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July 18, 2021
July 18, 2021
Une journée avec mon amie
Mon amie m'a envoyée un texte il y a trois jours. Elle a voulu de voir moi avant que je sorte. Alors, aujourd'hui, nous nous avons rencontrés. Nous avons pris le déjeuner ensemble. Puis nous avons fait du shopping. En effet, nous n'avons pas acheté une seulement pièce. Moi, j'ai déjà acheté plusieurs vêtements le dimanche dernier, alors je n'ai voulu rien. Mon amie a vu une robe rose très belle, et elle a tombé amoureux avec cette robe immédiatement. Mais cette robe a coûté neuf mille yuans ! C'est folle !
July 18, 2021
Do you usually remember your dreams in the morning?
I usually don't remember my dreams in the morning.
But, some mornings I do remember. I just remember of stressful dreams.
The dreams are remember have always the same pattern : I have to go somewhere but I have difficulties to go there.
In one dream I had to go to a place by bike but my bike was broken, so I have to look for an another way to travel (car, bus, train...)
In another dream I had to travel by plane but my travel documents were not enough to pass accross the border.
In fact I just remember of dreams about travels that turn bad. That probably says something about me...
July 18, 2021
The most significant transportation innovation
With the developing technology of the past 200 years many modes of transportation appeared. Although each means of transportation is very important according to its use, airplanes are at the front of these transportation vehicles. Because airplanes have more advantages than other public transportation vehicles.
First of all, he most significant feature of airplane is speed. With the invention of the airplane, the journey that would take days with cars is reduces to a few hours. Therefore, people can save their time and can visit their loved ones who live far away whenever they want. To give an example, it takes about 24 hours to drive from Turkey to Germany. And traveling 24 hours without a break is really tiring and wearing. But thanks to the plane, I can go to Germany in 3 hours comfortably without getting tired. This is really big chance for me.
Another important point is that the planes are more comfortable. Traveling from one country to another, or even to another continent, takes a lot of time. Also, people need to be more comfortable on these long journeys. In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation. In this regard, airplanes provide the most comfortable transportation. People can sleep comfortably, eat, use the toilet, and watch movies even on long journeys. In other words, airplanes are designed for passengers to travel comfortably.
Another important advantage is that airplanes are most safety transportation mode. Studies show that, the lowest accident risk is seen on airplane trips. That's why people travel by feeling safe.
As a result, the most significant means of transport for me are airplanes because of the advanteges it has. Thanks to airplane, the farthest places turn into the nearest places.
July 18, 2021
Golden Slumber
I have finished reading "Golden Slumber"! It took me more than a month to read it. At the beginning, I thought it was boring, so I read quit slowly.
The atmosphere of the book is stressful. Just like you are confronting a strong power which is everywhere. But the worse is you don't know where is it. You have to keep escaping again and again. It is similar with "1984", but it is worse than it. Because in "1984", most people are facing the same question, whereas in "Golden Slumber", only the main actor is confronting the circumstance like that.
He is unlucky to be trapped, but he is also lucky in some points. He has several good friends in college, he has lots of wonderful memories with them. When he is escaping, he gets a number of help. Some of which is from strangers. Obivating the part of inference, the novel also is a urban novel.
July 18, 2021
Feynmanium
Richard Feynman ist wahrscheinlich mein Lieblingswissenschaftler aller Zeit. Er war einfach ein Genie, sein Leben ist voller lustige Anekdötchen. Als Kind entdeckte er die trigonometrischen Funktionen selbst. Als Teenager war er schon ein mathematisches Wunderkind und erzielte Bestnoten beim prestigeträchtigen Putnam-Mathewettbewerb. An der Uni studiert Feynman alles und forscht sogar Dinge in Biologie. Nicht alles war Perfekt, Feynmans Freundin, die er sehr liebte, war unheilbar an Tuberkulose erkrankt. Während seiner Zeit in Los Alamos schrieb er ihr Briefe und die beiden heirateten schließlich, bevor sie starb. Er würde weitermachen und für seine Arbeiten zur Quantenfeldtheorie erhielt er den Nobelpreis für Physik. Er mochte den Preis jedoch nicht und dachte, der Preis liege darin, Wissen über der Welt zu erlangen. Er war gegenüber solchen Formalitäten immer respektlos. In Los Alamos war er dafür bekannt, Tresore aufzubrechen und seine berühmten Bongo-Trommeln zu spielen. Er war einmal für ein Sabbatjahr in Brasilien, wo er Samba tanzen lernte und sogar am Karneval teilnahm. Element 137, wurde von Feynman als das letzte mögliche Element bezeichnet und würde als solches, wenn es entdeckt würde, seinen Namen erhalten.
July 18, 2021
July 18, 2021
I have good result
Last whole week I have been jogging one hour each day.
