July 16, 2022
A & B Talk 89
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you a few questions, I'd like to go to Tokyo station.
Do you know how to get there?
A: To Tokyo station?
B: Yes
A: Ok. Let me check.
Well... Do you prefer the fastest way? Or do you prefer the easy way with fewer transfers?
B: The easier way, please!
A: Then I think you would ride this platform 2 train for about 30 minutes and get off at Ueno. Then take the train leaving at 7:48 to Odawara from platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line. If you can't get on that train, there's a possibility that it may not stop at Tokyo Station, so just in case, ask someone again.
B: Let me write it down just in case.
A: Sure! The train to Odawara, platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48.
B: Is the train to Odawara, from platform 7 of the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48. correct?
A: Yes! The JR Ueno Tokyo Line is the orange one. But be careful, not all lines are a different color. You can also rely on these signs, like this, or there're overhead. With the name of the route, how many meters are left, and the direction. Or you can also ask someone for help.
B: Got it!
A: Good luck!
B: Thank you so much!
A: No problem. Take care.
B: You too!
A & B Talk 89
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!
๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!!
Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!
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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'd like to ask you a few questions,can you help me? I'd like to go to Tokyo station.
The grammar is not great but this sounds more natural in the US.
Do you know how to get there?
A: To Tokyo sStation?
B: Yes
A: Ok. Let me check.
Well... Do you preferwant the fastest way?
US alternative
Or do you preferwant the easyiest way with the fewerst transfers?
US alternative
B: The easierst way, please!
US alternative
A: Then I think you would ride this platform 2 train for about 30 minutes and get off at Ueno.
Then take the train leaving at 7:48 to Odawara from platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line.
This sounds more natural in the US.
If you can't get on that train, there's a possibility that it may not stop at Tokyo Station, so just in case, ask someone again.
B: Let me write it down just in case.
A: Sure!
The train to Odawara, platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48.
B: It's the train to Odawara, from platform 7 ofn the JR Ueno Tokyo Line, departing at 7:48., correct?
This sounds more natural in the US.
A: Yes!
The JR Ueno Tokyo Line is the orange one.
But be careful, not all lines are a different color.
You can also rely on theuse signs, like this, or there're overhead ones hanging from above.
This sounds more natural in the US.
With the name of the route, how many meters are left, and the direction.
Or you can also ask someone for help.
B: Got it!
A: Good luck!
B: Thank you so much!
A: No problem.
Take care.
B: You too!
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