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Jan. 3, 2022
여러 나라의 아침식사
오늘 친구와 이야기를 중에 몇몇 한국 사람들은 보통 아침 식사로 라면을 먹는다는 말을 듣고 깜짝 놀랐다.
"건강에 좋지 않을 것이지? 라면이 얼마 소금을 있는 거 알아?" 나는 웃게 말했다. 나에게는 라면이 아침식사 같은 음식이 아니다.
포르투갈 사람들은 아침 식사로 커피와 함께 우유를 하고, 빵을 먹는다. 그런 음식이 더 건강하는 거 같다. 하지만 여러 나라에 온 사람들이 다른 음식 종류 먹을 거 인다. 유럽에 우유 하고 커피 하고 빵 하고 치즈 보통 먹은 대다. 하지만 예를 들어 일본 사람이 생선을 먹고 미국 사람이 팬케이크를 먹는다.
Jan. 3, 2022
Complaining
This morning I read a tweet where a man was complaining about dogs into a bar. The man told, that there was four dogs in the interior, and that, bothered him. About behavior of animals, him don't tell anything, simply bother him the number of dogs. Usually, people go to bar to drink a beer, coffee or eating a snak or sandwich. When people go with dogs to a bar, normally they take their consummation on tables in the outside of the bar.
Jan. 3, 2022
3 janvier 2022 - À faire absolument
« Quelle est la 1er chose la plus importante que vous voulez faire avant de disparaître ? »
C'est une question très difficile parce qu'il y a beaucoup de choses que je voulais faire dans ma vie, par exemple faire un tour du monde. Dès petite, j’ai déjà avoir cette idée comme rêve, en inspirant par « Le Tour du Monde en 80 jours ». Ce serait cool de pouvoir mettre les pieds aux quatre coins du monde. C'est pourquoi j'aime lire les histoires d'Echo, une écrivaine chinoise qui racontait sa vie à l'étranger. Mais au contraire de ce qu'on avait fait dans « Le tour du Monde en 80 jours», je voudrais rester dans un endroit plus longtemps pour m'immerger dans sa culture plutôt que de m’empêcher pour tenir le challenge.
Mais comme voyager coûte cher, je pense qu'apprendre les languages soient aussi une bonne chance pour découvrir le monde.
Jan. 3, 2022
maple leaves
I have visited Japan during the Spring and Winter. I smiled in the wind that accompanied the falling sakura and felt fully satisfied in the outdoor hot springs under the drifting down snow.
These maple leaves were so colorful and vivid here. It reminded me of the Fall in Japan that I haven't had a chance to experience.
Jan. 3, 2022
道歉信
Lieber Tim,
tud mir sehr leid. Ich kann dich nicht zum Bahnhof abhollen. Wenn ich muss in das Büro arbeiten.
lassen sie mir dich den Weg zu meinem Hause. Zuerste gehen Sie die Straße entlang bis zum Platz. Dann gehen Sie über dem Platz, beden Sie nach rechts ab. Danach gehen Sie im geraderaus. Zum schluss sehen Sie meine Hause. Ich freue auf dich.
Lieber Grüße
Unterschrift Emilia
Jan. 3, 2022
la santé
Depuis j'ai cinq ans, je mange très mal nourriture, cependant à mon avis le pire c'était le sucre dans le boissons. Par example au lieu d'ai mangé de poisson ou du pain complet, j'ai mangé des frites et mes parents m'ont permis de boire un whiskey avec glace.
cependant Aujord'hui Je suis un homme changé, je ne mange plus de cuisine avec beaucoup de sucre.
Et à présent sans y penser je commande un repas avec des legumes biologiques. c'est vraiment mielleur pour mon santé.
j'adore le plein air. Alors, j'allais en velo à les forêts deux jours par semaine, jusqu'à je venais de partir en velo quand je suis tombé et j'ai cassé mon bras, c'était très pénible.
Maintenaant mon père et moi faisons la natation afin de rester en forme.
Le nourriture est super important. Car si on mange mal nourriture que on serait gros ou mal santé. Malheureusement
fast-food est partout, surtout en Angleterre. Partout il y a des gros gens. c'est n'aide pas le NHS, Ma mère qui est médecin dit que trop de gens meurent à cause de fast-food.
Jan. 3, 2022
la télé
Pour moi la télévision est une récompense après avoir travaillé toute la journée.
