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July 11, 2022

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A & B Talk57

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, do you know how to get to C university?
A: Sorry. I'm a stranger here, so I have no idea, but if you like I'll just look it up?
B: Please.
A: Okay. Wait a minute.
B: Of course.
A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there, but itโ€™s probably best to take a cab over there. But if you wanna go the lowest cost, you might wanna take a bus, although it might be a bit of a walk.
B: Does it look like I can't only walk there?
A: Well, it takes time, but you can walk there. The app says an hour and 20 minutes on foot.
B: Hmm, how long does it say it takes by bus?
A: 20 minutes. But I don't know when the bus is coming, so that adds to the wait time. I would say that in a place like this, I guess the buses usually come every 20 to 30 minutes or so. But it depends on the time of the day. And traffic conditions and things like that. So I think the fastest and most reliable way is by cab over there. But if you still have time, would you like me to find out when the buses are coming? I don't know if you can find out though.
B: Oh, that would be helpful.
A: Okay. Wait a minute.
B: Of course.
A: Hmmm, I can't find the timetable on my phone. But I find where the bus stop is that you should take, so let's go there.
B: Okay.

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A & B Talk57

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, do you know how to get to C university?

A: Sorry, no, I don't.

Alternative

I'm a strangernew here, so I have no idea, but, if you'd like, I'll just can look it up?.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Please.That'd be great! Thanks!

This is more common in the US.

A: Okay.

Wait a minuteHold on a sec ...

Alternative

B: Of course.

We can say nothing here.

A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there, but itโ€™s probably best to take a cab over there.

This is okay, too.

But if you wanna go the lowest costt the cheapest way, you might wanna take a bus, although it might be a bit of a walk.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Does it look like I can't only walk the whole walky there?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Well, it'll takes time longer, but you can walk there.

This sounds more natural in the US.

The app says walking will take an hour and 20 minutes on foot.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Hmm, how long does it say it takes by bus?

A: 20 minutes.

But I don't know when the bus is coming, so that adds to the wait time.

I would say that in a place like this, I guess the buses usually come every 20 to 30 minutes or so.

But it depends on the time of the day.

And traffic conditions and things like that.

So I think the fastest and most reliable way is by cab over there.

But if you still have time, would you like me to find out when the buses are coming?

I don't know if you can find out though.

B: Oh, that would be helpful.

A: Okay.

WaiJust a minutesec ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Of course.

It's okay to say nothing here.

A: Hmmm, I can't find the timetable on my phone.

But I can find where the bus stop is that you should take, so let's go there.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Okay.

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sho

July 13, 2022

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Wait a minute.


WaiJust a minutesec ...

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Of course.


B: Of course.

It's okay to say nothing here.

A: Hmmm, I can't find the timetable on my phone.


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me.


A: Hi.


B: Hey.


Do you have a minute?


A: Yeah, what's up?


B: Do you know how to get to C university?


A: Sorry.


A: Sorry, no, I don't.

Alternative

I'm a stranger here, so I have no idea, but if you like I'll just look it up?


I'm a strangernew here, so I have no idea, but, if you'd like, I'll just can look it up?.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Please.


B: Please.That'd be great! Thanks!

This is more common in the US.

A: Okay.


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Wait a minute.


Wait a minuteHold on a sec ...

Alternative

B: Of course.


B: Of course.

We can say nothing here.

A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there, but itโ€™s probably best to take a cab over there.


A: Well, it says there are various ways to get there, but itโ€™s probably best to take a cab over there.

This is okay, too.

But if you wanna go the lowest cost, you might wanna take a bus, although it might be a bit of a walk.


But if you wanna go the lowest costt the cheapest way, you might wanna take a bus, although it might be a bit of a walk.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Does it look like I can't only walk there?


B: Does it look like I can't only walk the whole walky there?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Well, it takes time, but you can walk there.


A: Well, it'll takes time longer, but you can walk there.

This sounds more natural in the US.

The app says an hour and 20 minutes on foot.


The app says walking will take an hour and 20 minutes on foot.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Hmm, how long does it say it takes by bus?


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A: 20 minutes.


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But I don't know when the bus is coming, so that adds to the wait time.


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I would say that in a place like this, I guess the buses usually come every 20 to 30 minutes or so.


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But it depends on the time of the day.


But it depends on the time of the day.

And traffic conditions and things like that.


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So I think the fastest and most reliable way is by cab over there.


So I think the fastest and most reliable way is by cab over there.

But if you still have time, would you like me to find out when the buses are coming?


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I don't know if you can find out though.


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B: Oh, that would be helpful.


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A: Okay.


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But I find where the bus stop is that you should take, so let's go there.


But I can find where the bus stop is that you should take, so let's go there.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Okay.


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A & B Talk57


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B: Excuse me, do you know how to get to C university?


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