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sho

July 9, 2022

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A & B Talk42

I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


A: Do you need help?
B: Oh, thanks. We can’t find this okonomiyaki restaurant.
A: Do you know the name?
B: Well, Sorajima?
A: Oh, if there, it’s on the street one block up and walk a little bit.
B: Ok! Thanks for that!
A: No problem.

Corrections

I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook!

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

Changing an entire sentence is alright!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

A: Do you need help?

B: Oh, yes (please), thanks.

I think it'd be more natural if the person answered the question then said "thanks"

We can’t find this okonomiyaki restaurant.

A: Do you know the name?

B: WellUm, Sorajima?

I assume you're using "well" as a filler word here. It'd be better to use "um" as the filler word because it expresses hesitation that the speaker is unsure of the restaurant's name. I think that was what you were going for anyways.

A: Oh, if there, it’sit's that place, go on the street one block up andahead (and) then walk a little bit.

The second part of the sentence is an action so I changed the first part to be an action as well

B: Ok!

Thanks for that!

Generally, I would say "thanks for that" if you're referring to an occasion where the other person did something, and you're thanking them for doing that. For example: You helped me with the assignment last weekend. Thanks for that.

Here, you're not referring to any past actions so you can just say "thanks". Hope that made sense ><

A: No problem.

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sho

July 11, 2022

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Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I've learned a lot!😆

A & B Talk42


I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook!


I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Changing an entire sentence is alright!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

🙏


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Do you need help?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Oh, thanks.


B: Oh, yes (please), thanks.

I think it'd be more natural if the person answered the question then said "thanks"

We can’t find this okonomiyaki restaurant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Do you know the name?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Well, Sorajima?


B: WellUm, Sorajima?

I assume you're using "well" as a filler word here. It'd be better to use "um" as the filler word because it expresses hesitation that the speaker is unsure of the restaurant's name. I think that was what you were going for anyways.

A: Oh, if there, it’s on the street one block up and walk a little bit.


A: Oh, if there, it’sit's that place, go on the street one block up andahead (and) then walk a little bit.

The second part of the sentence is an action so I changed the first part to be an action as well

B: Ok!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for that!


Thanks for that!

Generally, I would say "thanks for that" if you're referring to an occasion where the other person did something, and you're thanking them for doing that. For example: You helped me with the assignment last weekend. Thanks for that. Here, you're not referring to any past actions so you can just say "thanks". Hope that made sense ><

A: No problem.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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