Par Example hier j’ai regardé un documentaire qui a parlé des changements climatiques. Malheureusement c’était moins marrant qu’un cartoons.
Mon émission préférée est le Simpson car je le regarde tous les jours depuis j’ai dix ans. En mon opinion c’est la meilleure émission car les Simpsons sont exactement comme mon famille.
Jan. 3, 2022
les amis
Mon Meilleur ami est Oscar, il est tres amusant surtout quand dans publique, par example hier il a porté un uniforme scolaire à une fête.
À mon avis, le deuxieme plus important attribut est aider les autres, car j’avais plusiers faux amis, qui ne aidaient jamais moi. Cependat maintenant tous mes amis sont gentils et utiles en particulier Oscar. Je pense que un bon amie devrait est comme Jesus, aimable et gentil avec tout le monde.
Jan. 3, 2022
D'habitude
Nous sommes en nouveau année. Il y a beaucoup de gens qu'ils decident du changer qc à ce temps. Par exemple lit plusieurs de livres ou fait de sport regularement. J'aime si quelqun veut changer quelque chose dans sa vie mais je n'aime pas quand il ou elle attend pour un nouveau année, c'est stupide. Dés que tu veux changer, fait ca immediatement. Le temps est quelque chose que n'attend pas pour nous donc tu dois aussi attendre pas. Quand tu commences n'arrêtter pas jusqu'à tu le réussis. Je crois la meilleure methode pour ca c'est que on doit ajouter qoui on veut faire à sa routine.
Jan. 3, 2022
letter
Hi dear!
I was going to be on Skype,Sunddely,there was not The Internet.I'm so sorry for that!
What have you been doing this weekend? -howe is your mother?
As for me,Today I called someperson to ask about the phone. I have discovered the
most phone sold in the shop are used.
It's true,there are a lot of the other phones; like Oppo,Redmi...ect
Yes, it's exist too much,but in terms of stockage and other things,it's too bad for me.
I can buy the phone expensive,but I prefer use my money For my daily and monthly dues.
I will share about other phone and I will take your advice about Sumsung s10.
My Mother is a littel well and my sisters are well.
I think about your mother. I don't konw why?
I Hope to see him. God willing!
Don't forgot,we will achieve our dream.
Jan. 3, 2022
eighth journal
Ha-min has been ill these days and so have I. Perhaps she had infected me. She started crying for help, and when my 9 month-old-daughter's cooing finally turned from "mumumumum" to "momommommy", I bursted into tears for no reason. She's too vulnerable to survive on her own without being taken care of by someone. She didn't choose me to be her mother, but I did when I decided to start a family. I might not be able to be the perfect mother, but hearing her word "mommy", I promised that I will try my best to be the one for her.
Jan. 3, 2022
Lunchtime
As you may already know, it is very hard to eat out these days cause of covid 19.
With the strict rules of the government, we are allowed only 4 members at a restaurant.
My friends and I used to go out for lunch as long as having a tea time.
However, we are not doing it anymore now.
At the very first time, some friends were angry about these restrictions.
We are very sorry about this, but we finally agreed that the public benefits are more important than our joy.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon and I am going to be able to eat out again.
Jan. 3, 2022
Aprender a cocinar
Cuando se trata de cocinar, soy un caso perdido. No tengo fe en mi habilidad de cocinar.
Lo atribuye a mi infancia. Mis padres siempre cocinaban para que pudiera priorizar mis estudios. No lo querían ser una distracción de mis deberes. En aquellos momentos, tener platos preparados era una conveniente. Sin embargo, esa conveniente ha convertido en un impedimento en mi vida adulta. Vivo sola ahora. Mis intentos a preparar comida han sido gran fracasos. El mes pasado, por ejemplo, mis huevos duros explotaron en la microonda. Días después, hice una sopa que describí como asquerosa. Cuando mi compañero del piso me preguntó cómo fue mi comida, lo probé y le dije que podía soportarlo.
La verdad es que tengo que hacerlo para sobrevivir, aunque me cuesta mucho y quita demasiado tiempo. Dicho esto, estoy de ganas de mejorarlo y finalmente espabilarse.
Jan. 3, 2022
The night of new years eve
The night of new years eve began slow. I picked up my girlfriend at the train station and we went back home on foot. We walked approximately 30 minutes and on our way, we bought some french fries with cheese sauce at burger king.
