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sho

July 11, 2022

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A & B Talk68

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


A: How're you doing? Are you okay?
B: Actually, I'm not feeling well. Is there a hospital around here?
A: I don't know, but I'm going to find out right now! What are your symptoms?
B: I'm having trouble breathing.
A: Shouldn't you call an ambulance?
B: No, probably not that bad.
A: Really? Then I'll call a cab. I'll look for a hospital in the meantime.
B: Yes, please.
A: Then be patient a little longer.
B: Ok.

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A & B Talk68

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignwith other English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: How're you doing?

Are you okay?

B: Actually, I'm not feeling wellgood.

ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใซใ‚‚ใ‚ˆใใฟใ‚‰ใ‚ŒใŸ้–“้•ใˆใงใ™ใ€‚ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ใฎใฏใ€ใ€Œๆฐ—ๅˆ†ใŒๆ‚ชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใฏใ€ใ€Œ่งฆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅ‡บๆฅใชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

Is there a hospital around here?

A: I don't know, but I'm going to find out right now!

What are your symptoms's wrong?

US alternative

B: I'm having trouble breathing.

A: Shouldn't you call an ambulance?

B: No, it's probably not that bad.

A: Really?

Then I'll call a cab.

I'll look for a hospital in the meantime, too.

US alternative

B: Yes, please.

A: Then be patient a little longHang in there.

This is slang to say the same thing but it sounds kinder.

B: Ok.

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sho

July 13, 2022

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B: Actually, I'm not feeling wellgood.

You mean this sentence mean that there are two meanings?

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mari

July 13, 2022

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You mean this sentence mean that there are two meanings?

ใ™ใฟใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚้–“้•ใฃใฆใ—ใพใฃใฆใ™ใฟใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ๆญฃใ—ใ„ๆ–‡ใฏใ“ใ‚Œใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใซใ‚‚ใ‚ˆใใฟใ‚‰ใ‚ŒใŸ้–“้•ใˆใงใ™ใ€‚ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ใฎใฏใ€ใ€Œๆฐ—ๅˆ†ใŒๆ‚ชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ€ŒI'm not feeling *well*ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใฏใ€ใ€Œ่งฆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅ‡บๆฅใชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

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sho

July 13, 2022

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ใ™ใฟใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚้–“้•ใฃใฆใ—ใพใฃใฆใ™ใฟใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚ๆญฃใ—ใ„ๆ–‡ใฏใ“ใ‚Œใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใซใ‚‚ใ‚ˆใใฟใ‚‰ใ‚ŒใŸ้–“้•ใˆใงใ™ใ€‚ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ใฎใฏใ€ใ€Œๆฐ—ๅˆ†ใŒๆ‚ชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ€ŒI'm not feeling *well*ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใฏใ€ใ€Œ่งฆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅ‡บๆฅใชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

ใใ†ใชใ‚“ใงใ™ใญ๏ผ๏ผ
ใ™ใ”ใ„ๅ‹‰ๅผทใซใชใ‚Šใพใ™๏ผโœ๏ธ
ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

B: No, it's probably not that bad.

A: Then be patient a little longer.

Sounds a bit awkward. You could also say: "then just wait for a bit"

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sho

July 12, 2022

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Thank you!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignwith other English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: How're you doing?


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Are you okay?


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B: Actually, I'm not feeling well.


B: Actually, I'm not feeling wellgood.

ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใซใ‚‚ใ‚ˆใใฟใ‚‰ใ‚ŒใŸ้–“้•ใˆใงใ™ใ€‚ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ใฎใฏใ€ใ€Œๆฐ—ๅˆ†ใŒๆ‚ชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใฏใ€ใ€Œ่งฆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅ‡บๆฅใชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

Is there a hospital around here?


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A: I don't know, but I'm going to find out right now!


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What are your symptoms?


What are your symptoms's wrong?

US alternative

B: I'm having trouble breathing.


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A: Shouldn't you call an ambulance?


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B: No, probably not that bad.


B: No, it's probably not that bad.

B: No, it's probably not that bad.

A: Really?


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Then I'll call a cab.


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I'll look for a hospital in the meantime.


I'll look for a hospital in the meantime, too.

US alternative

B: Yes, please.


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A: Then be patient a little longer.


A: Then be patient a little longer.

Sounds a bit awkward. You could also say: "then just wait for a bit"

A: Then be patient a little longHang in there.

This is slang to say the same thing but it sounds kinder.

B: Ok.


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