July 13, 2022
A & B Talk75
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where it is?
A: Around here, Oh, hmm, that's strange. I thought there's around here.
B: Right?
A: Oh, here it is!
B: Ohh, nice.
A: It's in a very inconspicuous place, right? I'm sorry, the hospitality system in Japan is not well organized.
B: No problem at all. It's all right. Thank you very much.
A: No problem. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too.
A & B Talk75
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where it I can charge this?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Around here,. Oh, hmm, that's strange.
I thought there's was one around here.
B: Right?
A: Oh, here it is!
B: Ohh, nice.
A: It's in a very inconspicuous place, right?like they tried to hide it.
This sounds more natural in the US.
I'm sorry, the hospitality system in Japan is not very well organized.
B: No problem at allworries.
US alternative
It's all right.
Thank you very much.
A: No problem.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too.
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July 14, 2022
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B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where it is?
What do you mean by charge? Because below you mention the hospitality system, which would mean probably a hotel or hostel. Do you mean a place to stay like a hotel? Or somewhere to charge an electric vehicle? Or somewhere to charge your phone? Maybe some more context would make your sentence easier to understand.
I thought there's one around here.
you are just missing the subject (which I said was "one). Otherwise without it, the sentence reads, "I thought there is around here" ( the "what" is missing)
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This is really well written!!๐ Nice job๐ฅณ
July 14, 2022
Ohh, I forgot to write!
B was looking for a place to charge B's IC card.
Anyway, thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ
July 14, 2022
Ohh, I forgot to write! B was looking for a place to charge B's IC card. Anyway, thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ
Ah okay now it makes sense!! But still it was a great piece to read, nice job!
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B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where it is? B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where it is? What do you mean by charge? Because below you mention the hospitality system, which would mean probably a hotel or hostel. Do you mean a place to stay like a hotel? Or somewhere to charge an electric vehicle? Or somewhere to charge your phone? Maybe some more context would make your sentence easier to understand. B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where This sounds more natural in the US. |
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I thought there's around here. I thought there's one around here. you are just missing the subject (which I said was "one). Otherwise without it, the sentence reads, "I thought there is around here" ( the "what" is missing) I thought there |
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A: It's in a very inconspicuous place, right? A: It's This sounds more natural in the US. |
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