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sho

July 9, 2022

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I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me.
A: Hi.
B: Hey. Could I ask you something?
A: Sure.
B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku?
A: It's a little tricky.
But, wait a minute, there's a good app. It's a train app, it says in English. How's this?
B: Oh, that's really help.
A: I think this would be useful for foreigners, so why don't you download this app? If you don't wanna do, take a picture?
B: I'll just take a picture for now.
A: Ok. So here you are.
B: Thanks.
A: And the next one, just in case.
B: Oh, thank you!
A: Will you be able to get there?
B: It looks be able.
A: Oh, glad to hear that. Then have a nice trip.
B: Thank you! Take care!
A: You too.

Corrections

I want to speak natural English naturally, and not like a textbook!

ChangiIt's alright if you change an entire sentence is alright!!!

B: Oh, that's really helps.

If you don't wanna do, it, maybe take a picture?

B: It looks be doable.

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sho

July 11, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ˜„

It's a train app, it say's in English.

It's more natural to describe the app as being in english rather than being said in english.

B: Oh, that's really helpful.

A: I think this would be useful for foreigners, so why don't you download ithis app?

B: It looks be ableseems like it.

Feedback

Overall the conversation seems very natural and not too formal.

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sho

July 11, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ˜†

B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku from here?

It's a train app, it says in English.

B: Oh, that's would really help.

If you don't wanna do,t to, you could take a picture?.

B: IYeah, it looks like I'll be able to.

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sho

July 11, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ˜

A & B Talk 50


I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook!


I want to speak natural English naturally, and not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


I want to speak like a native!!


Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


Changing an entire sentence is alright!!!


ChangiIt's alright if you change an entire sentence is alright!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


๐Ÿ™


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me.


A: Hi.


B: Hey.


Could I ask you something?


A: Sure.


B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku?


B: Do you know how to get from here to Shinjuku from here?

A: It's a little tricky.


But, wait a minute, there's a good app.


It's a train app, it says in English.


It's a train app, it says in English.

It's a train app, it say's in English.

It's more natural to describe the app as being in english rather than being said in english.

How's this?


B: Oh, that's really help.


B: Oh, that's would really help.

B: Oh, that's really helpful.

B: Oh, that's really helps.

A: I think this would be useful for foreigners, so why don't you download this app?


A: I think this would be useful for foreigners, so why don't you download ithis app?

If you don't wanna do, take a picture?


If you don't wanna do,t to, you could take a picture?.

If you don't wanna do, it, maybe take a picture?

B: I'll just take a picture for now.


A: Ok.


So here you are.


B: Thanks.


A: And the next one, just in case.


B: Oh, thank you!


A: Will you be able to get there?


B: It looks be able.


B: IYeah, it looks like I'll be able to.

B: It looks be doable.

B: It looks be ableseems like it.

A: Oh, glad to hear that.


Then have a nice trip.


B: Thank you!


Take care!


A: You too.


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