July 16, 2022
A & B Talk100
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'm looking to the men's clothing department. Do you know where it is.
A: I think you can find it either at Lumine or Marui.
B: What kind of store?
A: They are both shopping buildings.
Lumine is probably directly accessible from this station, so I think you should go to Lumine first. Marui is a shopping mall that you have to go outside once, but they are both right next to each other, so you can go there first or later.
B: I see. And they sell toys there?
A: Oh, I don't know. I'll check the floor guide.
B: Thanks!
A: Well, It's probably I don't think they have that, but I think you should take a look. Here's the Lumine floor guide. Here you go.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Yup.
B: Oh, looks good.
A: Would you like to see the Marui floor guide too?
B: Yeah, I'd like to see it.
A: Please one moment.
B: Of course.
A: Here it is.
B: Thanks. Oh, this place is nice too. I'm visiting both of them. Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too.
A & B Talk 100
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'm looking to thefor a men's clothing department.
Do you know where itone is.?
or
Can you help me find one?
A: I think you can find itone either at Lumine or Marui.
B: What kind of stores are those?
A: They a're both shopping buildingcomplexes.
"Shopping buildings" sounds kind of strange in US English.
Lumine isYou can probably directly accessibleget to Lumine straight from this station, so I think you should probably go to Lumine first.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Marui is a shopping mall thatwhere you have to go outside once, but they a're both right next to each other, so you can go there first or later, too.
I'm not sure what you mean by, "... you have to go outside once ..." so this is my best guess.
B: I see.
And they sell toys there?
A: Oh, I don't know.
I'll check the floor guidedirectory.
US alternative
or
I'll check the floor map.
B: Thanks!
A: Well, It's probably I don't think they have that, but I think you should take a look first.
This sounds more natural in the US.
Here's the Lumine floor guidedirectory.
We'd more often say this in the US.
Here you go.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Yup.
B: Oh, looks good.
A: Would you like to see the Marui floor guidedirectory, too?
Again, we'd more often say it this way.
B: Yeah, I'd like to see it.
We would just say this.
A: Please one momentJust a sec ...
We'd more often say it this way.
B: Of courseYup.
We'd more often say this in way of acknowledgement.
A: Here it is.
B: Thanks.
Oh, this place is nice, too.
I'm visiting both of themll go to both.
or
I think I'll go to both.
Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You, too.
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July 20, 2022
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July 20, 2022
I'm visiting both of themll go to both.
I just realized I made a mistake here -- my suggestion should be:
I'll go to both
I'll is the contraction for "I will"
Il doesn't exist. My bad!
July 21, 2022
I just realized I made a mistake here -- my suggestion should be: I'll go to both I'll is the contraction for "I will" Il doesn't exist. My bad!
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B: Excuse me, I'm looking tofor the men's clothing department.
Do you know where it is.?
A: I think you can find it either at Lumine or Marui.
B: What kind of store are they?
A: They are both shopping buildingmalls.
Lumine is probably directly accessible from this station, so I think you should go toclose to this station, so I would try Lumine first.
More colloquial / casual language
Marui is a shopping mall that yYou have to go outside onceto get to Marui, but they are both right next to each other, so you can go there firstnow or later.
B: I see.
And they sell toys there?
A: Oh, I don't know.
I'll check the floor guide.
B: Thanks!
A: Well, It's probably Iit doesn't think they have thatsay anything about toys, but I think you should take a look anyway.
Here's the Lumine floor guide.
Here you go.
B: Oh, thank you.
A: Yup.
B: Oh, looks good.
A: Would you like to see the Marui floor guide too?
B: Yeah, I'd like to see it.
A: Please one momentJust a sec.
B: Of course.
A: Here it is.
B: Thanks.
Oh, this place is nice too.
I'm visitingll go to both of them.
Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome.
Have a nice day!
B: Thanks!
You too.
July 20, 2022
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July 20, 2022
I'm visitingll go to both of them.
I just realized I made a mistake here -- my suggestion should be:
I'll go to both
I'll is the contraction for "I will"
Il doesn't exist. My bad!
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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to speak like a native!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can change whatever you want! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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B: Excuse me, I'm looking to the men's clothing department. B: Excuse me, I'm looking B: Excuse me, I'm looking |
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Do you know where it is. Do you know where it is Do you know where or Can you help me find one? |
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A: I think you can find it either at Lumine or Marui. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A: I think you can find |
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B: What kind of store? B: What kind of store are they? B: What kind of stores are those? |
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A: They are both shopping buildings. A: They are both shopping A: They "Shopping buildings" sounds kind of strange in US English. |
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Lumine is probably directly accessible from this station, so I think you should go to Lumine first. Lumine is More colloquial / casual language
This sounds more natural in the US. |
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Marui is a shopping mall that you have to go outside once, but they are both right next to each other, so you can go there first or later.
Marui is a shopping mall I'm not sure what you mean by, "... you have to go outside once ..." so this is my best guess. |
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B: I see. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And they sell toys there? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A: Oh, I don't know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'll check the floor guide. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I'll check the floor US alternative or I'll check the floor map. |
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B: Thanks! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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