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El asiento del medio
Antes del coronavirus, prefería sentarme en el asiento del medio cuando viajaba en avión. Sé que esta elección es un poco raro. Creo que tengo esta preferencia porque estoy acostumbrada a sentarme entre mi padre y mi hermana cuando viajamos. Mi hermana prefiere el asiento de la ventana porque le gusta mirar los nubes y las paisajes y mi padre prefiere el asiento del pasillo porque se puede estirar las piernas.
El asiento de la ventana me hace sentir atrapada, como si tuviera que salir no podría escapar. El asiento del pasillo me hace sentir expuesta a los otros viajeros.
Me pregunto cuál preferiré después del coronavirus.
Dec. 10, 2020
La calma
¿Hay alguien en todo el mundo que haya tenido un verdadero día de calma? ¿Sin distracciones, trabajo o algo así? Aunque parece que cada vez más científicos están enfatizando la importancia de la meditación y la calma, se siente que recibimos cada vez menos descanso en nuestros horarios ocupados. Todo el tiempo tenemos reuniones, proyectos, fechas límites y tal. Es tan importante que hagamos estas actividades de relajación, pero nos parece que tenemos que luchar para encajarlas en nuestro tiempo libre, si eso es una cosa que tengas. Hay caos en todas partes ahora: huelgas, desigualdad, peleas, la pandemia y tal. Nuestra salud mental ha sufrido enormemente, pero aún hay maneras que podemos usar para mejorarla. La meditación, la respiración concentrada y incluso el ejercicio todos nos pueden ayudar. Hay muchas cosas que no están en nuestro mando, sino que aún existen las que controlemos. Es la época de las fiestas, entonces deberíamos usarla para relajarnos.
Dos oraciones con "a + periodo de tiempo + de + infinitivo".
1. A los dos días de despedirlo, el jefe pidió que él volviera al trabajo.
2. ¡Es tonto tonto que a la una hora de perderlos, nos dijeron que tenemos que pagar otra vez!
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Journal 12/11/20
My middle school was in my small hometown and it was 1.5 kilometers from my village. During middle school, l lived in school. Sometimes when I wanted to go home I had to go on foot. Our classroom and dormitory were in bad condition and there were only several simple bungalows. There were about 60 students in my class and three of these kinds of classes each year. Because grade 6, 7,8 (at that time, our primary school only had five grades) were in the school at the same time, so the school had 9 classes, which means more than 500 students in the school then. We took 11 courses and they were Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry, Biology, Politics, History, Geography, Sports and Music. I took 9 courses (except sports and music) when attending the high school entrance examination.
Dec. 10, 2020
Communication Skill
People who are poor at chatting or discussion often make fun of themselves by stating that they are "コミュ障 (Lack of communication skill)" in Japanese.
I'm often at a loss for a reply in English online lessons. While appropriate phrases didn't come up with my mind in most cases, sometimes I had nothing to talk with even in Japanese.
I might have to improve not only English conversation skill but also communication skill.
Dec. 10, 2020
Das Problem der Überalterung der Gesellschaft
Ich habe dieses Wort zum ersten Mal gehört, als ich in Japan lebte. Es ist ein seriöses Problem nicht nur in Japan, sondern auch in anderen Ländern. Auch in Deutschland ist die Überalterung eine Realität, nach dem, was ich gelesen habe. Wie kann man dieses Problem lösen?
Ich habe in der letzten Zeit keine Informationen über dieses Problem in Japan eingeholt, aber ich erinnere mich daran, dass es ein Programm gab, durch denen Krankenpfleger aus Indonesien oder die Philippinen nach Japan einwandern konnten, um dort zu arbeiten. Ob es nur für eine kurze Zeit oder keine zeitliche Begrenzung gab, weiß ich nicht.
Es ist auch seit 1990 oder früher, dass jede und jeder Staatsbürger aus Brasilien (und vielleicht auch aus anderen Ländern), die oder der japanischer Herkunft ist, die Gelegenheit hat, ein Visum zu bekommen, um in Japan zu leben. Man braucht weder Sprachkenntnisse an Japanischem zu haben, noch andere besondere Voraussetzung erfüllen. Das hat auch zu einigen Problemen geführt, weil es nicht nur ein Problem ist, wenn man die Sprache nicht kennt, sondern sind die japanische und die brasilianische Kultur ganz anders.
In Deutschland weiß ich, dass ein Mangel an Krankenpfleger und Pflegepersonen gibt. Ich kenne einen Jungen, der aus São Paulo kommt, der als Krankenpfleger in Nordrhein-Westfalen arbeitet. Er ist im März nach Deutschland eingewandert.
