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Ich frage mich, ob sich mein Deutsch während der Pandemie verschlechtert hat. Was ich damit meine ist, dass ich mehrere kleine Korrekturen in meinen letzten Beiträgen bekommen habe im Vergleich zu den Beiträgen vom letzten Jahr.
Aber um fair zu sein, jetzt schlage ich normalerweise weniger Wörter nach und fühle ich mich selbstbewusst beim Schreiben. Das sollte etwas bedeuten, oder?
March 25, 2021
March 25, 2021
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March 25, 2021
Le domande (esercizi)
Trasforma ogni affermazione ad una domanda.
(Non faccio questo esercizio per un corso a scuola, studio da solo da un libro di esercizi)
1) I ragazzi cantano.
- I ragazzi cantano, no?
2) Luisa lavora.
- Luisa lavora, vero?
3) La casa è grande.
- La casa è grande, vero?
4. Loro viaggiano molto.
- Loro viaggiano molto, non è vero?
5. Voi dormite sempre.
- Voi dormite sempre, non è vero?
6. Le ragazze giocano a tennis.
- Le ragazze giocano a tennis, vero?
7. I bambini piangono.
- I bambini piangono, vero?
8. Tu fumi troppo.
- Tu fumi troppo, no?
9. Maria è andata a casa.
- Maria è andata a casa, vero?
10. La tua amica è ammalata.
- La tua amica è ammalata, vero?
March 25, 2021
할머니에 대해
저희의 할머니께서는 아주 예쁘시고 많이 재미있으세서, 할머니를 뵙으러 자주 가고 계세요. 말씀을 하는 거와 정원 가꾸기를 하는 것을 좋아하는데, 할머니께서 언젠가 외로워서, 저한테 너무 말씀해도 되세요. 그리고 할머니늬 댁께서 항상 따뜻하고 밝으세서 그곳께 가는 것을 좋아애요.
일전에, 할머니와 같이 카페께 가셨어요. 큰 맛있는 밀크셰이크를 드시는데 배부르게 먹은 걸 되셨어요. 그래서, 저는 할머니를 댁께 가져가셨어요. 댁께 계셨을 때 할머니께서는 홍 소파께 주무셨어요. 그리고 너무 너무 재미있으니까 다음 주에 다시 갔어요.
March 25, 2021
Phrases 3.25.21
1. Es-ce que tu crois si tu ne trouves pas ton âme sœur que tu ne vivras pas heureux à tout jamais?
2. Il y a une nouvelle série sur Netflix qui s’agit d’une appli de rencontre fictive dans laquelle les abonnés trouvent leur âme sœur grâce à ADN.
3. À Dubaï, on est expulsé du pays pour le moindre délit. Ça peut paraître sévère, mais en tant que femme, ça me met plus à l’aise au niveau de la sécurité que dans d’autre pays. À Dubaï, ils ne ferment même pas leur porte à clé!
4. Je vais rester à Dubaï pour 2 jours de plus.
5. Son appartement est bien agencé avec un grand balcon qui donne sur la ville. Je suis impatiente pour les fêtes qu’il va y faire cet été.
March 25, 2021
25 mars
Cette semaine a été pleine de choses à faire. Les vacances de printemps approchent, donc mes profs essaient de nous laisser à un bon point d'arrêt. C'est-a-dire ils veulent qu'on fasse beaucoup de devoirs et passe les exams de mi-semestre. Au même moment, c'est le temps de trouver un stage pour l'été (en fait c'est un peu tard... mais je n'ai pas de projets concrets). Du coup je suis très épuisée. Je suis la présidente du club d'étudiants d'origine asiatique, et à cause de l'augmentation de la violence contre les Américains d'origine asiatique, particulièrement la fusillade à Atlanta, j'ai beaucoup travail qui pèse à moi. Je juste espère que je peux tenir bon jusque aux vacances, et puis je peux me reposer. Récemment j'ai lu quelques posts sur un blog dans lesquels il s'agit de la productivité et des astuces pour les études. Avec un peu de chance pendant les vacances je peux mettre un planning en place basé sur les idées de ce blog. D'ici là... il me faut rester motivé!
