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Aug. 2, 2021
A busy day, today
Today was a busy day. I did things I don't used to do. I was out of my home most of the day, didn't read nor write anything. Today I wanted to continue the writing of a fictional dialogue. Now, I don't feel I'm in the mood for that. May be tomorrow.
While J. was driving I thought of all the unconscious decision we took along the day. I don't know exactly what this means, it just stroke me as a passing idea. Other thing I've been thinking about this day is that all the researches - at least those that are in the field of humanities- are essentially discourses. With this I mean that every result should be express in a text that resemble a speech. It has to be coherent and articulated, as a history. The order is critical too. What matter should be addressed first? Can be use a sort of historical criteria? Or is it better to use one based on the importance of the given subject? These are questions that I think every humanist have resolved before. But, they are encrypted in the structure an tone of theirs texts.
Now, I only want to sleep.
Aug. 2, 2021
Aug. 2, 2021
El mes de julio
¡Este mes me han pasado muchas cosas!
1) Conocí a los padres de mi novio y hablamos casi exclusivamente en español, lo cual me hizo ilusión
2) Comí mucho durante ese viaje y probé platos nuevos de algunas culturas (por ejemplo, comida persa y bolas de arroz japonesas)
3) Di una presentación al club de lectura sobre el libro del mes, 'El amor en los tiempos del cólera'
4) Aprendí a asegurar para la escalada
5) Fui a dos planetarios
6) Mi amiga se mudó a otra ciudad a tres horas de distancia en avión
7) Mi hermana vino de visita
8) Me ha encantado ver los Juegos Olímpicos
Aug. 2, 2021
Aug. 2, 2021
une ville universitaire
Je vis dans une ville universitaire et cette universitaire est connue pour leur football américaine équipe, donc j'imagine que quand quellqun veut visiter ici, c'est parce qu’ils ont de grands fans de ce sport, et ils voulaient toutes les choses qui correspond avec ça. Moi, personnellement, e ne suis pas une énorme fan, donc je ne peux pas vraiment dire tout les chose a personne doit faire à cause de ça. Mais pour une chose à éviter en termes de ça, je suggère rester pas plus que deux semaines, parce que si tu restes plus longue que ça, tu vas deviner ennuyer, parce qu'il n’y a rien à faire ici, franchement.
Aug. 2, 2021
2021/08/01
自從上了藝大後，我都是使用電腦來畫畫的。用電腦畫畫比較方便，如果畫錯了可以馬上改，而且不需花很多時間就可以試試不同的畫法。我現在主要用 iPad Pro 或繪圖板來畫畫，認為各有各的好處。要是用 iPad 的話，無論去到哪裏都可以畫。反而坐在電腦前用繪圖板，顯示器的螢幕大，看到的範圍也更多，而且不用彎著脖子看螢幕，所以畫得更加舒服。舊時我喜歡用 Photoshop，但最近由於幾個原因以改了用 Clip Studio Paint。Clip Studio Paint 不用每個月付款，交了一次費用就不需擔心了。因為這個軟件是為繪圖愛好者而製作的，所以它擁有的功能都比較適合我。更何況其他用戶會在官方網站上上傳自己創造的素材，因此有很多不同筆刷可以試試看。看起來我好像在寫廣告一樣，但我真的超級喜歡用這個軟件來畫畫。
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
Une visite à ma fille
Demain matin je vais rendre visite à ma fille. J’ai vraiment hâte de la voir. La dernière fois que je l’ai vue était en Octobre. On parle à FaceTime 4 ou 5 fois par semaine mais c’est pas la même chose.
Mon ex-femme habite à peu près cinq heures de ma blonde et moi. Le plan c’est d’aller chercher ma fille demain après midi et puis de rester à un hôtel demain soir. Ma fille adore nager alors on va probablement visiter la piscine plusieurs fois. En plus, on va aller manger a son restaurant préféré. C’est assez proche de l’hôtel et ils servaient le petit déjeuner pendant toute la journée. Je vais la gâté et je vais la laissée manger ce qu’elle veut.
Après ça, on va rendre visite à ma sœur et sa famille. Elle a deux petits garçons qui sont à peu près la même âge que ma fille. Il y a un grand parc qui est proche à ma sœur et les enfants adore jouer ici. Ils peut facilement passé quelques heures par jour ici.
