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sho

July 9, 2022

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A & B Talk 32

I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me. Have you got a second?
A: Yes, What's happening?
B: I'm looking for a place called Hara Park, do you know where it is?
A: Sorry, but I don't know. But can I help you find your way with my app?
B: Oh, thank you.
That would be great.
A: No problem at all. Wait a minute.
I'll look for it now.

Corrections

B: Excuse me.

Have you got a second?

A: Yes, Wwhat's happeningup?

What's up is pretty casual and might be a bit odd for strangers. To be a bit more polite, you could just leave it out.

B: I'm looking for a place called Hara Park, d. Do you know where it is?

A: Sorry, but I don't know.

A native wouldn't include the "but"

But can I help you find your way with my app?I could check my phone.

What you said isn't wrong grammatically. But what I said is what a native would say.

B: Oh, thank you.

A: No problem at all.

Wait a minute.

I'll look for it now.

Feedback

Keep in mind I'm American, so I'm teaching you how to talk like an American.

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sho

July 11, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!🙇‍♂️😭✍️

A & B Talk 32


I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook!


🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


I want to speak like a native!!


Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


Changing an entire sentence is alright!!!


Or you can change whatever you want!


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


🙏


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Have you got a second?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Yes, What's happening?


A: Yes, Wwhat's happeningup?

What's up is pretty casual and might be a bit odd for strangers. To be a bit more polite, you could just leave it out.

B: I'm looking for a place called Hara Park, do you know where it is?


B: I'm looking for a place called Hara Park, d. Do you know where it is?

A: Sorry, but I don't know.


A: Sorry, but I don't know.

A native wouldn't include the "but"

But can I help you find your way with my app?


But can I help you find your way with my app?I could check my phone.

What you said isn't wrong grammatically. But what I said is what a native would say.

B: Oh, thank you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That would be great.


A: No problem at all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Wait a minute.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll look for it now.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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