We only stopped when we had found a cozy wall where we sat down on top of it, and ate our french fries. Afterward, we proceeded with our walk on the promenade till we arrived at my home. Subsequently, we packed our stuff in my bag which was so heavy that when we arrived at my friend's place I got heavy backache. As some guests already arrived we mingled under the folk and talked with them. As more and more guests arrived, I started to get bored. I really don't know why it was the case, as normally I start to strive when there are more and more people to which I can lunge out. However, we started to drink some beverages and also played some beer pong. As the clock was slowly ticking to the point of midnight I convinced the crowd to get outside. We brought the music box with us and went to a big parking lot which we had all to ourselves. I quite enjoyed the time outside. We did a lot of stuff which got me joyful. After the new year began we stayed lurking in the parking lot. We played a lot of games. For instances a game called beerball. In this game, the crowd gets separated into two teams. These teams are facing each other in a short distance.
In the middle between the two teams stands a plastic bottle that is half full with some fluid. The teams need to throw a ball on the bottle, and when the bottle was hit the team got to drink their beer. In this exact same time, the opposing team got to manage to get the ball behind their own line but also has to put the bottle in its original state. It gets more difficult when the distance between the teams gets longer. After 2 am in the morning we went back home cause my girlfriend was very tired.
Thank you for correcting my letter!
Jan. 3, 2022
北京的气氛
我2018年11月去过北京旅游。很多朋友都告诉我北京很美丽，而且北京的名胜古迹很丰富，所以我觉得肯定要去北京。达到北京的那一天，天气美好：比较暖和，而且晴空万里，一点雾霾也没有。
第一夜晚，我去小饭店吃饭。店主很和气是因为他对外国人很感兴趣。店主和他的老婆几次来给我更多的菜，而且每次问关于欧洲的问题。我基本上都可以回答，但是有的问题我自己也不清楚，比如说：“为什么欧洲人那么能喝酒？” 我对于这个问题当然没有见解。
第二天，我和朋友一起去参观天坛，它的气氛非常美。然后我们去798艺术区。在艺术区也有歌德学院。第三·天，我坐车去长城（八达岭）。我所看过的胜迹最美丽的当数八达岭。每天吃到很好吃的小菜和特产，在北京过得很开心。
总之，北京给我留下的印象很深刻，因为又大又自在。
在Leila和Jack的帮助下，我修改了一下：
北京的印象
我2018年11月去过北京旅游。很多朋友都告诉我北京很美丽，拥有很多名胜古迹，所以我觉得一定要去北京旅行。到达北京的那一天，天气良好：比较暖和，而且晴空万里，一点雾霾也没有。
第一晚，我去了小饭店吃饭。店主很和气，因为他对外国人很感兴趣。店主和他的老婆好几次过来给我加菜，而且每次会问有关于欧洲的问题。我基本上都寄予回答，但是有的问题我自己也不清楚如何回答，比如说：“为什么欧洲人那么能喝酒？” 我对于这个问题当然没有见解。
第二天，我和朋友一起去参观天坛，当我置身其中时氛围非常美。然后我们去了798艺术区。在艺术区还有歌德学院。第三·天，我坐车去了长城（八达岭）。在我看过的胜迹中最美丽的当数八达岭。每天都能吃到很好吃的小吃和特产，我在北京过得很开心。
总之，北京给我留下的印象很深刻，因为城市很大，人又生活得很自在。
Jan. 3, 2022
Jan. 3, 2022
Jan. 3, 2022
Journal
Today I want to talk about my new apartment.
I bought it in 2018, when house prices were at their peak in my city.
When I bought it, the parking spaces were bundled. If you didn't want the parking spaces, you couldn't buy an apartment. I had to spend 300,000 RMB for just a single parking space.
The reason why the developer was so overbearing? It was because the residential community has a superior geographical location.
The community is in the southern new district of Fuyang city, the northeast area of Shuangqingwan Park. From the front balcony of the apartment, I can see the entire park.
It's said that our municipal government office will move to the northern side of the lake, and the building land has been reserved.
The eastern side of the park is connected with the Zhongqing River. The northern side of the park is connected with the Balisong River.
In the southeast corner of the park there is the Fuyang Science and Technology Museum. In the southwest corner of the park there is the Fuyang Grand Theatre. In the northeast of the park there is the Fuyang Museum. In the northwest of the park there is the Fuyang Library and the Fuyang Administrative Service Center. In the north of the park there is Fuyang Citizen Park. Besides, on the southern side and the western side of the park there are two large commercial streets possessed by the Huarun Real Estate and the Anhui Real Estate Group.