Indem die Regierung eines Landes solche Programme erschafft, dadurch Ausländer für eine bestimmte Arbeit eingestellt werden, lässt sich das Problem an Arbeitskraftmangel lösen. Wenn diese neuen Einwohner die Gelegenheit nicht haben, für immer dort zu bleiben und dort sich ein neues Lebes aufzubauen, wird das Problem mit Überalterung und seinen Folgen nur verschoben.
Dec. 10, 2020
Why I like to read?
When I was about 12 years old I became interested in books. How I came to like to read? Well, when I transferred schools I hardly made any friends. The reason was that I was very introverted as a kid, a had like 2 friends and that was in my old school so when a transferred, there was no one that I knew at the time. I was mostly alone in lunch time and then I remember finding out that my school had a library so I went there to pass the time since I didn’t like to eat at school and I was embarrassed to stand in front of my classroom alone with everyone else looking at me. That was awkward. So there I discovered a whole new world. It had a good amount of books, with some of the most common genres, like fantasy, young adult, mystery, comics, and the classics as well. But like any other kid, I was most interested in fantasy and romance books, not the classic ones which later on we had to read whether we wanted or not. So I spent the rest of the year during my lunch break, reading lots of books. And I liked it so much. The feeling of getting lost in another world is so fascinating. And I like reading until these days, even though a couple of years ago I stopped reading and It made me miss books so much. I recently started again and I hope I read much more than I read before.
Dec. 10, 2020
Gesprächskreis (Feste) im Kindergarten
Bald ist das Weihnachten, unsere Gruppe ist auch bereits mit vielen Weihnachtsschmuck dekoriert. Viele Kinder in unserem Kindergarten haben verschiedene Herkünfte und feiern kein Weihnachten, sondern ein anderes Fest. Ich möchte deswegen ihnen die Gelegenheit geben, den anderen Kindern von ihrem Fest zu erzählen, das sie feiern. Alle Kinder freuen sich auch für Feste, da sie Geschenke bekommen und ihre Familien treffen werden. Ich hoffe, dass dieses Thema die Kinder zum Sprechen motivieren wird.
Dec. 10, 2020
僕が話せる言語は？
（文法的には問題ないとしても、ネイティブっぽくなければ修正してください！よろしくお願いします）
まず、僕がどの言語を話せるのかはもう僕のプロフィールに書いてありますが…ここでも説明してみます。えーと、僕はアメリカ人と韓国人の二重国籍者です。なので、韓国語と英語はペラペラ話せます。今は日本の文化（アニメ、漫画、J-Popなど）が面白いと思って日本語を勉強していますが、まだ全然上手ではないけど、韓国語が話せるので文法的な部分ではすこしアドバンテージがあると思います。勿論それでも日本語は難しいです笑。文法的には似てるのしても、どういう表現するのが自然なのかは違いがあるからさ。学校では中国語も勉強していますが、あんまり興味はないです。僕の学校では第二外国語の授業が中国語、スペイン語、そしてドイツ語しかなくて中国語を選んだだけです。
Dec. 10, 2020
Wie man als Lottogewinner sein Geld ausgegeben sollte
Das ganze Geld ausgeben finde ich sehr schlimm. Man sollte als Lotogewinner nicht das ganze Geld ausgeben, sondern sparen. Natürlich kann man schöne Urlaubsreise, ein Haus oder ein neues Auto kaufen, aber es ist intelligenter, dass man das Geld investiert und ein neues Unternehmen aufbaut. Selbsverständlich wäre besser, wenn man eine Finanzdienstleister und ein Unternehmenberater hat. Auf diese Weise könnte man sein Geld weise ausgegeben.
Dec. 10, 2020
고정관념을 극복할 수 있는 방법
우리 사회에는 성별 고정관념이 많이 있더라고요. 태어났을 때부터 기본적인 호칭들을 배워서 새로운 사람을 만나면 나이와 성별에 대해 생각해요. 어린이들이 보통 같은 성적이랑 친하며 남,여 중학교들과 고등학교들이 아주 흔해요. 성인 대상에는 남자들이 군대 가고 여자들이 여성 대학교 다니는 가능성이 높아요. 드디어, 20대 후반이나 30대 초반에 회사 함께 다니면 여성분들께서 부정적인 차별이 자주 발생해요. 안타깝게도, 회사 다니는 사람들 중에 누구보다 나이 어린 여자한테 제일 어려워요. 한마디로 문제 뭐냐하면 남자들이 여자들이 다들 불만족스러워요. 남자들은 군대 가야 하며 결혼하려면 결혼할 여자보다 연봉이 높아야 하는 기대가 있어서 부담스럽고 답답해요. 여자들은 직장에서 평등을 이어지지 못 하며 결혼하는 후에 남편의 가족한테 완벽을 흔히 요구해요. 보다시피, 돈을 벌려고 하거나 전통적으로 가족이랑 단순하게 살고 싶다면 사귀는 것도 동거가 되게 어려워요. 이 문제들은 풀릴 수가 있을까요? 개인적으로 문제 해결을 위해 능력하게 노력해야 해요. 무엇보다 중요하는 것은 지혜예요. 남자와 여자가 서로 모르니까 기본적인 관계도 복잡해졌어요. 어릴 때부터 함께 놀고 교육을 받으면 좋은 것 같아요. 또한, 어린이의 사랑하는 부모님들이 어린이 앞에 서로 사랑스럽게 해야 해요. 아들이 여자한테 어떻게 해야한 지 아빠한테 배우고 마찬가지로 딸이 엄마를 따를 거예요.
