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July 11, 2022

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A & B Talk60

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, do you know is there free wi-fi around here?
A: Uh, sorry, I don't know. I don't usually use free wi-fi. I can look it up if you want.
B: If you can, I'd appreciate it!
A: I think there is an app for that...Oh, okay. There is.
B: Oh, nice.
A: Let's see, do you wanna go to the closest one? Or do you have a particular place you wanna go?
B: The closest one.
A: Then maybe I guess a convenience store and McDonald's and things like that, but there seems to be a lot of them from here.
B: Where's this convenience store?
A: It's close by, so I'll take you there if you like.
B: Oh, thank you very much!
A: No problem.


ใƒผใƒผ5 minutes later
A: This is it.
B: Oh, okay. By the way, do you know the password?
A: Oh, true. Let me look it up.
B: Thanks.
A: Well, oh, sorry. It seems you have to download this store's app and register as a member. From what I just browsed, it looks like you have to do something similar for other convenience stores, McDonald's and things like that. If you like, I'll find a place where you don't have to register.
B: No worries. I'm registering now. Is that app the name of this store?
A: I guess so.
B: Is this it?
A: Yeah, I think so.
B: Okay. Wait a minute.
A: Sure.
B: What does this say?
A: Oh, you have to enter your address and all that. If you like I look for another store? I checked just a moment ago, and it seems that some stores allow you to register as a member just by entering your e-mail address.
B: No problem, it's no biggie. What does this say?
A: Oh, no, you can't. You have to type in the name of the prefecture for this one. So if you have an overseas address, you can't register.
B: Oh my gosh. Then Is that place you mentioned just now close by? Where you can register with just an email address.
A: I think it's close. But if you go there and can't do it, that's too bad, so why don't you try to see if you can register here?
B: Letโ€™s go with that. So what store app should I download?
A: Oh, wait a minute, oh, it says you have to go to that store, let's go there once.
B: Okay.

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A & B Talk60

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, do you know isf there's free wi-fi around here?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Uh, sorry, I don't know.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I don't usually use free wi-fi.

I can look it up if you want.

B: If you can, I'd appreciate it!

A: I think there i's an app for that...Oh, okay.

We contract a lot of words in the US.

There is.

B: Oh, nice.

A: Let's see, do you wanna go to the closest one?

Or do you have a particular place you wanna go?

B: The closest one.

A: Then maybe I guess a convenience store andor a McDonald's, and things like that, but there seems to be a lot of them faromund here.

ๆ—ฅๆœฌ่ชžใงใ€ใ€Œใชใฉใ€ใฏๅคงๆŠตไฝฟใ„ใพใ—ใŸใŒใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใงใ‚ใพใ‚Šไฝฟใ„ใพใ›ใ‚“ใงใ—ใŸใ€‚

B: Where's thise convenience store?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: It's close by, so I'll take you there if you like.

B: Oh, thank you very much!

A: No problem.

ใƒผใƒผ5 minutes later

A: This is it.

B: Oh, okay.

By the way, do you know the password?

A: Oh, trueright.

US alternative

Let me look it up.

B: Thanks.

A: Well, oh, sorry.

It seems you have to download this store's app and register as a member.

From what I just browseread, it looks like you have to do sothe same thing similar forfor the other convenience stores, McDonald's, and things like thatwhatever.

This sounds more natural in the US.

If you like, I'll find a place where you don't have to register.

B: No worries.

I'm registering now.

Is that app the name of this store?

A: I guess so.

B: Is this it?

A: Yeah, I think so.

B: Okay.

Wait a minute.

A: Sure.

B: What does this say?

A: Oh, you have to enter your address and all that.

If you like, I can look for another store?

This sounds more natural in the US.

I checked just a momentinute ago, and it seems thatlooks like some stores allowlet you to register as a member just by entering your e-mail address.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: No problem, it's no biggie.

What does this say?

A: Oh, no, you can't.

You have to type in the name of the prefecture for this one.

