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sho

July 16, 2022

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A & B Talk 91

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something. I want to go to Tokyo Station, is this the right train?
A: To Tokyo station?
B: Yes
A: Ok, let me check. Yes, this's correct!
B: Can you also tell me the fastest way?
A: Let's see, the fastest way is to get off at Ueno and take the 7:48 a.m. train bound for Odawara on platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, but you have to be there in 7 minutes to get on. I think you can make it if you jog, but what do you want to?
B: Let me take notes.
A: Sure! The train to Odawara, platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48.
B: Ok!
A: If you can't get on that train, ask someone else again!
B: Okay! Thank you!
A: You’re welcome.

ーーー30 minutes later
A: Here’s where you change trains.
B: Yes. Thanks. Have a nice day!
A: Good luck. You too!

Corrections

A & B Talk 91

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

🙏

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️

B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something.

I want to go to Tokyo Station, is this the right train?

A: To Tokyo sStation?

B: Yesah.

US alternative

A: Ok, let mme check.

US alternative slang

Yes, thisat's correct!

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Can you also tell me the fastest way?

A: Let's see, the fastest way is to get off at Ueno and take the 7:48 a.m. train bound for Odawara on platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, but you have to be there in 7 minutes to get on.

I think you can make it if you joghurry, but what do you want to do?

B: Let mme take some notes.

US alternative slang

or

Lemme write that down.

A: Sure!

The train to Odawara, platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48.

B: Ok!

A: If you can't get on that train, ask someone else again!

B: Okay!

Thank you!

A: You’re welcome.

ーーー30 minutes later

A: Here’s where you change trains.

B: YesGot it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Thanks.

Have a nice day!

You tooThanks!

or

Thanks for your help!

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sho

July 20, 2022

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ありがとうございます!🙇‍♂️

A & B Talk 91


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

🙏


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you something.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to go to Tokyo Station, is this the right train?


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A: To Tokyo station?


A: To Tokyo sStation?

B: Yes


B: Yesah.

US alternative

A: Ok, let me check.


A: Ok, let mme check.

US alternative slang

Yes, this's correct!


Yes, thisat's correct!

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Can you also tell me the fastest way?


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A: Let's see, the fastest way is to get off at Ueno and take the 7:48 a.m. train bound for Odawara on platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, but you have to be there in 7 minutes to get on.


A: Let's see, the fastest way is to get off at Ueno and take the 7:48 a.m. train bound for Odawara on platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, but you have to be there in 7 minutes to get on.

I think you can make it if you jog, but what do you want to?


I think you can make it if you joghurry, but what do you want to do?

B: Let me take notes.


B: Let mme take some notes.

US alternative slang or Lemme write that down.

A: Sure!


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The train to Odawara, platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48.


The train to Odawara, platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48.

B: Ok!


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A: If you can't get on that train, ask someone else again!


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B: Okay!


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Thank you!


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A: You’re welcome.


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ーーー30 minutes later


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A: Here’s where you change trains.


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B: Yes.


B: YesGot it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Thanks.


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Have a nice day!


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A: Good luck.


You too!


You tooThanks!

or Thanks for your help!

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