July 16, 2022
A & B Talk102
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'm looking for a place that sells kimonos. Do you know if there are any stores around here?
A: Oh, kimono, but I have no idea. I'll check now!
B: Thanks!
A: By the way, do you want a kimono instead of a yukata?
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I'm not really sure too, but my impression is that a kimonos are a little more expensive. Also, I guess, kimonos were originally worn as clothing and is made of silk, so it is heavier and a little more luxurious and formal. And yukatas were originally worn after taking a bath, and because it is made of cotton, it is lightweight and is considered a casual kimono worn at festivals and things like that.
B: Oh, I see.
A: It looks like this, try compareing.
B: Oh, I see. Both are good, but I prefer the kimono.
A: I don't know exactly how much it costs, but I think buying it online is the cheapest way to get it. But would you like to see the real thing?
B: Yes, I want to see the real thing.
A: Ok! I'll see if there's a store near us!
B: Thanks!
A: Hmmm... It seems there are any around here, but if you take the train, I've got three stores in my search. This one is the closest one. I think they sell yukata too.
B: How far is it by train?
A: Well, oh, it's only one stop. You could probably walk there.
B: What's name of store?
A: Tokyo Kimono. Look the other stores. Here you go.
B: Thanks.
A: If you find one that looks good, I'll check out how to get there.
B: Thanks. Let me have a look.
A: Yup.
B: Hmm, this one looks good.
A: Which one? Oh, this is the one we were talking about earlier. I'll check if you can get there on foot.
B: Thanks.
A: It would take about 20 minutes on foot. But if you take the train, it might be about as much as walk, considering the distance from here to a station plus the distance from a station to the store. But if you walk, there is a possibility of getting lost, so the train is the easier way to get around. Which would you prefer?
B: Oh, well, I think I'll take the train.
A: Ok. Do you know the way to B station?
B: B station, right?
A: Yes!
B: I just got on the train earlier, so I know the way.
A: Oh, that's good. Then you'd better ask at the closest station from that store for directions to it, right?
B: Yes.
A: And if you have a kind of navigation app on your phone, I can give you the address.
B: Oh, yeah. I want to know the address.
A: Well, it's 000.
B: 000, correct?
A: Yes.
B: Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome. Have a nice trip!
B: Thanks! Bye!
A: Bye bye.
A & B Talk 102
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
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I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'm looking for a place that sells kimonos.
Do you know if there are any stores around here?
A: Oh, kimonos, but I have no idea.
This sounds more natural in the US.
I'llBut I can check now!
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Thanks!
A: By the way, do you want a kimono instead of a yukata?
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I'm not really sure too, but my impression is thateither, but I think a kimonos are is a little more expensive.
This sounds more natural in the US.
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Also, I guess, kimonos were originally worn as clothing and iso it's made of silk, so it is heavier and a little more luxurious and formal.
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B: Oh, I see.
A: It looks like this, try compareing.
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Oh, I see.
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But wWould you like to see the real thing?
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A: Ok!
I'll see if there's a store near usaround here!
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Thanks!
A: Hmmm...
It seems there aren't any around here, but if you take the train, I've got three stores in my search.
This one is the closest one.
I think they sell yukatas too.
B: How far is it by train?
A: Well, oh, it's only one stop.
You could probably walk there.
B: What's the name of the store?
A: Tokyo Kimono.
Look at the other stores.
Here you go.
B: Thanks.
A: If you find one that looks good, I'll check out how to get there.
B: Thanks.
Let me have a look.
A: Yup.
B: Hmm, this one looks good.
A: Which one?
Oh, this is the one we were talking about earlier.
I'll check to see if you can getwalk there on foot.
B: Thanks.
A: It wouldWalking will take about 20 minutes on foot.
But if you take the train, it might be about as muchthe same as walking, considering the distance from here to a station plus the distance from a station to the store.
But if you walk, there is a possibility of gettingyou might get lost, so the train is the easier way to get around.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Which would you preferone do you want to do?
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Oh, well, I think I'll take the train.
A: Ok. Do you know the wayhow to get to B station?
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B: B station, right?
A: Yes!
B: I just got on the train earlier, so, yeah, I know the wayhow.
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A: Oh, that's good.
Then you'd better ask at the closest station from that storeAt the station you can ask for directions to ithe store, right?
This sounds more natural in the US.
B: Yes.
A: And if you have a kind of navigation app on your phone, I can give you the address.
B: Oh, yeah.
I want to know the address.
A: Well, it's 000.
B: 000, correct?
A: Yes.
B: Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome.
Have a nice trip!
B: Thanks!
Bye!
A: Bye bye.
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