July 11, 2022
A & B Talk69
I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know any places to eat nearby?
A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't know. I'm sure there are many places. I'll check it out. What are you in the mood for?
B: What kind of restaurants, for example?
A: I just checked Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on. I think you can find most of them. How much is your budget?
B: Well, about 2,000 yen.
A: I see. Then I'll show you a picture of the stores around here. Here they are. They may have mixed up some different ones.
B: Oh, nice!
A: Can you decide?
B: This place looks nice. Is this fried chicken?
A: This is "Karaage". It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I don't know, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter. Maybe.
B: I see.
A: So what do you want to do? Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes! I'll eat it and see the difference.
A: Nice idea! I'll check the place now. Well, I'm sorry, this place isn't near here. But I'm sure they have everything else. Sorry
B: It's totally alright. Well, Here then!
A: Oh, tempura! Ok! I got it! Well, I'm sorry. This restaurant wasn't close by either. Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choice, I'll make you a dish you want to eat.
B: Okay, haha. Well, here then! Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec, okay! There is!
Wait a minute. There's the place you chose, and there's other places too! Here.
B: Oh, nice. Well, do you guess what flavor is this?
A: Umm, miso, I think. And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
It consists of noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten. The dish is a very popular in Japan.
B: I see. Well, mmm...let me see. This place looks good. I'll go for here.
A: This place? This place is probably miso type. Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me set the app road.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem. Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are! This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: I bet you. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too!
A & B Talk69
I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!
Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignwith English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, do you know any places to eatrestaurants nearby?
Your sentence is correct but this is more how'd we say it in the US.
A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't really know.
US alternative
I'm sure there are manylots of places.
US alternative
I'll check it out.
What are you in the mood for?
B: What kind of restaurants, for example?
A: I just checked for Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on.
This sounds more natural in the US.
I think you can find most of them.
How much isdid your budget want to spend?
We don't usually ask what people's budgets are in the US.
or
How much were you looking to spend?
B: Well, about 2,000 yen.
A: I see.
Then I'llI can show you a pictures of the stores around here.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Here they areyou go.
US alternative
They may havight be mixed up some different ones.
I'm not really sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess at editing it.
B: Oh, nice!
A: Can you decideWhat do you think?
We'd never ask this in the US.
B: This place looks nice.
Is this fried chicken?
A: This is "Karaage".
It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I don't know, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter.
Maybe.
B: I see.
A: So what do you want to do?
Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes!
I'll eattry it and see the differencwhat it's like.
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: NiceGood idea!.
US alternative
I'll check the place nowit out.
US alternative
WellOops, I'm sorry, this place isn't near hereclose by.
US alternative
But I'm sure they have everyre's something else.
I think this is what you're trying to say but I'm not sure.
Sorry
B: It's totally alrightNo worries.
US alternative
Well, Here thenOh, look!
US alternative
A: Oh, tempura!
OkAwesome!
US alternative
I got it!
Well, I'm sorryOops.
US alternative
This restaurant waisn't close by either.
This sentence is present tense.
Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choice, I'll make you a dish you want to eatyou can't find a restaurant, I'll make you something for you.
US alternative
B: Okay, haha.
Well, here thenOh, look!
US alternative
Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec, okay!
There isYeah, that's a ramen place!
US alternative
Wait a minute.
There's the place you chose, and there's are other places too!
Here.
B: Oh, nice.
Well, docan you guess what flavor this this?
Question sentences can be hard but this is the order in which we'd say it.
A: Umm, miso, I think.
And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
It consists ofhas noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten first.
US alternative
Theis dish is a very popular in Japan.
We don't need the "a" article here.
B: I see.
Well, mmm...let me see.
This place looks good.
I'll go for hereit.
or
I'll go there.
A: This place?
This place is probably a miso type.
Here, we need the "a" article because we're talking about one particular restaurant.
Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me setpull up the directions in the app road.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem.
Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are!
This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: I bet youNo problem.
We'd never say, "I bet you," in the US.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too!
Feedback
ใใๅบๆฅใพใใใ
July 13, 2022
ใใใใจใใใใใพใ๏ผ๏ผ
ๅฉใใใพใ๏ผ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't know.
I'm sure there are many placesa lot.
I'll check it out.
What are you in the mood for?
B: WLike what kind of restaurants, for example?
A: I just checkedfound some Italian restaurants, and a Japanese place with sushi, ramen, and yakitori, and so on.
I think you can find most of them.
How much iWhat's your budget?
B: Well, about 2,000 yen.
A: I see.
Then I'll show you asome pictures of the storerestaurants around here.
Here they are.
They may have mixed up some different ones.
This sentence is unclear. Maybe you meant something like this:
"They're in no particular order"
or
"Some of the pictures might show other restaurants"
B: Oh, nice!
A: Can you decideWhat do you think?
The sentence sounds impatient and slightly rude as written, e.g. "Can you hurry up?"
B: This place looks nice.
Is this fried chicken?
A: This iIt's "Karaage".
It's like fried chicken.
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I don't know'm not sure, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter.
"I don't know" sounds to me like the speaker has no idea at all, but the speaker seems to have an idea of what karaage is.
A: So what do you want to do?
Go for "Karaage"?
B: Yes!
I'll eattry it and see if I can tell the difference.
A: NiceGood idea!
I'll check the placad over there now.
Well, I'm sorry, this place isn't near hereHmm, the restaurant is pretty far away.
But I'm sure they have everyre's something elcloser.
Ambiguous as written
Sorry
B: It's totally alright.
