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sho

July 13, 2022

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A & B Talk79

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy this ticket?
A: Sure. I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understand, but I'll give it a shot! So what's wrong?
B: First of all, I can't find the station I want to go to on the fare table. Can you help me find it?
A: Sure, but you can probably buy the ticket you want by telling the station attendant the station you want to go to. Of course, I can also able to help you buy it from the ticket machine. I leave it up to you. Which would you prefer?
B: Oh, I see. Then I'll ask the station attendant. Thank you very much!
A: It was nothing.

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A & B Talk79

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy thisa ticket?

We don't know which specific ticket yet so we use the general article, "a," here.

A: Sure.

I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understandget it right the first time, but I'll give it a shot!

US alternative

So what's wrong?

B: First of all, I can't find the station I want to go to on the fare table.

Can you help me find it?

A: Sure, but you can probably buy the ticket you want by telling the station attendant the station you want to go to.

Of course, I can also able to help you buy it from the ticket machine.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I leave it up to you.

or

Your choice.

or

Whatever you want.

Which would you preferat'll it be?

or

Which would you like?

B: Oh, I see.

Then I'll ask the station attendant.

Thank you very much!

A: It was nothing.

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sho

July 14, 2022

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mari

July 14, 2022

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A & B Talk79


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy this ticket?


B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy thisa ticket?

We don't know which specific ticket yet so we use the general article, "a," here.

A: Sure.


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I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understand, but I'll give it a shot!


I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understandget it right the first time, but I'll give it a shot!

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So what's wrong?


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B: First of all, I can't find the station I want to go to on the fare table.


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Can you help me find it?


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A: Sure, but you can probably buy the ticket you want by telling the station attendant the station you want to go to.


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Of course, I can also able to help you buy it from the ticket machine.


Of course, I can also able to help you buy it from the ticket machine.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I leave it up to you.


I leave it up to you.

or Your choice. or Whatever you want.

Which would you prefer?


Which would you preferat'll it be?

or Which would you like?

B: Oh, I see.


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Then I'll ask the station attendant.


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Thank you very much!


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A: It was nothing.


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