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sho

July 13, 2022

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A & B 71

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: Do you use a ticket?
B: Yes, but I lost it.
A: Oh, seriously, you may have to buy another ticket. But you'd better ask the station staff, first. I'll take you to where the station staff is.
B: Oh, thank you very much.
A: No problem.

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A & B 71

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to dohow?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Doid you use a ticket?

past tense

B: Yes, but I lost it.

A: Oh, seriously, you may have to buy another ticket.

But you'd better ask the station staff, first.

I'll take you to where the station staff is.

B: Oh, thank you very much.

A: No problem.

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July 14, 2022

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mari

July 14, 2022

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A & B 71


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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to speak like a native!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Or you can change whatever you want!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?


B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to dohow?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Do you use a ticket?


A: Doid you use a ticket?

past tense

B: Yes, but I lost it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A: Oh, seriously, you may have to buy another ticket.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But you'd better ask the station staff, first.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll take you to where the station staff is.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: Oh, thank you very much.


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A: No problem.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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