Well, Hhere then!
A: Oh, tempura!
Ok!
I got it!
WellOops, I'm sorry.
This restaurant waisn't close by either.
Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choicIf we can't find anything close, I'll make you a dish you actually want to eat.
B: Okay, haha.
Well, here then!
Ramen!
A: Hold on a sec, okay!
There it is!
Wait a minute.
There's the place you chose, and there's other places too!
Here.
B: Oh, nice.
Well, do you guess what flavor is this?
A: Umm, miso, I think.
And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen.
B: Tsukemen?
It consist's of noodles which are dipped in a separateanother bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten.
Consists is correct but sounds a little too formal for the conversation. It would fit in well on a Wikipedia entry, for example.
The dish is aIt's very popular in Japan.
B: I see.
Well, mhmm... let me see.
This place looks good.
I'll go for here.
A: This place?
This place is probably miso typejust serves miso.
Is this okay?
B: Yes.
A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me set the app roadopen it in maps.
B: Oh, thanks!
A: No problem.
Okay, let's go.
B: Isn't it right there?
A: Uh, no, it's not.
Here we are!
This is it.
B: Thank you very much!
A: I bet you.No problem!
Unclear
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too!
July 12, 2022
Thank you so much!!๐โโ๏ธ
I've learned a lot!!โ๏ธ
|
Well, mmm...let me see. Well, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
This place looks good. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I'll go for here. I'll go I'll go for or I'll go there. |
|
A: This place? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Ramen! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: Hold on a sec, okay! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
There is! There it is!
US alternative |
|
Wait a minute. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A & B Talk69 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I want to speak like a native!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
|
|
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Or you can change whatever you want! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
๐ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners. Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk |
|
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Excuse me, do you know any places to eat nearby? B: Excuse me, do you know any Your sentence is correct but this is more how'd we say it in the US. |
|
A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't know. A: A: Well, I don't live here, so I don't really know. US alternative |
|
I'm sure there are many places. I'm sure there are I'm sure there are US alternative |
|
I'll check it out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
What are you in the mood for? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: What kind of restaurants, for example? B: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: I just checked Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on. A: I just A: I just checked for Italian restaurants, sushi, ramen, yakitori, and so on. This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
I think you can find most of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
How much is your budget?
How much We don't usually ask what people's budgets are in the US. or How much were you looking to spend? |
|
B: Well, about 2,000 yen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Then I'll show you a picture of the stores around here. Then I'll show you
This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
Here they are. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Here US alternative |
|
They may have mixed up some different ones. They may have mixed up some different ones. This sentence is unclear. Maybe you meant something like this: "They're in no particular order" or "Some of the pictures might show other restaurants" They m I'm not really sure what you're trying to say here so this is my best guess at editing it. |
|
B: Oh, nice! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: Can you decide? A: The sentence sounds impatient and slightly rude as written, e.g. "Can you hurry up?" A: We'd never ask this in the US. |
|
B: This place looks nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Is this fried chicken? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: This is "Karaage". A: This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It's like fried chicken. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: What's the difference? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: Well, I don't know, but I've heard that karaage is seasoned by marinating the meat in the sauce, while fried chicken is seasoned by the batter. A: Well, I "I don't know" sounds to me like the speaker has no idea at all, but the speaker seems to have an idea of what karaage is. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Maybe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: So what do you want to do? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Go for "Karaage"? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Yes! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I'll eat it and see the difference. I'll I'll This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
A: Nice idea! A: A: US alternative |
|
I'll check the place now. I'll I'll check US alternative |
|
Well, I'm sorry, this place isn't near here.
US alternative |
|
But I'm sure they have everything else. But I'm sure the Ambiguous as written But I'm sure the I think this is what you're trying to say but I'm not sure. |
|
Sorry This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: It's totally alright. This sentence has been marked as perfect! B: US alternative |
|
Well, Here then! Well,
US alternative |
|
A: Oh, tempura! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Ok! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
US alternative |
|
I got it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Well, I'm sorry.
US alternative |
|
This restaurant wasn't close by either. This restaurant This restaurant This sentence is present tense. |
|
Next time, if there is no restaurant of your choice, I'll make you a dish you want to eat.
Next time, if US alternative |
|
B: Okay, haha. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Well, here then! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
US alternative |
|
There's the place you chose, and there's other places too! This sentence has been marked as perfect! There's the place you chose, and there |
|
Here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Oh, nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Well, do you guess what flavor is this? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Well, Question sentences can be hard but this is the order in which we'd say it. |
|
A: Umm, miso, I think. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
And this one is probably Tonkotsu flavor, and this one is Tsukemen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Tsukemen? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It consists of noodles which are dipped in a separate bowl of soup or broth, before being eaten. It Consists is correct but sounds a little too formal for the conversation. It would fit in well on a Wikipedia entry, for example. It US alternative |
|
The dish is a very popular in Japan.
Th We don't need the "a" article here. |
|
B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
This place is probably miso type. This place This place is probably a miso type. Here, we need the "a" article because we're talking about one particular restaurant. |
|
Is this okay? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Yes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me set the app road. A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let A: Ok, wait a minute, I'll show you the way, let me This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
B: Oh, thanks! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: No problem. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Okay, let's go. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Isn't it right there? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: Uh, no, it's not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Here we are! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
This is it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Thank you very much! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A: I bet you. A: Unclear A: We'd never say, "I bet you," in the US. |
|
Have a nice day! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
B: Thanks! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
You too! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium