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July 13, 2022

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A & B Talk74

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: What does it look like?
B: There's no place to put my ticket.
A: Really? Let's go together.
B: Thanks.
A: Oh, really. There is no place. Sometimes there is a ticket gate where you can't use ticket. Only Ic card.
B: What should I do?
A: You should go to the station staff. Then they may guide you to another ticket gate or do something about it. Would you want me to go with you?
B: That would be helpful.
A: Okay.

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A & B Talk74

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to dohow?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: What does it look like's going on?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: There's no place to put my ticket.

A: Really?

Let's go together.

A: Oh, really.

There is no place.

Sometimes there i's a ticket gate where you can't use a ticket.

US alternative

Only an Ic card.

B: What should I do?

A: You should go to the station staff.

Then they may guidight take you to another ticket gate or do something about it.

US alternative

WouldDo you want me to go with you?

B: That would be helpful.

A: Okay.

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sho

July 14, 2022

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A & B Talk74


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?


B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to dohow?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: What does it look like?


A: What does it look like's going on?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: There's no place to put my ticket.


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A: Really?


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Let's go together.


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B: Thanks.


A: Oh, really.


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There is no place.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes there is a ticket gate where you can't use ticket.


Sometimes there i's a ticket gate where you can't use a ticket.

US alternative

Only Ic card.


Only an Ic card.

B: What should I do?


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A: You should go to the station staff.


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Then they may guide you to another ticket gate or do something about it.


Then they may guidight take you to another ticket gate or do something about it.

US alternative

Would you want me to go with you?


WouldDo you want me to go with you?

B: That would be helpful.


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A: Okay.


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