March 25, 2021
我的故乡
我的故乡
xxx是我的故乡。虽然我是在华沙出生的，但是从来没住过华沙这座城市。我的故乡算不上城市。其实连小镇都算不上。我的故乡是一个离华沙不太远的乡村。
住这里的人不太多，大概有三百多个居民。大部分的房子都在一条柏油路的旁边。除了这条路之外，还有几条小路。我小时候时没有行人道，不过几年前随着整个县的发展，我的故乡也慢慢地发展起来。结果几年前我们这边也有了行人道。走路再也没有以前那么危险了。可以很安全地到公车站，再也不用担心会被路过地汽车撞到。我外公在世的时候当过村长。幸亏他当时办了按路灯的程序，我们就不用在黑暗之中从各个地方回家了。邻居之间的关系不错，之前谁都人是谁。不过最近几年，越来越多人来这边盖新房子，所以我们的邻居越来越多了。
我的故乡是很适合养狗养猫的地方。除了房子之外大概只有几片大森林。可以轻轻松松地散步，遛狗，骑自行车之类的。我家后面那片森林还有几座小小的山，冬天的时候可以滑雪橇。我小时候跟哥哥们常常去那里滑雪橇，特别好玩！冬天的时候，除了滑雪橇，还可以到另外一片森林里的小池塘去滑冰。我的故乡也有许多自然古迹。
由于我的故乡没有多大，因此连一所学校都没有。除了房子也没有任何其他的建筑。不过，有一家小小的商店，所以如果有什么很需要的商品，走路不到十分钟就可以到那里去买。非常方便！
March 25, 2021
Journal
Last year, I read about the benefits of keeping a gratitude journal somewhere on the internet; keeping a gratitude journal can help you focus on the positive elements of your life, deal with stress well, and manage relationships better.
Ever since then, I tried to practice such journaling several times, but it was kind of hard to come up with the appropriate sentences every time. I was either not creative enough, or I must have forgotten to think positively for some reason. :) So somewhere along the way, I gave up keeping such journals.
But recently, I came across this writer on a vegitarian community who was posting gratitude journals online everyday. Her lines (or sentences?) were beautiful, as if she was writing verses of poems. I wished I was a talented writer as she was, but unfortunately I’m not such a good writer..:) I might be good at writing in a logical and coherent piece, but never in such a poet-like (?) way.
Nevertheless, her journals definitely inspired me to resume my effort to keep the gratitude journals. So I shall write from time to time here about the things I’m grateful for, from today on.
I will start from now, right below here.
<Today’s Gratitude Journal>
1. I’m grateful for the beautiful sunflower plant on my window shield that is growing taller day by day and giving me a pleasure of looking at it.:)
2. I’m grateful for the rosemary plant that gives off fragrant smell in the morning.
3. I’m grateful for the weather that warmed up and has been enabling me to sun on the grass.:)
4. I’m grateful that I can have a cooked fish and fresh veggie juices for lunch.
5. I’m grateful for having a family who are always supportive of whatever I decide to do.
March 25, 2021
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March 25, 2021
Mammutbaum
Der Sequoia-Nationalpark in der USA ist einer der Orte in meiner Liste der Orte, die ich vor ich sterben besuchen muss. Riesenmammutbäume sind unglaublich, sie sind enorm und auch einer der ältesten lebenden Organismen der Erde. Einige sind 3500 Jahre alt, das heißt sie sind schon seit Ramses II Zeiten da! Ein Riesenmammutbaum im Park namens "The President" ist 3200 Jahre alte und 75 m groß. Indianer hatten natürlich viel Respekt vor den Bäumen, und es wird agenommen, dass der Namen "Sequoia" auf Englisch wurde zu Ehren von Sequoyah, der das Cherokee-Schreibsystem erfunden hat, gewählt. Obwohl Mammutbäume alt sind, der älteste Baum der Erde ist nicht einer, sondern einer 5000 Jahrer Kiefern namens Pinus longaeva, dessen Standort ein Geheimnis bleibt.