Dec. 10, 2020
53. 대학을 꼭 다녀야 하는가
대한민국의 교육부 조사의 결과를 따라면 20대와 30대 성인들 중에 37% 대학을 꼭 다녀야 하지 않다라고 생각합니다. 마찬가지로, 40대와 50대 성인들 중에 15% 그렇게 대답했습니다. 교육부가 아니다라고 응답한 분들의 이유도 모였습니다. 예측하다시피 대상마다 주신 이유가 다릅니다. 20대와 30대 성인들의 제일 흔한 이유는 학력 중심의 사회에서 실력 중심의 사회로 바뀝니다. 그 대상은 대졸 실업자의 증가이라고 또 생각했습니다. 비교하면 40대와 50대 대상은 대학교육의 실용성이 떨어지며 사회에서 요구하는 인력의 다양화로 인해 그렇게 응답했습니다.
Dec. 10, 2020
Desto/umso
1. Je mehr Vokabeln ich lerne, desto größer wird mein Wortschatz.
2. Je öfter ich Nachrichten schaue, umso besser verstehe ich sie.
3. Je mehr Julia liest, desto mehr Wörter kennt sie.
4. Je öfter Markus übt, umso schneller lernt er.
5. Je länger man im Ausland ist, desto besser beherrscht man die Sprache.
6. Je mehr ich übe, umso mehr Spaß macht Deutsch.
Dec. 10, 2020
写一个短篇小说
I have to write a simple story for my Chinese class using the following words, 生病，每，早上，跑步，起床， 药， 身体，出院，高， 米， 知道，休息，忙，时间。My teacher made me use the fictional character Mr. Fox from Fantastic Mr. Fox as the subject of this story. Please correct the sentences below. :)
爸爸狐狸很忙。 他每天早上6点起床。 他从来没有生病，所以他不必吃药。 他小时候生病了。 他很矮，只有一米高。 医生告诉他他需要休息。 之后他的身体好了。 爸爸狐狸出院了。 他知道每天跑步，所以他抽出时间。
Dec. 10, 2020
les pères divorcés.
Un magazine de psychologie a publié un article sur les pères divorcés. Suite à la lecture de cet article, vous envoyez à ce magazine un courrier dans lequel vous expliquez en quoi l’attribution quasi-automatique de l’autorité parentale des enfants à la mère vous paraît injuste.
Bonjour,
Après avoir lu l’article de votre magazine abordant du thème des pères divorcés, je voudrais partager ma réflexion sur ce problème qui me tient au coeur. D’après moi, le fait d’attribuer quasi-automatiquement de l’autorité parentale des enfants à la mère me paraît injuste pour les pères.
On ne peut pas nier que les pères aujourd’hui obtiennent rarement la garde exclusive des enfants au moment de la rupture. Bien que les deux parents disposent des mêmes droits sur leur enfant, les juges ou les magistrats décident souvent de confier aux mères le droit de garde des enfants. En effet, selon eux, ces faits témoignent du l’image des pères qui travaille plus pour gagner de l’argent et l’image des mères qui travaille moins pour s’occuper leurs enfants. D’ailleurs, pour les plus jeunes et les bébés, il est difficile de les séparer à leur mère parce que ce sont les moments importants qu’ils ont plus que jamais d'être pris en charge par leur mère.
De plus, la “garde” des enfants est progressivement remplacée par la “résidence”. C’est pourquoi les pères divorcés ont de moins en moins de chances pour se rencontrer et visiter leurs enfants. cela constituera l’inégalité de l’autorité parentale des enfants entre les pères et les mères lorsque les pères n’utilisent pas forcément les droits qu’ils ont.
