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Dec. 17, 2025

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A 92 years japanese woman won a Tekken 8 tournament

A e-sport japanese association organised recently a Tekken 8 tournament. A 92 years woman gamer won it.
Since 2019, the Care e-sport japanese association organise twice a year an e-sport tournament for old people. For this 12th edition, seniors compete on Tekken 8, it's a nervous and explosive fighting game, miles away from a peaceful ikebana afternoon. Seniors contenders threw punches, combos and kos with theirs joysticks, proof is, that they kept their fighting spirit. The event was live on You Tube. Hisako Sakai, 92 year, was the winner. We don't know if she said "I'll be back" like Terminator, for the next tournament.

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A 92 years japanese woman won a Tekken 8 tournament

A e-sport japaneseJapanese e-sport association organised recently a Tekken 8 tournament recently.

"Japanese" is a describing the association, so it comes before it in the sentence.
Capitalize all country and city names even if they are used as a describing word.
I don't know if it's "E-Sports" (like E-Mail) or "esports" so I'll leave it.

A 92 -years-old woman gamer won it.

"It" at the end is not wrong but repetitive, since it was mentioned in the last sentence.

Since 2019, the Care eE-sport jJapanese aAssociation organise twice a year an e-sport tournament for old people twice a year.

With titles of organisations each word is capitalized.

For this 12th edition, seniors compete on Tekken 8, it's a nervousn exciting and explosive fighting game, miles away from a peaceful ikebana afternoon.

Seniors contenders threw punches, combos and ko.o.s with theirs joysticks, proof is,which proves that they kept their fighting spirit.

The event was live on You Tube.

Hisako Sakai, 92 year, was the winner.

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Dec. 18, 2025

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A 92 years japanese woman won a Tekken 8 tournament


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A e-sport japanese association organised recently a Tekken 8 tournament.


A e-sport japaneseJapanese e-sport association organised recently a Tekken 8 tournament recently.

"Japanese" is a describing the association, so it comes before it in the sentence. Capitalize all country and city names even if they are used as a describing word. I don't know if it's "E-Sports" (like E-Mail) or "esports" so I'll leave it.

A 92 years woman gamer won it.


A 92 -years-old woman gamer won it.

"It" at the end is not wrong but repetitive, since it was mentioned in the last sentence.

Since 2019, the Care e-sport japanese association organise twice a year an e-sport tournament for old people.


Since 2019, the Care eE-sport jJapanese aAssociation organise twice a year an e-sport tournament for old people twice a year.

With titles of organisations each word is capitalized.

For this 12th edition, seniors compete on Tekken 8, it's a nervous and explosive fighting game, miles away from a peaceful ikebana afternoon.


For this 12th edition, seniors compete on Tekken 8, it's a nervousn exciting and explosive fighting game, miles away from a peaceful ikebana afternoon.

Seniors contenders threw punches, combos and kos with theirs joysticks, proof is, that they kept their fighting spirit.


Seniors contenders threw punches, combos and ko.o.s with theirs joysticks, proof is,which proves that they kept their fighting spirit.

The event was live on You Tube.


The event was live on You Tube.

Hisako Sakai, 92 year, was the winner.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We don't know if she said "I'll be back" like Terminator, for the next tournament.


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