So Shuangqingwan block is considered as the future political, economic and cultural center of Fuyang city.
Today I took some decoration stuff to the apartment and after that I walked around the park.
The weather is so nice, sunny and warm. The natural environment here is quite good. It's a really good place to live, so I don't regret buying this apartment at a very expensive cost.
Jan. 3, 2022
La cometa
Al frente de mi casa, hay un parque grande.
Desde dos días antes, se vee unos niños y sus padres jugando con cometas, pues volar cometas es una tradición del año nuevo.
En japonés, cometa se llama "tako" por su forma ("tako" significa pulpo).
La cometa vieja de Japón tiene forma cuadrada con dos "colas" largas hecho en papel.
Nuestros ancestros debían tener buen sentido de humor.
Sin embargo, estos días casi no se puede ver esta forma de cometa.
Cuando estaba en un otro país, me contó que agosto es el mes de cometa porque es muy ventosa.
¿Cómo sería en otros países?
Jan. 3, 2022
¿Eres Madrugador o Trasnochador?
Estaba leyendo diferentes temas de escritura para ayudar a decidir de que iba a escribir y uno de ellos fue sobre si eres madrugador o trasnochador. Definitivamente soy trasnochador, aunque creo que preferiría ser madrugador. Si tengo que terminar un proyecto, prefiero trasnochar para terminarlo en vez madrugar. Los fines de semana casi siempre trasnocho y me acuesto después de la medianoche.
Creo que es porque me centro mejor cuando no hay nadie alrededor. En la oficina, generalmente, después de las 5 no hay mucha gente y siento que soy más productivo cuando mis colegas se van. Durante el día hay demasiadas conversaciones, llamadas, mensajes instantáneos, y emails. Lo complica más que tenemos una oficina abierta.
Prefería despertarme más temprano para que pueda salir de la oficina más temprano, pero tendría que llegar a las 6 o 7 de la mañana para poder trabajar unas horas sin interrupciones. No estoy acostumbrado a despertarme o a acostarme temprano así que sería un cambio grande.
Jan. 3, 2022
ma vie est tout français
coucou mes amies.
donc, je veux apprendre le français parce-que je sais que c’est un beau langue. mais à l’école, ma professeure dit que je ne peux pas apprendre le level l’haut à l’école mais je sais pas POURQUOI!
j’apprends beaucoup de français seul, j’écoute à la musique française, je regarde le tv français, je parle avec les gens françaises en ligne, ma vie est tout française! ma chambre est une petite france aussi! mdr.
je trouve le grammaire français difficile mais je crois que je peux fais ça.
Jan. 3, 2022
2.1.22
1. Quiero preguntarte la razón
2. No puedo encontrarme con mi ex novio porque vive en Dubai
3. El costo de la vida es más barato en la Ciudad de México que en Nueva York
4. ¿Alguna vez has deseado comprar un boleto sencillo y nunca regresar?
5. ¿Sigues enamorado de ella?
6. Vivo en la costa oeste de la Florida
7. Mi negocio familiar gestiona inversiones
8. Hay muchas cosas para ver en Nueva York
Jan. 2, 2022
断捨離より頻繁を使う
断捨離より頻繁を使う
Decluttering or Heavily use it.
（私も）沢山の方はモノを買った、家に置いても、一回くらいも使わない。
Many people including me keeping so many “things” in their house and never use.
沢山本を買った、幾つ頁を読む後は一回も触らない！
I bought many books but never read it or just few pages.
ある日、沢山ほぼ新しいモノを捨てた。
At the end I throw away many new “things”.
数年前にこの「断捨離」行為は流行っている。
This behavior was very popular few years ago.
Netflixにある番組は専門家わざわざに家を訪れる、ほぼ全てモノを捨てるが助ける。
You can watch Netflix; an expert will come to your house and help you throw away almost everything.
結果は広くになった、快楽をできる。（かな？）
As result your house/room become bigger, your life few less stress. (Really?)
反対じゃない、べつの方法を試してつもり。
I am against this idea but I will try an alternative way.
このモノを頻繁に使う。
I will try to use such things/items heavily.
「磨滅」ぐらいに止める。
Until it reaches the end of “wear and tear” stage.
賛成？
Agree?
Jan. 2, 2022