the US.

I don't usually use it, hmm, well, weโ€™re here now.


I don't usually use ithem, hmm, well, weโ€™re here now.

We used plural "maps" earlier so we have to use the plural pronoun, "them," here.

Souka station is right here.


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B: Oh, I see.


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Thank you!


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