It was not too exhausted but it was good amount of excise.
This week I tried the gym.
And I only focus on excise a single part of muscle.
I started training upper chest for one full hour.
As result I was so exhausted.
I need to take a full day rest on the next day.
So, in total I only spent four days in the gym.
But I did have some good result.
I am getting thin than before.
Two weeks hard work, a tire body but surprisingly satisfy.
I should keeping that as habit.
July 18, 2021
Practicing Drawing
Yesterday, I saw a video on YouTube which was about the pixel art.
Pixel are is about drawing pictures with many dots on the computer.
It uses for computer games as well.
I always wanted to learn to draw so I focused on how to draw the pictures with many pixels.
While drawing by myself, it turned out that I could draw the pixel art.
I was happy with other contents of his channel,so I finally subscribed him.
Nice pictures always make me relieved.
Now I am looking forward to his next contents.
And I will try to practice drawing over and over again.
July 18, 2021
교동도
오늘 남편과 남편의 사촌 동생과 같이 교동고에 갔다. 나와 남편은 한 번 같이 가 봤는데 사촌 동생은 가 본 적이 아예 없었다. 지난 번에 갔을 때 추운 크리스마스 날이었지만 오늘은 무더운 여름 날이라서 느낌이 많이 달랐다. 겨울에 갔을 때 교동도의 저수지가 완전히 얼었으니까 남편이 그 얼음 위에 앉아서 내가 사진을 찍어 주었다. 오늘은 저수지에는 예쁜 연꽃이나 수련 (둘 중에서 정확히 무엇이었는지 확실하지 않다)이 피고 있었고 햇빛이 수면에 반짝였다. 그리고 푸른 논팥이 과 넓이 펼쳐진 하늘이 너무 아름다웠다. 날씨가 더웠는데 경치가 너무 예뻐서 행복했다.
아름다운 경치를 감상하는 것 빼고 오늘 교동도에서 한 일은 전망대 가는 것과 카페 가는 것, 그리고 전통 시장에 가는 것이었다. 교동도가 북한에서 많이 가까워서 망원경을 사용하지 않아도 북한 땅은 물론이고 건물까지 다 보인다. 망원경을 사용하면 걷거나 자전거를 타는 북한 사람도 보이는데 나 개인적으로 동물원에서 동물을 보는 것처럼 북한 사람을 보는 것이 좀 아니라고 생각한다.
전망대를 떠난 뒤 카페에 가서 시원한 음료수를 마셨다. 카페에서 보이는 논밭과 바다가 역시 예뻤다. 음료수를 다 마신 다음에 전통 시장에 갔다. 시장이 별로 크지 않은데 너무 매력적이다. 한국에 있는 다른 시장과 느낌이 많이 다르기 때문이다. 정확히 어떻게 다른지 설명하기가 어려워서 한 번 가 보시는 것을 추천한다.
July 18, 2021
July 18, 2021
Ma routine matinale
Tous les matins, je me lève à six heures et demie. C'est une habitude maintenant. Donc, je me lave le visage et me brosse les dents. Tu sais, l'habituel. Après ca, je vais dans la cuisine pour faire mon petit-dejeuner. Généralement, j'ai un sandwich avec une tasse de lait. C'est très délicieux ! Donc, un autre jour commence.
July 18, 2021
July 18, 2021
On The Name of The Rose by Umberto Eco
I finished reading this books some weeks ago. I read the Spanish translation, which is said to be pretty close to the original version, given the great similarities between the Italian and the Spanish languages. I enjoyed it, its story seemed very familiar to me, a person very fascinated and more or less acquainted with the medieval philosophy.
The book's narrator is an old monk who want to write down the weirdest and most incredible events that he witnessed when, while young, was sent as the secretary of an intelligent and puzzling Franciscan. The book is filled with loadings taken from medieval texts. I could recognize the influence of a vision of Charles Bouvelles in the description of the tympanum of the abbey's church. This book is the work of a mind profoundly attached to the more general spirit of the medieval times. Just a scholar like Umberto Eco, so versed in this tradition, could possibly create it. Despite this, the very fact that Eco were a scholar, accustomed to write academic texts with well-defined structures an arguments, had a influence in the style and composition of the book. Some parts of it seem to be necessary not to the flow of the story, but to the idea that Eco had of what a novel should be. I would have liked to find in it more literary boldness against the academical fixedness.
The Name of the Rose is a novel about books; about how books could give form the mind of the medieval reader, how books could arise so terrible passions, how books could be both a blessing and a curse.
July 18, 2021
July 18, 2021
July 18, 2021
N°7 comment la technologie moderne changer les métiers ?
La technologie moderne non seulement change la vie quotidienne mais aussi comment les métiers marchent, soit dans le domain d'innovation, soit dans l'industrie alimentaire. Je vais montre quelques exemples pour m'expliquer.
