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July 16, 2022

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A & B Talk105

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ



B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?
A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a search!
B: Thanks!
A: Well, how about food samples?
B: What's that?
A: They're plastic food replica.
A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now. Like this.
B: Oh, I see. What's this for?
A: I guess many people collect them to display at home, or use them as straps or something.
B: Oh, cute. where can I buy one?
A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk. It says that you can try your hand at making one.
B: Oh, that sounds fun. What's it called shop?
A: Ganso.
B: Gimme a minute. I'll google it.
A: Yup.
B: Here?
A: Yes, here!
B: Okay. I'll go try it!
A: Yeah!
B: And...
A: Huh?
B: I'm looking for a Japanese gift for my mother. Any recommendations on where to go?
A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki? Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here.
B: What's furoshiki?
A: It's a quite traditional.
One minute.
Like this! It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right
B: Oh, I see, that looks good!
A: I just checked now and this store is nearby.
They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.
What do you think? Not too good?
B: No, it's pretty nice. Furoshiki, right?
A: Yes.
B: I'll put it on the list in my head.
A: A folding fan would be good too. I think it would make a good gift.
B: Oh, I see.
A: Also chopsticks would be good too.
B: Oh, chopsticks! Is there a place that sells chopsticks around here?
A: One minute.
Let's see, I found three stores. First, this one (showing his phone).
B: Yes.
A: And this one.
B: Yeah
A: And this one.
B: Sorry, can you show me again?
A: Sure. Here. Here. And here.
What do you think?
B: Hmm, I like these chopsticks.
A: This place is called Hashifuji.
B: Hashifuji, correct?
A: Right. And these two stores are called Hyozaemon and Takeya.
B: Okay, I'll make a note of my phone! Thank you.
A: There may not be anything that is uniquely Japan, but I think a store called Don Quixote would be interesting.
B: Don Quixote?
A: Yes. Each store may sell different things, but I think you can buy most things there if you go to the bigger stores.
B: Where is that?
A: Well, it's a minute walk from here!
B: Oh, really?
A: Oh, sorry, I made a mistake, it's the same station, but from this exit it's an 8-minute walk!
B: Oh, I see! But I'll go there!
Is it Don Quixote?
A: Yes, Don Quixote!
B: Ok. That was very helpful! Thank you so much!
A: You're welcome. Have fun!
B: Thanks!
A: Bye Bye.
B: Yup.

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A & B Talk 105

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations for around here?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: I don't know much about this placearea, but I'll do a search can check!

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Thanks!

A: Well, how about food samples?

B: What's that?

A: They're plastic food replica.

A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.

Like this.

B: Oh, I see.

What's this for?

A: I guess manya lot of people collect them to display at homefor home decor, or use them as straps or something.

B: Oh, cute.

wWhere can I buy one?

A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk from here.

This sounds more natural in the US.

It says that you can try your hand at making one yourself.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Oh, that sounds fun.

What's ithe shop called shop?

A: Ganso.

B: Gimme a minute.

I'll google it.

A: Yup.

B: Here?

A: Yes, here!

B: Okay.

I'll go try it!

A: Yeah!

B: And...

A: Huh?

B: I'm looking for a Japanese gift for my mother.

Any recommendations on where to go?

A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki?

Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here which sell it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: What's furoshiki?

A: It's a quite traditional.

One minuteHold on a sec.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Like this!

It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, righthuh.

More US slang

B: Oh, I see, that looks good!

A: I just checked now and thisere's a store is nearby.

They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.

What do you think?

Not too good?

B: No, it's pretty nice.

Furoshiki, right?

A: Yes.

B: I'll put it on the list in my headmy mental list.

A: A folding fan would be good, too.

I think it would make a good gift.

B: Oh, I see.

A: Also, chopsticks would be good, too.

B: Oh, chopsticks!

Is there a place that sells chopsticks around here?

A: One minuteJust a sec ...

Let's see, I found three stores.

First, this one (showing his phone).

B: YesOkay.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: And this one.

B: Yeah

A: And this one.

B: Sorry, can you show methat again?

A: Sure.

Here.

Here.

And here.

What do you think?

B: Hmm, I like these chopsticks.

A: This place is called Hashifuji.

B: Hashifuji, correcright?

A: Right.

And these two stores are called Hyozaemon and Takeya.

B: Okay, I'll make a note ofn my phone!

Thank you.

A: There may not be anything that is uniquely Japan, but I think a store called Don Quixote would be interesting.

B: Don Quixote?

A: Yesah.

Each store may sell different things, but I think you can buy most things there if you go to the bigger stores.

B: Where is that?

A: Well, it's a minute walk from here!

B: Oh, really?

A: Oh, sorry, I made a mistake, it's the same station, but from this exit it's an 8-minute walk!

B: Oh, I see!

But I'll go there!

Is it Don Quixote?

A: Yes, Don Quixote!

B: Ok. That was very helpful!

Thank you so much!

A: You're welcome.

Have fun!

B: Thanks!

A: Bye B-bye.

B: Yup.

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sho

July 20, 2022

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B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?

Alt: , you have any recommendations?

A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a searchlook!

Alt: I'll take a look! / Let me look!

You are understood with I'll do a search but it sounds unnatural. I recommended two informal ways of saying you will look for something.

A: They're replicas of plastic food replica.

A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.

Alt: Lemme show you a picture. (Very informal)

wWhere can I buy one?

