July 13, 2022
A & B Talk73
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple. Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, then you can go there without changing trains.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Wait, do you have this app?
B: Hmm? No, I don't.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so maybe very useful for you. Check it out, if you want.
B: Thanks. What's the name of it?
A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.
B: Okay, I understand. I'll give it a try.
A: Yes. Have a nice day!
B: Thank you. You too.
A & B Talk73
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.
Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, then you can go there without changing trains.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Wait, do you have this app?
B: Hmm?
No, I don't.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so maybe veryitโd be useful for you.
You need to use โit wouldโ because you are talking about a possibility.
Check it out, if you want.
B: Thanks.
What's the name of it?
A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.
B: Okay, I understand.
I'll give it a try.
A: Yes.
Have a nice day!
B: Thank you.
You too.
July 16, 2022
Thank you so much!๐โโ๏ธ
A & B Talk73
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.
Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Pplatform 2 at sSouka station, then you can go there without changing trains.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Wait, do you have this app?
B: Hmm?
Could also say: pardon?/excuse me?/what's that?
No, I don't.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so mayit might be very useful for you.
Check it out, if you want.
B: Thanks.
What's the name of itit called?
A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.
B: Okay, I understand.
Ok, cool!/ Ok, got it!
I'll give it a try.
A: Yes.
Unnatural to respond with 'yes' here. Try: Hope you find it/ good luck
Have a nice day!
B: Thank you.
You too.
July 14, 2022
Thank you so much!๐โโ๏ธ
A & B Talk73
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.
Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa sStation, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at sSouka station, and then you can goet there without changing trains.
We don't need "the" in front of Platform 2 since it's a specific platform at Asakusa Station. This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Wait, do you have this app?
B: Hmm?
No, I don't.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so mayit could be very useful forto you.
or
It's a navigation app for trains. It's in English, so it could be very useful for you.
Check it out, if you want.
Your sentence is correct. This is a US alternative.
B: Thanks.
What's the name of it?
A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.
B: Okay, I understandgot it.
Your sentence is correct. This is a US alternative.
I'll give it a tryLooks cool. I'll try it.
Your sentence is correct. This is a US alternative.
A: Yes.Awesome
In the US, we wouldn't really reply with, "yes," in this situation. "Awesome," "cool," or even "groovy" can be said.
Have a nice day!
B: Thank you.
You too.
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A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so first you need to change tgo theo Platform 2 at souka station, then you can goet there without changing trains.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it may be very useful for you.
July 14, 2022
Thank you so much!๐โโ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I want to go towhere is the Sensoji temple.?
change "I want to go" to "where is." More direct.
Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, tgo to Platform 2. Then you can goet there without changing trains.
The way this sentence is written I think the conversation is in Souka Station. You don't need to say the name of the station, just the direction. Removing "change" to "go" is more natural in English.
A: It's a train navigation app in English, so it may be very usefulhandy for you.
'handy' is slang for useful. It can be used in place of "very useful".
What's the name of it?it called?
More natural in English.
Feedback
Very interesting to read! I could see this happening in real life! You said your goal was to speak naturally, so I edited for style. :)
July 14, 2022
Thank you so much!!!๐โโ๏ธ
Or you can change whatever you want!
Sounds more natural to reverse these sentences:
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
B: Excuse me, I want to go to Sensoji temple.
Do you know how to get there?
A: The nearest station is Asakusa station, so you need to change to the Platform 2 at souka station, t. Then you can go there witit's a straight shout changing trainsto Asakusa (station).
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Wait, do you have this app?
B: Hmm?
No, I don't.
A: It's a train navigation app. It's in Englisch, so mayit could be very useful forto you.
Check it out, if you want.
B: Thanks.
What's the name of it?
A: There are two, one is called Japan Travel and the other is called Japan Transit.
B: Okay, I understand.
I'll give it a try.
A: Yes.Alright then, I gotta run,
Hhave a nice day!
B: Thank you.
You too.
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