March 25, 2021
I Can't Bear It Anymore (pt.1)
Xinjiang cotton has become a hot topic in China. Here's how it played out: H&M claimed to be boycotting Xinjiang cotton. Then people found there is a connection between H&M and Better Cotton Initiative (BCI), an international non-profit membership organization registered in Switzerland in 2009, which works with stakeholders from cotton fields to suppliers, manufacturers and brands to provide a globally accepted definition of good cotton and to propose social and environmental standards that are applicable worldwide.
And many brands have joined this organization. Nike, Uniqlo, GAP, Zara and other brands that have joined the organization have all issued "banned Xinjiang cotton" statements on their official websites.
And then there's what happened today, with a large group of people calling for a boycott of these products. A group of people, led by the Communist Youth League's Weibo account, accused "These companies are trying to make money in China while creating rumors to boycott Xinjiang cotton? What a fool's errand!" And of course there was some hilarious criticism: "These US offical websites blocks us from seeing their websites! It's disgusting!" Of course the opposite is true, apparently it's our wonderful Great Fire Wall that blocks their official websites.
Seriously, I'm sick of it.
As we all know, this is related to the recent sanctions imposed on Xinjiang by European and American countries recently. But what exactly is going on in Xinjiang, do we Chinese know? I don't think most of us know. Chinese websites have blocked all news about Xinjiang concentration camps. Sorry, that's not accurate enough, it should be called blocking all negative news. It's like Biden's New Year's message this year, and the part about Xinjiang was just censored in Chinese Version. In China, everything about Xinjiang is positive. You can see on the Chinese Internet that small, unknown countries are sending people to visit Xinjiang and think Xinjiang is a wonderful place. There are also news articles denouncing the attempts by "foreign forces" to undermine China's unification. Can Chinese news sites report on the Xinjiang concentration camps? No, they can't. Because the first rule of journalism is that Chinese media are party-oriented. So what is going on in Xinjiang? I don't know. All the information comes from foreign media. How ironic to have to understand what is happening in our own country through other country's media.
March 25, 2021
I am a tea lover
I really like to drink tea even though most of Korean like to drink coffee.
With drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.
There are six types of tea such as Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.
When I learned very first time, my teacher recommaned me that comparing different types of tea in order to get insteresting
For example, White and Green tea are to drink in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.
When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and if you want to drink rare one, Yellow tea is the best choise.
Do you know the tastes of Green tea are different depending on Country of origin?
I like three Green teas in one day that made by China, Japan and Korea.
If you have a chance, I recommand to drink a tea like my way
March 25, 2021
Aspecto físico
Hola, es mi primera entrada :)
Tengo el pelo liso y moreno. Mis ojos son de color azul. Llevo gafas rosa. Tengo un lunar debajo de mi ojo izquierdo. Soy delgada y alta. Todavía no tengo ningunas arrugas.
Mi prima Weronika tiene el pelo largo i rizado. Ella es rubia y tiene una sonrisa bonita. Es alta y delgada y muy bonita. Creo que le parece como una modelo.
Mi hermano Rafał es moreno y tiene el pelo corto. Es delgado y alto, como el resto de la familia. Sus ojos son interesantes. Uno es de color azul y otro de color marrón. Él no tiene barba ni bigote.
March 25, 2021
Arashiyama
Arashiyama is one of the sightseeing spots in Kyoto. It's famous for cherry blossoms, autumn leaves, bamboos, and temples. In addition, there are many shops at the foot of the mountains, so you can enjoy food or shopping. When I visited there, there are junior and high school students on a school trip, and people wearing kimono. If you ride the Sagano Romantic train, you can see the nature and beauty of the valley relaxingly.
