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sho

July 11, 2022

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A & B Talk67

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Are you OK? Can I help you in any way?
B: Actually, I'm not feeling well.
A: Omg, do you want to go to the hospital?
B: I want to go.
A: What are your symptoms?
B: I have heart palpitations.
A: Omg, are your symptoms severe enough to need an ambulance?
B: No, I don't think so. But I feel pretty bad.
A: Omg, but I don't know the cause yet, I think you'd better go see a Internal Department. But I'll call a cab first. In the meantime, I'll look hospitals up, okay?
B: Ok. Thanks.
A: A bit far...can you hold out for 20-30 minutes?
B: I'll try my best.
A: Okay.
Oh, here comes the cab. Can you stand up slowly?
B: Yeah.
A: Then let's stand up slowly. Take your time.
B: Thanks.
A: If you wanna throw up, you can use this bag.
B: Ok. Thanks.

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A & B Talk67

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignspeak with other English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Are you OK?

Can I help you in any wayDo you need help?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Actually, I'm not feeling wellgood.

ๅŒใ˜ๆทปๅ‰Šใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใซใ‚‚ใ‚ˆใใฟใ‚‰ใ‚ŒใŸ้–“้•ใˆใงใ™ใ€‚ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ใฎใฏใ€ใ€Œๆฐ—ๅˆ†ใŒๆ‚ชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใฏใ€ใ€Œ่งฆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅ‡บๆฅใชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

A: Omg, do you want to go to thea hospital?

We don't know which hospital yet, so we use the article "a."

B: I want to goYeah, that's a good idea.

US alternative

A: What are your symptomsexactly is going on?

US alternative

B: I have heart palpitations.

A: Omg, are your symptoms severe enough to needwe should call an ambulance?!

This is what I would say if someone told me that they were experiencing heart palpitations.

B: No, I don't think so.

But I feel pretty bad.

A: Omg, but I don't know the cause yet, I think you'd better go see a Internal DepartmentI think you'd better go to a hospital asap.

This is what I would say if someone told me that they were experiencing heart palpitations.

But I'll call a cab first.

In the meantime, I'll look for the closest hospitals up, okay?

or

I'll also look for the closest hospital, okay?

B: Ok. Thanks.

A: AIt's a bit far ... can you hold outn for 20-30 minutes?

US alternative

B: I'll try my best.

A: Okay.

Oh, here comes the cab.

Can you stand up slowly?

B: Yeah.

A: Then let's stand up slowlOkay.

US alternative

Take your time.

B: Thanks.

A: If you wanna throw up, you can use this bag.

B: Ok.

Thanks.

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sho

July 13, 2022

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ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

A: Are you OK?

A: Omg, dDo you wantneed to go to the hospital?

"omg" is only used in informal texts. It would never be spoken out loud, except maybe sarcastically.

B: I want to gthink so.

Presumably the speaker does not want to go to the hospital but is rather compelled by illness.

A: What are your symptoms?

B: I have heart palpitations.

A: Omg, are your symptoms severe enough to needShould I call an ambulance?

B: No, I don't think so.

But I feel pretty bad.

A: Omg, but I don't knowIt's tough to tell the cause yet, I think you'd better go see a Internal Departmendoctor/physician/cardiologist.

But I'll call a cab first.

In the meantime, I'll look hospitals up, okay?

B: Ok. Thanks.

A: AThe nearest one is a bit far...can you hold out for 20-30 minutes?

B: I'll try my best.

A: Okay.

Oh, here comes the cab.

Can you stand up slowly?

B: Yeah.

A: Then let's stand up slowlydo it.

Take your time.

B: Thanks.

A: If you wanna throw up, you can use this bag.

B: Ok.

Thanks.

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sho

July 12, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I've learned a lot!โœ๏ธ

A & B Talk67


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignspeak with other English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: Are you OK?


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Can I help you in any way?


Can I help you in any wayDo you need help?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Actually, I'm not feeling well.


B: Actually, I'm not feeling wellgood.

ๅŒใ˜ๆทปๅ‰Šใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ‚ขใƒกใƒชใ‚ซไบบใซใ‚‚ใ‚ˆใใฟใ‚‰ใ‚ŒใŸ้–“้•ใˆใงใ™ใ€‚ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ใฎใฏใ€ใ€Œๆฐ—ๅˆ†ใŒๆ‚ชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚ ใ€ŒI'm not feeling goodใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใฏใ€ใ€Œ่งฆใ‚‹ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใพใ‚Šๅ‡บๆฅใชใ„ใ€ใจใ„ใ†ๆ„ๅ‘ณใงใ™ใ€‚

A: Omg, do you want to go to the hospital?


A: Omg, dDo you wantneed to go to the hospital?

"omg" is only used in informal texts. It would never be spoken out loud, except maybe sarcastically.

A: Omg, do you want to go to thea hospital?

We don't know which hospital yet, so we use the article "a."

B: I want to go.


B: I want to gthink so.

Presumably the speaker does not want to go to the hospital but is rather compelled by illness.

B: I want to goYeah, that's a good idea.

US alternative

A: What are your symptoms?


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A: What are your symptomsexactly is going on?

US alternative

B: I have heart palpitations.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Omg, are your symptoms severe enough to need an ambulance?


A: Omg, are your symptoms severe enough to needShould I call an ambulance?

A: Omg, are your symptoms severe enough to needwe should call an ambulance?!

This is what I would say if someone told me that they were experiencing heart palpitations.

B: No, I don't think so.


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But I feel pretty bad.


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A: Omg, but I don't know the cause yet, I think you'd better go see a Internal Department.


A: Omg, but I don't knowIt's tough to tell the cause yet, I think you'd better go see a Internal Departmendoctor/physician/cardiologist.

A: Omg, but I don't know the cause yet, I think you'd better go see a Internal DepartmentI think you'd better go to a hospital asap.

This is what I would say if someone told me that they were experiencing heart palpitations.

But I'll call a cab first.


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In the meantime, I'll look hospitals up, okay?


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In the meantime, I'll look for the closest hospitals up, okay?

or I'll also look for the closest hospital, okay?

B: Ok. Thanks.


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A: A bit far...can you hold out for 20-30 minutes?


A: AThe nearest one is a bit far...can you hold out for 20-30 minutes?

A: AIt's a bit far ... can you hold outn for 20-30 minutes?

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B: I'll try my best.


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A: Okay.


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Oh, here comes the cab.


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Can you stand up slowly?


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B: Yeah.


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A: Then let's stand up slowly.


A: Then let's stand up slowlydo it.

A: Then let's stand up slowlOkay.

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Take your time.


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B: Thanks.


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A: If you wanna throw up, you can use this bag.


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B: Ok.


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Thanks.


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