D'abord dans l'industrie alimentaire, tous les échantillons pouvent être analysés au laboratoire. Comme ça, on sais combien de sel contient par les olives où quel coleur donne le malt. Donc, on peut faire des produits désirés précisément. Auparavant, les producteurs d'olives où les basseurs devaient produire leurs désirés par millions de tâtonnements. Mais avec l'analyse de laboratoire, on peut économiser le temps pour tâtonnements en sachant mieux les détails de chaque materials premières.
Aussi, l'environment de production peut être plus précisé par le controle d'ordinateur, comme la température, l'humidité etc., ça réassure la qualité de produit final, et aussi reduit la perte possible.
Ensuite, avec l'aide de machine, il rend les charges de travail de main-œuvres moins fastidieux. Par exemple, le Glutton, un grand aspirateur belge qui avale n'importe quoi dans la rue, peut aider les balayeurs. Il réponde ainsi au besoin de villes plus propres avec des équipes de nettoyage revalorisées et motivées grâce à un matériel adapté.
Tous les exemples montent que la technologie moderne peut augmenter l'efficace du travail. Mais il y a aussi d'enjeu environmentaux parce que comme ça la production va utiliser plus d'energie et donc plus de pollution. Cependant, avec la technologie verte, il y a plus d'entreprises qui utilisent d'énergie verte et ils considerent plus sur les impacts environmentaux et les améliorent dès la conception.
July 18, 2021
The Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci
The Mona Lisa by Leonard da Vinci is probably the most famous painting of all time. Should it be? In your opinion, does it live up to the hype?
I think the real question isn't whether the Mona Lisa should be the most famous painting in the world, but why it is so. Surely, there aren't enough reasons to say why one good painting is better than another. There are just two kinds of artworks, which are good and which are bad. No more than that. The special importance that a painting could have is determined by the mythology that the art world creates around it; arguably, one can even say that some feelings that an artwork causes in its public (consider the conceptual art) respond to the same reason. The people rush into the Louvre as the people rush into a church that guard a special and saint object. What there are looking for isn't the painting with its real features, but the mythical irrational story that the painting embodies. Walter Benjamin, the German philosopher, talked about the "Aura" of the objects of art, with that term he signified the unique presence of the object, the Aura resides in the impossibility that an artwork has to be reproduced exactly the same. Even in the best copy there is something missing. The Mona Lisa is probably the most reproduced image in the world, but the people still peregrinate to the original. When we love something, we want its presence, its Aura. But, where does the fascination with the Mona Lisa come from? There should a lot of historical events that transfigured a simple portrait into an iconic image. It's this web of little facts which push the people towards the Mona Lisa. Now, when discussing its importance, we just add fuel to the fire.
The Mona Lisa live up to the hype, as long as the expectations are to see a simple painting. There is less possibility of fascination when something is deformed by the burden of exaggerated claims about itself.
July 18, 2021
July 17, 2021
July 17, 2021
La nourriture que j'ai un désir extrême à manger
Il y en a beaucoup car j'habite loin de mon pay natal, mais si je devait en choisir un, je dirais que ça sera le cheese cake. Après avoir commencé à habiter ici en France, j'ai constaté qu'il n'y avait pas de cheese cake comme celui aux États-Unis ou au Japon. Certains patisseries les vendent mais ils ne se ressemblent pas du tout aux cheese cakes d'origine. Ils sont plus denses, et plus onctueux, alors que ceux de France sont plus moelleux et légères. Je pense que ceux d'origine américaine seraient populaires s'ils se vendent ici, car ils ont plus de goût de fromage. Plutôt, à mon avis, comme la France produit le meilleur fromage au monde, elle pourrait faire les meilleurs cheese cakes au monde logiquement.
July 17, 2021
July 17, 2021
La princesa gorda
Hace una década me interesaba jugar los videojuegos con mis amigos, pero ya no tanto. Eso debido parcialmente que ahora la mayoría tienen hijos y familas a las que cuidar. A veces es difícil quedar con ellos porque dedican su tiempo mayormente a sus familias, lo cual tiene implicaciones para el tiempo que comparten conmigo. Me acuerdo de un videojuego que me encantaba en el que había dos equipos competiendo para infiltrar el castilo del otro. Luego, había de secuestrar la princesa de los oponentes y llevarla de vuelta al castilo de tu propio equipo. El escenario era de fantasia, así que existía varios personajes entre los cuales uno podía elegir ser. Lo interesante era que los jugadores podían intentar defender su princesa por buscar comida en la zona cercana del castilo para llevarlo a ella y de esta manera hacer que ella se engordara. Eso estorbaba el secuestro de los opositores porque hacía que cuando cargaban a ella estaba más pesada y con ella se displazaban más lento.
July 17, 2021
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