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July 11, 2022

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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



B: Excuse me, which line goes to the Sensouji๏ผŸ
A: Thatโ€™s the Tobu Skytree Line.
Change at Kitasenju and take the train headed for Asakusa, and get off at the final stop. Then you can go to Asakusa.
B: Ok! Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome. Bon voyage!
B: Thanks! Bye.
A: Bye-bye.

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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

More natural.

SeriouslyPlease!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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sho

July 13, 2022

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Thank you!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

A & B Talk70

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignEnglish speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, which line goes to the Sensouji๏ผŸ

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Thatโ€™s the Tobu Skytree Line.

Change at Kitasenju and take the train headed for Asakusa, and get off at the final stop.

Then you can go to Asakusa.

B: Ok!

A: You're welcome.

Bon voyageHave fun!

We hardly ever say, "bon voyage," in the US. "Have fun" is way more common.

B: Thanks!

Bye.

A: Bye-bye.

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ๆ‡ใ‹ใ—ใ„ใชใ‚ใ€‚ใพใŸๆ—ฅๆœฌใซ่กŒใใŸใ„ใจๆ€ใฃใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

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sho

July 12, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๐Ÿ˜ญ
ใพใŸๆ˜ฏ้žๆฅใฆใใ ใ•ใ„๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿคฉ

B: Excuse me, which line goes to the Sensouji๏ผŸ

A: Thatโ€™s would be the Tobu Skytree Line.

Change at Kitasenju and take the train headed forto Asakusa, and get off at the final stop.

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sho

July 12, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿฅฐ

A & B Talk70


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

More natural.

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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SeriouslyPlease!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignEnglish speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, which line goes to the Sensouji๏ผŸ


B: Excuse me, which line goes to the Sensouji๏ผŸ

B: Excuse me, which line goes to the Sensouji๏ผŸ

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Thatโ€™s the Tobu Skytree Line.


A: Thatโ€™s would be the Tobu Skytree Line.

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Change at Kitasenju and take the train headed for Asakusa, and get off at the final stop.


Change at Kitasenju and take the train headed forto Asakusa, and get off at the final stop.

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Then you can go to Asakusa.


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B: Ok!


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Thank you very much.


A: You're welcome.


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Bon voyage!


Bon voyageHave fun!

We hardly ever say, "bon voyage," in the US. "Have fun" is way more common.

B: Thanks!


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Bye.


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A: Bye-bye.


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