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sho

July 9, 2022

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A & B talk 31

I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
Changing an entire sentence is alright!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me, Have you got a few minutes?
A: Yes. What happen?
B: Do you know where to catch the bus to C university?
A: C university? I have no idea. If you like, I'll look it up.
B: Please do. 
A: Maybe this is the way to the bus stop closest to your destination. There is a bus stop in front of this station, and it is the 05-4 bus bound for Chiba. But it looks like it's about a 10-minute walk from your destination, so if you don't know how to get there, just ask someone who seems nice!
B: Okay, thank you!
A: Just in case, if you like, I can show you the way to the bus stop? I don't know much where it is either though. So while using app.
B: That would be great!
A: Then let's go!
B: Okay.

Corrections

B: Excuse me, Have you got a few minutes?

A: Yes.

What happencan I help you with?

Correct way of saying what you said would be : "What happened?" but in a situation where you don't know someone it wouldn't really be used

B: Do you know where to catch the bus to C university?

A: C university?

I have no idea, sorry.

It's best to be formal to someone you just met on a street

If you'd like, I'll can look it up for you.

B: Please do.

A: Maybe this isThis might be the way to the bus stop closest to your destination.

B: Okay, thank you!

A: Just in case, iIf you'd like, I can show you the way to the bus stop?, just in case.

I don't know muchreally know where it is either though.

So while using an app.

B: That would be great!very nice of you, if you don't mind

Remember to be formal and polite!

A: ThenNo problem, let's go! then.

B: Okay., thank you!

Feedback

Remember to be polite and use please and thank you to people you are asking a favor from :)

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sho

July 11, 2022

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Thank you so much!!!🙇‍♂️
I've learned a lot!😭

A & B talk 31


I want to speak natural English naturally, not like a textbook!


🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️


I want to speak like a native!!


Seriously!!🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🔥🔥


Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


Changing an entire sentence is alright!!!


Or you can change whatever you want!


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


🙏


Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.


I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️


B: Excuse me, Have you got a few minutes?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Yes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What happen?


What happencan I help you with?

Correct way of saying what you said would be : "What happened?" but in a situation where you don't know someone it wouldn't really be used

B: Do you know where to catch the bus to C university?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: C university?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have no idea.


I have no idea, sorry.

It's best to be formal to someone you just met on a street

If you like, I'll look it up.


If you'd like, I'll can look it up for you.

B: Please do.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Maybe this is the way to the bus stop closest to your destination.


A: Maybe this isThis might be the way to the bus stop closest to your destination.

There is a bus stop in front of this station, and it is the 05-4 bus bound for Chiba.


But it looks like it's about a 10-minute walk from your destination, so if you don't know how to get there, just ask someone who seems nice!


B: Okay, thank you!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Just in case, if you like, I can show you the way to the bus stop?


A: Just in case, iIf you'd like, I can show you the way to the bus stop?, just in case.

I don't know much where it is either though.


I don't know muchreally know where it is either though.

So while using app.


So while using an app.

B: That would be great!


B: That would be great!very nice of you, if you don't mind

Remember to be formal and polite!

A: Then let's go!


A: ThenNo problem, let's go! then.

B: Okay.


B: Okay., thank you!

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