Il me semble qu’il faudrait prendre cette question au sérieux. Car les pères ont les mêmes droits et devoirs sur leur enfants. Il est injuste de procurer quasi- automatiquement aux mères la garde des enfants sans compter sur les conditions et la capacité de des pères. De plus, non seulement les juges mais aussi les mères devraient créer une bonne condition pour maintenir le lien entre les pères et les enfants. Les pères aiment et veulent aussi être avec leurs enfants plus que jamais. Il est nécessaire de laisser les enfants grandir avec l’amour des deux parents.
Dec. 10, 2020
Un rêve intéressant
La semaine dernière, j’ai fait un rêve très bizarre. Dans le rêve, j’ai skié avec mes anciens camarades de classe. Je les ai vus au sommet de la colline, et nous avons skié ensemble. Je n’ai vu pas d'autres gens, et nous étions seuls. J’ai parlé avec mon ancienne amie, Alice, qui a dit que c’était la première fois qu’elle skiait. Elle a eu peur, donc je suis d’abord allée skier. Au bas de la colline, j’ai rencontré plus de mes camarades de classe, mais je n’ai pas vu mes autres amis. Je les ai parlés, et nous sommes descendus ensemble.
Dec. 10, 2020
Ma routine pour apprendre le français
Pour apprendre le français, j'essaie pratiquer un peu chaque jour. Dans le matin, après je mange le petit-déjeuner, je revis les flashcards pour apprendre la nouvelle vocabulaire. Aussi, quand je promène mon chien, j'écoute en podcast français pour améliorer mes compétences d'écouter la langue. Puis, quand l'école finit et j'ai plus de temps, je travaille dans mon manuel de français pour la grammaire. Je pense que la grammaire français est le plus difficile, donc je passe de moins un demi-heure pour réviser. En outre, je lis les articles et l'histoires en français d'utiliser la grammaire et la vocabulaire que j'ai appris. Quand j'ai l'opportunité, je parle avec les gens qui parlent le français, mais c'est rare parce que j'habite dans un lieu où l'anglais est le seul langue.
Bien sur, la routine au-dessus n'est pas ma routine tous les jours. Parfois, je me sens très paresseuse, et je n'ai pas l'énergie pratiquer les langues. Dans ces cas, je regarde les vidéos et les films que je m'intéresse avec les sous-titres.
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Discipline
Early this year when I start the new job.
I feel completely loss. (Maybe even now I still loss)
The job isn’t busy at all.
In fact is too “not busy”.
I got so many free time.
But I just don’t know how to use the extra free time properly.
Someday I will watch Netflix the whole day.
Someday I will read a book and do nothing.
Someday I may keep on exercise.
From now on I will start write down a list of “things to do” in my calendar.
Just one week ahead.
I want my future life become more discipline.
Dec. 10, 2020
"Living in extended families or small families"
Talking about families, some people differ about the idea of living together for extended families or just small families. This concept can come from ancient times, for example, the last century in my country, had families where were abundant with many kids, uncles, aunts, cousins, indeed with second-degree relatives. In contrast, these days the families prefer to keep small members.
First of all, I support the idea of living in small families (just parents and children, or could be included the grandparents) because each member family has its own space indoors of the house. However, some people believe a big family is the best way that can spend time each member, regardless of the space at home, this action can get more familiar among each person and gain a strong relationship. Mentioning my personal experience, when I was a child, my whole family was my parents, my sisters, and my grandmother; right now I am living alone, but my point is in that moment, I had a spacious environment at home due to my family was a small one, consequently, that gave me independency in my actions.
Other important reason that I support to live in small families, is that the family does not need to concern about other members, for the reason, there are few of them, each of them understands the responsibility without bothering other members. For example, in my childhood, my parents had their own jobs, my sisters and I were students, and the last member of the family was my grandmother that she just spent time at home reading books, sowing seeds in the garden, knitting clothes, and doing other activities. It means each member knows the responsibilities inside and outside the house.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that to live in small families is less troublesome and each member gains independence in their life.
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Journal 12/10/20
In our region decades ago, every village had a small river that surrounded the village, and there was only an entrance to the village, and the entrance was all located in the southern part of the village. I heard from the old people that the small river is dogged to protect the village. The small river was not too wide, it seemed only 5 to 10 meters. But at that time, there was a lot of water in the river and many reeds grew up in the river. Our village was a production team then, as a production content, the team raised fish in the river every year. When summer arrives, we could see fish eating the reed leaves and the Chu trees fruits (because there were many Chu trees on the river side) Sometimes in the early morning we could see a group of fish closing to the water surface and breathing with a big mouth. When the mid-autumn festival arrives, this is the fishing season. When adults go fishing in the river with nets, you could see many black carp and silver carp flying out of the water. That kind of scene was really shocking and it was the happiest moment for our children. But many years ago, the river had dried up and my village was not what it used to be. All that I said can’t be seen anymore.
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