Oct. 5, 2021
Recently I am really putting a lot of time to doing exercise in a regular base.
However, I do have a ground rule.
I will not exhaust myself too much, means the next day I still has the strength to exercise again.
I jogging for one hour, jump rope for 30 minutes…
But yesterday when I riding bicycle to my home. (takes about 20 minutes)
The amount of sweat was roughly equal to the above exercise.
So, instead reserve a specific time to exercise.
All I need to do is just riding bicycle to my work place and home.
Because I need to do each day!
Maybe I should I buy a better bicycle.
Recently I am really putting a lot of time into doing exercise iing on a regular baseis.
However, I do have a ground rule.
I will not exhaust myself too much, meanso the next day I stwill hasve the strength to exercise again.
I jogging for one hour, or jump rope for 30 minutes….
But yesterday when I riding my bicycle to my homehome (which takes about 20 minutes), I sweat almost as much as I do with my other exercises.
This is a fragment, so I joined a few phrases together.
(takes about 20 minutes)
This is a fragment, so I joined it with the previous phrase.
The amount of sweat was roughly equal to the above exercise.
This is a complete sentence, but I joined it with the two fragments above.
So, instead of reserveing a specific time to exercise, all I need to do is ride my bicycle to and from work.
This is a fragment, so I joined it with the next sentence.
All I need to do is just riding bicycle to my work place and home.
This sentence should be joined with the previous phrase.
Maybe I should I buy a better bicycle.
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Recently I am really putting a lot of time to doing exercise in a regular base. Recently I am really putting a lot of time into |
However, I do have a ground rule. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I will not exhaust myself too much, means the next day I still has the strength to exercise again. I will not exhaust myself too much, |
I jogging for one hour, jump rope for 30 minutes… I jog |
But yesterday when I riding bicycle to my home. But yesterday when This is a fragment, so I joined a few phrases together. |
(takes about 20 minutes)
This is a fragment, so I joined it with the previous phrase. |
The amount of sweat was roughly equal to the above exercise.
This is a complete sentence, but I joined it with the two fragments above. |
So, instead reserve a specific time to exercise. So, instead of reserv This is a fragment, so I joined it with the next sentence. |
All I need to do is just riding bicycle to my work place and home.
This sentence should be joined with the previous phrase. |
Because I need to do each day! |
Maybe I should I buy a better bicycle. Maybe I should |
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