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July 11, 2022

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A & B Talk59

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, do you have a minute?
A: Yes, can I help you?
B: Do you know how to get to C university?
A: Sorry. I'm a stranger here, so I have no idea, but if you want, I'll just look it up?
B: That would be great.
A: Okay. Wait a minute.
B: Yes.
A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there. The best way to get there seems to be by cab, but we don't see it aroud here, right?
B: Yeah, I haven't seen any cabs.
A: I guess you should look for a bus then. If you have time, I can help you find a bus you get on, but if you don't have time, you'd rather call a cab. It will cost you money though. Oh, wait a minute. I'll check the app to see if a cab is nearby.
B: How much does it cost to take a cab?
A: Well, I guess the total is about 2,500 to 3,000 yen. If the app says 2000 yen, the pick-up fee is different depending on the company, some are free, but I guess the most expensive is about 500 yen.
B: What is the pick-up fee?
A: You can tell them through the app or by phone and they can come pick you up.
B: That's a nice feature. By the way, how much for a bus?
A: Let's see. I guess I can't probably find about that. Oh, wait, maybe can find it.
B: Please. I hope so.
A: Oh, let's see... 210 yen.
B: Oh, that's so low.
A: Which one do you want? By the way, I just checked and a cab will take about 5 to 10 minutes to get here.
B: Anyway, what and what are the candidates?
A: Find a bus stop or call a cab, right?
B: Oh, I see. Okay. Iโ€™ve made up my mind. I decided I will take a cab. The cab will be here in about 10 minutes, right?
A: If the roads were quiet. And if the cab hadn't been taken by someone else yet. So luck also plays a part.
B: I see. But if I can't find a bus I will waste my time, so I wanna take a cab. I will trust my luck. So can I ask you to call a cab here?
A: Okay. Gimme a minute.
Okay. Got it. If the traffic is light, it says it would come in about 10 minutes.
B: Okay. Thanks.

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A & B Talk59

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, do you have a minute?

A: Yes, canmay I help you?

B: Do you know how to get to C university?

A: Sorry, no.

I'm a strangernot from around here, so I have no idea, but if you want, I'll just can look it up?.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: That would be great.

A: Okay.

Wait a minuteHold on a sec ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: YesUh huh.

This is slang in the US but we use it all the time.

A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there.

The best way to get there seems to be by cab, but we don't see itany around here, right?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yeah, I haven't seen any cabs.

A: I guess you should look for a bus then.

If you have time, I can help you find a bus you get on, but if you don't have time, you'd rather, you should call a cab.

This sounds more natural in the US.

It will cost you moneymight be expensive though.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Oh, wait a minute.

I'll check the app to see if a cab is nearby.

B: How much does it cost to take a cab?

A: Well, I guess the total is aboutwill be around 2,500 to 3,000 yen.

US alternative

If the app says 2000 yen, the pick-up fee is different depending on the company, some are free, but I guess the most expensive is about 500 yen.

B: What is the pick-up fee?

A: You can tell them through the app or by phone and they can come pick you up.

B: That's a nice feature.

By the way, how much for a bus?

A: Let's see.

I guess I can't probably find about thait's not there. I can't seem to find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Oh, wait, maybe I can find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: PleaseAwesome!.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I hope so.

A: Oh, let's see... 210 yen.

B: Oh, that's so lowcheap.

A: Which one do you want?

By the way, I just checked and a cab will take about 5 to 10 minutes to get here.

B: Anyway, what and what are the candidatesre the choices again?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Find a bus stop or call a cab, right?

B: Oh, I see.

Okay.

Iโ€™ve made up my mindLet's see ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

I decided I wi'll take a cab.

This sounds more natural in the US.

The cab will be here in about 10 minutes, right?

A: If the roads were quietre's no traffic, yeah.

Slangy US alternative

And if the cab hadsn't been taken by someone else yet.

So luck also plays a partit depends on luck.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: I see.

But if I can't find a bus, I wi'll waste my time, so I wanna take a cab.

I will trust myLet's see if I'm lucky.

This sounds more natural in the US.

So can I ask you to call a cab here?

A: Okay.

Gimme a minute.

Got it.

If the traffic is light, it says it would com'll be here in about 10 minutes.

B: Okay.

Thanks.

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July 13, 2022

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mari

July 13, 2022

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Iโ€™ve made up my mind.


Iโ€™ve made up my mindLet's see ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Yes, can I help you?


A: Yes, canmay I help you?

Okay.


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A & B Talk59


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me.


A: Hi.


B: Hey.


Do you have a minute?


A: Yeah, what's up?


B: Do you know how to get to C university?


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A: Sorry.


A: Sorry, no.

I'm a stranger here, so I have no idea, but if you want, I'll just look it up?


I'm a strangernot from around here, so I have no idea, but if you want, I'll just can look it up?.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: That would be great.


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A: Okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Wait a minute.


Wait a minuteHold on a sec ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yes.


B: YesUh huh.

This is slang in the US but we use it all the time.

A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there.


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The best way to get there seems to be by cab, but we don't see it aroud here, right?


The best way to get there seems to be by cab, but we don't see itany around here, right?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yeah, I haven't seen any cabs.


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A: I guess you should look for a bus then.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you have time, I can help you find a bus you get on, but if you don't have time, you'd rather call a cab.


If you have time, I can help you find a bus you get on, but if you don't have time, you'd rather, you should call a cab.

This sounds more natural in the US.

It will cost you money though.


It will cost you moneymight be expensive though.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Oh, wait a minute.


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I'll check the app to see if a cab is nearby.


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B: How much does it cost to take a cab?


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A: Well, I guess the total is about 2,500 to 3,000 yen.


A: Well, I guess the total is aboutwill be around 2,500 to 3,000 yen.

US alternative

If the app says 2000 yen, the pick-up fee is different depending on the company, some are free, but I guess the most expensive is about 500 yen.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: What is the pick-up fee?


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A: You can tell them through the app or by phone and they can come pick you up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: That's a nice feature.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By the way, how much for a bus?


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A: Let's see.


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I guess I can't probably find about that.


I guess I can't probably find about thait's not there. I can't seem to find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Oh, wait, maybe can find it.


Oh, wait, maybe I can find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Please.


B: PleaseAwesome!.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I hope so.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Oh, let's see... 210 yen.


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B: Oh, that's so low.


B: Oh, that's so lowcheap.

A: Which one do you want?


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By the way, I just checked and a cab will take about 5 to 10 minutes to get here.


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B: Anyway, what and what are the candidates?


B: Anyway, what and what are the candidatesre the choices again?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Find a bus stop or call a cab, right?


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B: Oh, I see.


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I decided I will take a cab.


I decided I wi'll take a cab.

This sounds more natural in the US.

The cab will be here in about 10 minutes, right?


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A: If the roads were quiet.


A: If the roads were quietre's no traffic, yeah.

Slangy US alternative

And if the cab hadn't been taken by someone else yet.


And if the cab hadsn't been taken by someone else yet.

So luck also plays a part.


So luck also plays a partit depends on luck.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: I see.


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But if I can't find a bus I will waste my time, so I wanna take a cab.


But if I can't find a bus, I wi'll waste my time, so I wanna take a cab.

I will trust my luck.


I will trust myLet's see if I'm lucky.

This sounds more natural in the US.

So can I ask you to call a cab here?


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A: Okay.


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Gimme a minute.


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Okay.


Got it.


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If the traffic is light, it says it would come in about 10 minutes.


If the traffic is light, it says it would com'll be here in about 10 minutes.

B: Okay.


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Thanks.


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B: Excuse me, do you have a minute?


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