L’autre chose qu’on va essayer de faire c’est de visiter le zoo. Toutes les enfants aime les animals et parfois il y a l’opportunité d’y caresser. En plus, le dernier fois qu’on est allé ma fille a monter un petit cheval. Au debut elle avait peur mais vers le fin elle était vraiment contente.
Ces visites sont vraiment spéciales pour ma fille et moi. J’essaie de prendre plusieurs photos et on cree des mémoires pour la reste de nos vies.
Aug. 1, 2021
Bon weekend
Je suis allée au musée de Picasso aujourd'hui car l'entrée du musée était gratuit. Il y avait plein d'oeuvres qui n'étaient pas exposée parce que ce musée a troqué ces œuvres contre celles du musée du Rodin. Une explication imprimée sur le mur a dit qu'ils avaient beaucoup de points communs, mais personne ne sait que s'ils étaient amis ou ils avaient des échanges de quelque sort.
Ce qui m'a faut plaisir, c'est des toiles d'Henri Rousseau collectionés par Picasso, qui l'admirait pour son talent à peindre librement. Mon mari et moi nous sommes renseignés sur ce douanier il y a environ deux mois. A ce moment là on avait déjà connu son nom mais pas plus. Par la suite on est tombé sur une châine Youtube mené par M. Goro Yamada, qui répondrait à des questions sur des tableaux célèbres. Dans ses quatre vidéos, il a expliqué comment était Rousseau et ses histoires avec humeur, ce qui nous a fait aimer ce peintre exceptionnel. Malheureusement, il n'y a pas de sous-titres, même en japonais, mais je vous recommande de chercher un peu d'informations sur lui comme les histoires concernant lui sont assez passionnantes.
Aug. 1, 2021
Bergman und Ullmann, perfektes Duo
Ich lese gerade Bergmans kurz Autobiografie namens "Laterna Magica" (die magische Laterne). Ich bin ein großer Fan von seiner Filme und jetzt als ich dieser Biografie lese, fasziniert mich Bergman immer noch. Ein Aspekt, den ich sehr interessant finde, ist seine Beziehung mit Liv Ullmann. Bergman hat Ullmann 1965 während der Produktion von Persona kennengelernt, und es scheint, dass die beiden sofort verbunden waren. Das war eine seltsame Zeit in Bergmans Leben, er war schon immer von Melancholie geplagt. Es scheint, als hätte die Beziehung zu Ullmann eine neue Phase in seinem Leben begonnen. Eine neue Phase für beide wirklich. Das Filmen von Persona auf einer Insel scheint den beiden geholfen zu haben, sich zu verbinden, da sie lange Spaziergänge gemacht haben und anscheinend sie alles miteinander geteilt haben, gute und schlechte Meinungen, ohne Vorurteile oder Angst voreinander. Als ihre Verbindung gestärkt und Bergman bemerkte, dass er in Liv verliebt war, sagte er:
"...du och jag är smärtsamt anslutna"
Ich fand es wirklich schön.
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
My Struggle
After dinner, I felt exhausted. I knew I should go to study, such as English, drums etc. But what I want to do was to read a novel online because I didn't want to think anything, and I haven't been to the top floor for a few days. Today was cool, I thought I should go upstairs to enjoy the comfortable moment.
I picked a bl novel randomly. To my surprise, it was pretty good. There was a plot that a boy A had a relationship online, he just talked to his boyfiend on telephone, they had never seen each other for six months before they broke up. His roommate asked him why he didn't have a ralationship with somebody live nearby, so that they could hang out a lot. A answered,"I just felt lonely and wanted to have connection with someone."
Suddenly, I found out that it is the same reason why I wanted to read a novel instead of learning something. Intellectually, I should've learned something I think is more valuable such as English, which can help me with my IELTS. In contrast, reading a novel was unvalued, which was wasting fo time. Emotionally, I wanted to take a break from a whold day work. The two thoughts were fighting. As a result, I couldn't concerntrate on the novel totally because I felt guilty. I
could hardly enjoy myself. Furthermore, I began to think where I really want to be? Who I really want to be? What I think I should do is really what I want to do? I had no answer.
Two hours later, I felt bored. Thus, I stopped reading. When I was on my way of taking the rubbish out, I remember the sentence from the entry which was about the satisfaction running. "Running was so easy that I just needed to run step by step. The right foot, then the left foot, again and again." Yep, life can be also easier and simpler when I just take it step by step. So, I sit down and write down my struggle to improve my English. And then I need to go to bed early and get up early.