What's ithe shop called shop?

B: Gimme a minute.

Alt: Hold up / Give me a sec.

B: And...

Alt: Also...

A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki?

A: It's a quite traditional.

It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right?

A: I just checked now, and this store is nearby.

They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.

Alt: all that stuff (instead of stuff like that)

Not too good?

Alt: It doesn't work for you?

B: I'll putkeep it oin the list in my heamind.

Understood when you say list in my head but sounds unnatural.

B: Okay, I'll make a note of it on my phone!

Alt: I'll make a note of it!

Feedback

This was great! Some suggestions and minor corrections. There were parts that sounded very natural!

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July 18, 2022

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A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a searchlook!

Should I not put "with my phone"?

B: Okay.


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I'll go try it!


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A: Yeah!


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B: And...

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A & B Talk105


A & B Talk 105

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


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You can change whatever you want!


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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?


B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations around here?

Alt: , you have any recommendations?

B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some uniquely Japanese souvenirs, do you have any recommendations for around here?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a search!


A: I don't know much about this place, but I'll do a searchlook!

Alt: I'll take a look! / Let me look! You are understood with I'll do a search but it sounds unnatural. I recommended two informal ways of saying you will look for something.

A: I don't know much about this placearea, but I'll do a search can check!

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Thanks!


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A: Well, how about food samples?


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B: What's that?


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A: They're plastic food replica.


A: They're replicas of plastic food replica.

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A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.


A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.

Alt: Lemme show you a picture. (Very informal)

A: Gimme a minute, I'll show you a picture now.

Like this.


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B: Oh, I see.


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What's this for?


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A: I guess many people collect them to display at home, or use them as straps or something.


A: I guess manya lot of people collect them to display at homefor home decor, or use them as straps or something.

B: Oh, cute.


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where can I buy one?


wWhere can I buy one?

wWhere can I buy one?

A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk.


A: I think from here it's about a 10-minute walk from here.

This sounds more natural in the US.

It says that you can try your hand at making one.


It says that you can try your hand at making one yourself.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Oh, that sounds fun.


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What's it called shop?


What's ithe shop called shop?

What's ithe shop called shop?

A: Ganso.


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B: Gimme a minute.


B: Gimme a minute.

Alt: Hold up / Give me a sec.

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I'll google it.


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A: Yup.


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B: Here?


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B: I'm looking for a Japanese gift for my mother.


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Any recommendations on where to go?


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A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki?


A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki?

A: In that case, how about where to sell furoshiki?

Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here.


Though I'm not sure if there are any stores around here which sell it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: What's furoshiki?


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A: It's a quite traditional.


A: It's a quite traditional.

A: It's a quite traditional.

One minute.


One minuteHold on a sec.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Like this!


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It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right


It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, right?

It has Japanese patterns on it, so it's a good way to remember the Japan, righthuh.

More US slang

B: Oh, I see, that looks good!


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A: I just checked now and this store is nearby.


A: I just checked now, and this store is nearby.

A: I just checked now and thisere's a store is nearby.

They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.


They sell furoshiki and handkerchiefs and stuff like that.

Alt: all that stuff (instead of stuff like that)

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What do you think?


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Not too good?


Not too good?

Alt: It doesn't work for you?

Not too good?

B: No, it's pretty nice.


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Furoshiki, right?


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A: Yes.


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B: I'll put it on the list in my head.


B: I'll putkeep it oin the list in my heamind.

Understood when you say list in my head but sounds unnatural.

B: I'll put it on the list in my headmy mental list.

A: A folding fan would be good too.


A: A folding fan would be good, too.

I think it would make a good gift.


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B: Oh, I see.


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A: Also chopsticks would be good too.


A: Also, chopsticks would be good, too.

B: Oh, chopsticks!


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Is there a place that sells chopsticks around here?


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A: One minute.


A: One minuteJust a sec ...

Let's see, I found three stores.


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First, this one (showing his phone).


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B: Yes.


B: YesOkay.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: And this one.


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B: Yeah


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A: And this one.


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B: Sorry, can you show me again?


B: Sorry, can you show methat again?

A: Sure.


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Here.


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Here.


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And here.


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What do you think?


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B: Hmm, I like these chopsticks.


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A: This place is called Hashifuji.


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B: Hashifuji, correct?


B: Hashifuji, correcright?

A: Right.


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And these two stores are called Hyozaemon and Takeya.


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B: Okay, I'll make a note of my phone!


B: Okay, I'll make a note of it on my phone!

Alt: I'll make a note of it!

B: Okay, I'll make a note ofn my phone!

Thank you.


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A: There may not be anything that is uniquely Japan, but I think a store called Don Quixote would be interesting.


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B: Don Quixote?


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A: Yes.


A: Yesah.

Each store may sell different things, but I think you can buy most things there if you go to the bigger stores.


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B: Where is that?


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A: Well, it's a minute walk from here!


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B: Oh, really?


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A: Oh, sorry, I made a mistake, it's the same station, but from this exit it's an 8-minute walk!


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B: Oh, I see!


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But I'll go there!


But I'll go there!

Is it Don Quixote?


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A: Yes, Don Quixote!


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B: Ok. That was very helpful!


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Thank you so much!


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A: You're welcome.


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Have fun!


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B: Thanks!


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A: Bye Bye.


A: Bye B-bye.

B: Yup.


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