July 13, 2022
A & B Talk76
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: What does it look like?
B: The ticket gate won't open.
A: I see. Do you use a Ic card?
B: Yes.
A: Maybe the balance is insufficient. I think it shows the reason why you can't get out of the ticket gate. So can I ask you to try one more time?
B: Yes. I'll go then, okay?
A: Yes. Okay, your balance is low. You can recharge it there, so let's recharge it and try again. Do you want to charge? Do you want to pay only the difference?
B: Which should I do?
A: That's up to you. If you still plan to take the train, you should recharge it, and if you don't take the train anymore, you should pay the difference.
B: I see. I'll charge it then. Which machine is OK?
A: Um, yes, either one is fine.
B: Okay, I just put it here?
A: Yes. If you press here, it will be in English.
B: Oh, nice. Will it be enough for about 2000 yen.
A: Here is written the amount that is not enough. If you still plan to take the train, it might be OK to put that much in.
B: Okay. Yes! It's done.
A: OK, let's give it a try.
B: Oh, nice. Thank to you. Thank you very much.
A: Good for you. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too.
A & B Talk76
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to dohow?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: What does it look like's going on?
This sounds more natural in the US.
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What's happening?
or
What do you need help with?
B: The ticket gate won't open.
A: I see.
Doid you use an Ic card?
B: Yes.
A: Maybe the balance is insufficienyou don't have enough on it.
What you wrote sounds very formal.
or
Maybe you ran out of money.
or
Maybe you need to recharge it.
I think it shows the reason why you can't get out of the ticket gate.
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So can I ask you toWanna try one more time?
US alternative
B: YesOkay.
or
Sure.
I'll go then, okay?
A: Yesup.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Okay, your balance is low.
You can recharge it over there, so let's recharge it and try again.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Do you want to charge?
Do you want to pay only the difference?
B: Which should I do?
A: That's up to you.
If you still plan to take the train, you should recharge it, and i. If you don't takeneed the train any more, you should pay the difference.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: I see.
I'll recharge it then.
Which machine is OKshould I use?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Um, yesright, either one is fine.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Okay, I just put it here?
A: Yesah.
or
Yup.
If you press here, it wi'll be in English.
US alternative
B: Oh, nice.
Will it be enough for about 2000 yen.?
A: Here is written the amount that iNo, the ticket says it's not enough.
or
Looks like you need more.
If you still plan to take the train, it might be OK to put that much in.
B: Okay.
Yes!
It's done.
A: OK, let's give it a trysee what happens.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Oh, nice.
Thank to you.
Thank you very much.
A: Good for you.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too.
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A: Maybe the balance is insufficient. A: Maybe What you wrote sounds very formal. or Maybe you ran out of money. or Maybe you need to recharge it. |
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I think it shows the reason why you can't get out of the ticket gate. I think it shows the reason why you can't get out US alternative |
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So can I ask you to try one more time?
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Will it be enough for about 2000 yen. Will it be enough for about 2000 yen |
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