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
Diary
I've been feeling bad lately. Whatever it is now fills me with a kind of dread about writing for my weekly classes. I spend a lot of time in front of the computer, but I have absolutely no idea what to write about. I'm striving for perfection too much, and some topics I'm framing are too ambitious and I have no control over them at all. Although these assignments are optional, I have failed to turn them in 3 times. This is not a good start. Moreover, the process of drafting the writing took too long, which also affected my entire schedule.
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
A Mayoral Election
Today, I went to a mayoral election. The polling place was an elementary school nearby, and I felt nostalgic. I thought its gymnasium was huge when I was a kid, but it wasn't so big as I expected. Additionally, the basket goals were in a low position. I literally looked at them from a different perspective.
Aug. 1, 2021
Concerts
I am sad because all concerts canceled and postponed during COVID-19.
I really like watching classical concerts
When I selected a location to move my new house, an important vector was that the location should be close to a concert hall.
After getting off work, I used to visit the hall and watched performances.
This routine was my best thing lifting me up.
Be I haven't watched any concert since 2 years.
Taking in an online concert is not enough for me.
I hope the pandemic will come to an end soon.
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
Dia primeiro de agosto
No um dia da viagem, nós visitamos Arashiyama.
É uma montanha pequena no Quioto.
O lugar estava lotado de turistas, e estava muito quente!
No trem há ar-condicionado.
Então, nós pegava o trem e viajava perto no distrito.
Mas eu achei a linha do trem foi parecido com a Montanha Ali em Taiwan.
Eu não senti supreedente.
Quando você visitava o distrito, você tinha de visitar a Ponte Togetsukyo e a foresta de bambu.
A ponte foi em cima do rio grande.
Na foresta de bambu famosa, nós sentimos tépido.
Além disso, há muitos os templos e os santuários velhos.
Aug. 1, 2021
Aug. 1, 2021
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Le cheerleader dovrebbero essere uno sport olimpico?
Le cheerleader sono il caposaldo di ogni partita. Riempiono gli stadi di energia attraverso i propri gridi e incoraggiamento. Aiutano a rafforzare lo spirito dei giocatori quando perdono la partita, o quando sembra che le probabilità siano contro di loro. È probabile che gli spettatori le vedano come mere attrezzature sceniche per imbellire il panorama, ma per chi gioca, le cheerleader sono un pilastro morale fondamentale.
Quindi, le cheerleader meritano essere incluse negli sport olimpici? Sì.
Le cheerleader non appartengono tecnicamente al mondo sportivo. Quello che fanno è proprio un'arte; Le danze e i movimenti sono difficili da compiere, e nonostante questo, sono fatti con grazia. Questo merita una quantità sostanziale di rispetto.
Tuttavia, per non divergere dal tema, i giochi olimpici non sono i medesimi giochi che esistevano secoli fa. Sia i participanti sia il pubblico hanno vociferato che i giochi sono qualcosa di troppo esclusivo e per questo motivo hanno chiesto una maggior inclusività. Il comitato dei giochi di quest'anno sono stato finalmente ceduto a queste richieste. Ebbene, abbiamo visto il debutto del pattino qualche settimana fa.
Aug. 1, 2021
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Le cheerleader dovrebbero essere uno sport olimpico?
Le cheerleader sono il caposaldo di ogni partita. Riempiono gli stadi di energia attraverso i propri gridi e incoraggiamento. Aiutano a rafforzare lo spirito dei giocatori quando perdono la partita, o quando sembra che le probabilità siano contro di loro. È probabile che i spettatori le vedano come mere attrezzature sceniche per imbellire il panorama, ma per chi gioca, le cheerleader sono un pilastro morale fondamentale.
Quindi, le cheerleader meritano essere incluse negli sport olimpici? Sì.
Le cheerleader non appartengono tecnicamente al mondo sportivo. Quello che fanno è proprio un'arte; Le danze e i movimenti sono difficili da compiere, e nonostante questo, sono fatti con grazia. Questo merita una quantità sostanziale di rispetto.
Tuttavia, per non divergere dal tema, i giochi olimpici non sono i medesimi giochi che esistevano secoli fa. Sia i participanti sia il pubblico hanno vociferato che i giochi sono qualcosa di troppo esclusivo e per questo motivo hanno chiesto una maggior inclusività. Il comitato dei giochi di quest'anno sono stato finalmente ceduto a queste richieste. Ebbene, abbiamo visto il debutto del pattino qualche settimana fa.
Aug. 1, 2021