July 16, 2022
A & B Talk103
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, is there anywhere around here that sells sweets?
A: What sort of thing are you want to eat?
B: Japanese sweets.
A: Oh, so wagashi, right? Well, there are many stores in the basement in this station, but I'm not sure if they sell them. Let me search.
B: Thanks.
A: A: Well, it doesn't seem there's in this basement. But you might want to go there once. there's possibility of there's something else that's better, right? Also if you walk a little bit from this station, it seems there're a few stores. They sell wagashi like this. (while showing his cell phone)
B: I see.
A: Do you think you can find what you want?
B: I'm interested in this store. Do you know the address?
A: Let's see, 000.
B: Thank you very much. I'll go there.
A: Yup. Hope you can find it!
B: Thanks! Bye!
A: Bye Bye.
A & B Talk 103
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, is there a sweets shop anywhere around here that sells sweets?
This still sounds kind of strange in the US. Most people probably wouldn't know what the word, "sweets," means. We usually say candy or pastries but I really that's not what ๅ่ๅญ is.
A: What sort of thing are you want to eatexactly are you looking for?
This sounds more natural in the US even though the grammar is wrong.
B: Japanese sweets.
A: Oh, so wagashi, right?
Well, there are manya lot of stores in the basement in this station, but I'm not sure if they sell them.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Let me searche.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Thanks.
A: A: Well, it doesn't seem like there's in this basementany.
This sounds more natural in the US. It's bad grammar but we say it a lot.
But you might want to gosee there once basement anyway.
there's possibility of there's something else that's better, right?You might find something better
This sounds more natural in the US.
Also if you walk a little bit from this station, it seems, not far from here, there're a fewre more stores.
This sounds more natural in the US.
They sell wagashi like this.
(while showing his cell phone)
B: I see.
A: Do you think you can find what you want?
B: I'm interested in this store.
Do you know the address?
A: Let's see, 000.
B: Thank you very much.
I'll go there.
A: Yup.
Hope you can find it!
B: Thanks!
Bye!
A: Bye Bbye.
or Bye-bye!
Feedback
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A & B Talk 103
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, is there anywhere around here that sells sweets?
"Sweets" seems slightly old-fashioned to me; it's more common to specify what you're looking for, such as "pastries", "candy", etc., at least in my area.
A: What sort of thing aredo you want to eat?
B: Japanese sweets.
A: Oh, so wagashi, right?
Well, there are many stores in the basement in this stationlevel, but I'm not sure if they sell them.
I understand that you're introducing context for the reader, but in an actually conversation the location would most likely be taken from context.
Let me searchlook.
"Search" sounds off here.
B: Thanks.
A: A: Well, it doesn't seem there's in this basement are any here.
But you might want to go there oncetake a look yourself.
tThere's possibility ofthat there's something else that's better, right?
Also if you walk a little bit from thise station, it seems that there're a few stores.
They sell wagashi like this.
(while showing his cell phone)
B: I see.
A: Do you think you can find what you want?
B: I'm interested in this store.
Do you know the address?
A: Let's see, 000.
B: Thank you very much.
I'll go there.
A: Yup.
Hope you can find it!
B: Thanks!
Bye!
A: Bye Bbye.
Feedback
Great Job! Just a few corrections!
July 20, 2022
Thank you so much!!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
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