So if you have an overseas address, you can't register.

B: Oh my gosh.

Then Iis that place you mentioned just now close by?

Where you can register with just an email address.

A: I think it's close.

But if you go there and can't do it, that's too bad, so why don't you try to see if you can register here?

B: Letโ€™s go with that.

So what store app should I download?

A: Oh, wait a minute, oh, it says you have to go to that store, let's go there once.

B: Okay.

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sho

July 13, 2022

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ๅŠฉใ‹ใ‚Šใพใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

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A & B Talk60


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me.


A: Hi.


B: Hey.


May I ask you a question?


A: Sure.


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What's up?


B: Do you know is there free wi-fi around here?


A: Uh, sorry, I don't know.


A: Uh, sorry, I don't know.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I don't usually use free wi-fi.


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I can look it up if you want.


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B: If you can, I'd appreciate it!


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A: I think there is an app for that...Oh, okay.


A: I think there i's an app for that...Oh, okay.

We contract a lot of words in the US.

There is.


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B: Oh, nice.


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A: Let's see, do you wanna go to the closest one?


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Or do you have a particular place you wanna go?


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B: The closest one.


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A: Then maybe I guess a convenience store and McDonald's and things like that, but there seems to be a lot of them from here.


A: Then maybe I guess a convenience store andor a McDonald's, and things like that, but there seems to be a lot of them faromund here.

ๆ—ฅๆœฌ่ชžใงใ€ใ€Œใชใฉใ€ใฏๅคงๆŠตไฝฟใ„ใพใ—ใŸใŒใ€่‹ฑ่ชžใงใ‚ใพใ‚Šไฝฟใ„ใพใ›ใ‚“ใงใ—ใŸใ€‚

B: Where's this convenience store?


B: Where's thise convenience store?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: It's close by, so I'll take you there if you like.


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B: Oh, thank you very much!


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A: No problem.


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ใƒผใƒผ5 minutes later


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A: This is it.


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B: Oh, okay.


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By the way, do you know the password?


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A: Oh, true.


A: Oh, trueright.

US alternative

Let me look it up.


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B: Thanks.


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A: Well, oh, sorry.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It seems you have to download this store's app and register as a member.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

From what I just browsed, it looks like you have to do something similar for other convenience stores, McDonald's and things like that.


From what I just browseread, it looks like you have to do sothe same thing similar forfor the other convenience stores, McDonald's, and things like thatwhatever.

This sounds more natural in the US.

If you like, I'll find a place where you don't have to register.


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B: No worries.


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I'm registering now.


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Is that app the name of this store?


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A: I guess so.


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B: Is this it?


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A: Yeah, I think so.


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B: Okay.


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Wait a minute.


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A: Sure.


B: What does this say?


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A: Oh, you have to enter your address and all that.


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If you like I look for another store?


If you like, I can look for another store?

This sounds more natural in the US.

I checked just a moment ago, and it seems that some stores allow you to register as a member just by entering your e-mail address.


I checked just a momentinute ago, and it seems thatlooks like some stores allowlet you to register as a member just by entering your e-mail address.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: No problem, it's no biggie.


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What does this say?


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A: Oh, no, you can't.


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You have to type in the name of the prefecture for this one.


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So if you have an overseas address, you can't register.


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B: Oh my gosh.


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Then Is that place you mentioned just now close by?


Then Iis that place you mentioned just now close by?

Where you can register with just an email address.


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A: I think it's close.


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But if you go there and can't do it, that's too bad, so why don't you try to see if you can register here?


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B: Letโ€™s go with that.


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So what store app should I download?


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A: Oh, wait a minute, oh, it says you have to go to that store, let's go there once.


A: Oh, wait a minute, oh, it says you have to go to that store, let's go there once.

B: Okay.


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B: Excuse me, do you know is there free wi-fi around here?


B: Excuse me, do you know isf there's free wi-fi around here?

This sounds more natural in the US.

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