March 25, 2021
March 25, 2021
Calculator vs smartphone
Yesterday, I was talking to my friend about smartphone.
She said in her case the most frequent used features in her smartphone is the torch.
I agree too because I used that a lot too.
But she reminds me there is one feature in smartphone is not that many people use.
That is the calculator function.
In fact, I saw many people still use a “real” calculator at work.
I also using a calculator even my smartphone got the same function.
I wonder will you have the same behavior just like me?
Do tell me if also same as me and can you explain why we didn’t use that features in our smartphone?
March 25, 2021
Noël aves famille et amies!
Cette vacanes de Noel, j'ai eu beacoup de amuse. La nuit avant Noel j'ai dormi à huit heure. La prochain jour, quand j'ai réveillé j'ai vu beacoup cadeaux selon la arbre de Noel. Je suis alle vers les et ai commence à ouvrir les. Noël avec la famille et les amis! Ces vacances de Noël, je me suis beaucoup amusé. La nuit avant Noël, j'ai dormi à huit heures. Le lendemain, quand je me suis réveillé, j'ai vu beaucoup de cadeaux selon l'arbre de Noël. Je suis allé les voir et j'ai commencé à les ouvrir. J'ai ete tres excité et j'ai n'oublie pas comme ces moments!
March 25, 2021
100th Post on LangCorrect
Today, I'm really excited to have my 100th post on LangCorrect in only less than a year, and grateful for all those who have been involved in correcting my work. They have provided detailed correction for all of my ninety-nine writings I have posted so far. Even though I still have failed to add "a" or "the" and mistaken on simple grammars like tenses and plural forms, I feel that my vocabulary and writing skills have improved, and I use the dictionary less frequently than before. If you make sentences by yourself without hesitation and have native speakers correct your articles, you can realize your lack of knowledge and your bad habits.
As many users do, I have managed to pick up a wide variety of topics not to make readers feel bored. As a result, I could learn a variety of expression on several fields. I admire some users who have published more than 100 posts for their efforts since it is difficult to find attractive topics. Nonetheless, I'm going to join 30 Day Language Challenge which is supposed to start from April 1st. I was surprised to see the participant list because it seems that Japanese is most popular language in LangCorrect community. I will keep helping Japanese learners and learning English as well.
March 25, 2021
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March 25, 2021
Mein Leben jetzt
Es war eine lange Zeit, seit ich hier etwas geschrieben habe. Weil ich ein bisschen traurig und müde über alles das wir hier in Brasilien erleben bin. Die Pandemie brachte uns so viele Toten und wir haben auch eine Regierung, die weiter um FakeNews zu teilen geht. Es ist nicht eine gute Stunde um Brasilianisch zu sein.
Ich habe Freunde und Bekannter verloren.
Ich hoffe, am Ende bleiben meine Familie und ich gesund!
March 25, 2021
Adondé me mudaría?
Si podría mudarme adonde en el mundo, me mudaría a Vietnam. Porqué? Pues, he estado allí y me encantan la comida y el gente. Todo el gente es muy bien. La comida es muy inexpensivo. El tiempo es muy hermoso. Me gusta estando fuera y caminando en la playa.
Tambien, me hablaba la idioma así, pienso sería una transicion facíl.
March 25, 2021
Boudicca
Na antiga Grã-Bretanha, a rainha Boudicca foi atacado por um exército romano. Quando seu marido morreu, as forças romanas tentaram pegar o poder dos Icenos. A rainha viúva lutou para a independência. Massacrou milhares de moradores de cidades na ilha de Grã-Bretanha. Depois de uma batalha sangrenta, a Rainha Boudicca morreu na derrota militar.
Mas quase dois mil anos depois da sua vida, Bouddica foi interpretado como heroína. A Rainha Victoria foi descrito como um Boudicca moderna, símbolo de independência na Grã-Bretanha.
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