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March 24, 2022
Membership at a sports club
I've joined a sports club not far from my place and the underground station. I badly need to get in shape but I lacked motivation to exercise. Now I have access to experienced and certified trainers and whenever I'm in a slump my new club mates will shout out words of encouragement .
I have signed up for bodysculpting classes and ballroom dancing lessons and I'm going to attend them twice a week.
My first aerobics class consisted in exercises toning buttocks and inner thighs. The instructor turned out to be my across-the-hall neighbour Adam.
The next day my muscles were sore and I could barely walk. However I decided not to give up especially when Adam informed me that my membership included unlimited access to sea water jaccuzi, steam saunas and beauty parlours.
March 24, 2022
Tomb Sweeping Day
Tomb Sweeping Day
清明(qīng míng) is a special traditional day in China. People are supposed to go back to their hometown to pay tribute to their ancestors in front of their ancestors' tombs before the Qingming comes.
I was born and raised in a small village and my family has a piece of farmland. My daddy was buried there decades ago.
At the end of last year, my mom passed away. I buried her there together with my daddy.
Tomb Sweeping Day of this year is coming. It's on 5th April.
According to Chinese tradition, I should sweep the tomb ahead of Tomb Sweeping day.
My home village is away from the city where I live 71 kilometers, which takes about one hour and a half.
I will go back with my whole family to sweep my parents' tomb because it's the first year after my mom passed away.
We usually buy firecrackers, hell bank notes (a kind of yellow paper), paper gold ingots and so on before sweeping the tomb.
When we arrived at the tomb, we set off the firecrackers, burn the sacrifices, kowtow and say something like "Mom, I am here to see you, and bring you some money; please take good care of yourself", something like this.
Sweeping my parents' tomb always makes me sad, every time, but I can't do anything. Death is the law of nature and no one can escape from it.
March 24, 2022
Le printemps ne vient pas d´arriver.
Le calendrier nous dit que le printemps est déjà arrivé, mais je regarde par la fenêtre et je n´y crois pas. Nous avons passé plus d´une semaine avec tout le ciel totalment couvert par des nuages.
En plus de cela, la température maximale n´a pas superé les huit degrés.
Hier, il y avait un vent glacé, un vent qui nous a fait rappeler le chaud de notres cheminées dans les aprè-midis d´hiver. Mais le pluie, de laquelle nous sommes autant ravis, ne vient pas d´arriver non plus, au moins non dans mon region et non dans les quantités requises.
En fin, il faudra attendre un peu plus. Peut-être à la semaine prochaine, on pourra finalement se profiter du soleil et des bonnes températures.
March 24, 2022
A primavera não acaba de chegar
O calendario diz-nos que a primavera já tem chegado, mas eu olho pela janela e não o acredito. Temos tido mais duma semana com tudo o céu coberto de nubes. Além disso, a temperatura baqueu-se e as máximas nao têm passado dos 8 graus nos ultimos dias.
Ontem houve um vento gelado, um daqueles ventos que fazem lembrarmos do calor de nossas lareiras nas tardes do inverno. Mas a desejada chuva, não acaba de chegar, ao menos não na minha região e na cantidade que seria necessária.
Enfim, teremos de esperar um pouco mais. Talvez na próxima semana poderemos, por fim, disfrutar do sol e das boas temperaturas.
March 24, 2022
Täna päev
Täna hommikul, ma tõusin püsti ja harjutasin eesti keelt.
Järel, ma mängisin klaverit, sest mul oli klassi kell üksteist.
Klaveriklassi ees, ma lugesin raamatut 'Hamnet' väljas.
Mul oli lõunasöögi, aga ma ei helistanud mu vanaemale rääkima eesti keeles.
Ma proovin homme helistada talle, neljapäeval.
Ma lasin mu kirja saata, ja mu õpikuga harjutasin veel eesti keelt.
Täna õhtul, ma tegin must teed, ja sõin jäätist ka.
Ma vaatan hetkel uudist ja kirjutan see žurnaal.
March 24, 2022
수요일의 문장들 :)
1. 제 시험 점수가 제 친구의 시험 점수보다 너무 잘못해요.
비교하지 마요. 다음엔 공부할 거지요.
2. 동갑이라고요?
맞아요. 친구를 되도록 하겠어요.
3. 한 달 전에 학위를 받았다고 하던데요. 축하해요!
고마워요. 하지만 직업을 구해야 해서 되게 스트레스를 해요.
4. 어머, 신형 차를 있었다니요?
생일을 위해 우리 부모님이 주셨어요.
5. 누구가 왕자를 죽었다면서요?
네. 아까 왕자랑 신비한 사람이 싸우더라고요. 그리고 갑자기 비명을 들렸어요!
6. 커피거나 차를 더 좋아하나요?
사실 둘 다 마시지 않아요. 물만 마셔요.
7. 잠을 잘 때 인형을 안는 것을 좋아해요.
반대여요. 이불밖에 안 자요.
8. 가장 좋아하는 가수를 누구예요?
아이유를 너무 좋아해요. 목소리는 천사처럼 들려요.
9. 지금 나가야 하는데 늦게 도착하거든요.
잠깐만요. 전화를 하는 중이에요.
10. 사진첩을 둔 지 5년이 되어요. 현재 것을 찾을 수 없군요.
저번에 찾았잖는데 다락에 있어요.
March 24, 2022
March 24, 2022
March 23, 2022
Abandoned ghost town
Near the small lake there was an old and abandoned castle. He looked creepy and scary. People were curious, so they decided to visit him. Everything was dark at the entrance. It looked lifeless. When they got into it, they had to open their eyes wide and hold their breath. Through the castle began to howl the wind, there was a creak and mysteriously ghosts began to float on it. The castle has become creepy. Ghosts were preying on the timids. Blood walls and dead bodies were everywhere. People's blood was freezing in their veins and they had tingling sensations in their spines, they were browsy. Ghosts frightened people. They were ominously decapitated flying around the castle. People were numb with fear, screaming and running. They realized the old castle was a scary place. No people have entered the castle since. Many call it a abandoned ghost town.
March 23, 2022
Essayer d'être plus sain
Dans ma vie quotidienne, je suis souvent devant l'ordinateur ou devant l'écran de portable à cause de ma carriére et mes intérêts. Je travaille en l'informatique et donc, je dois faire des programmes et écriter de code. Également, je dois faire ça pour mes cours d'université. Et pendant mon temps libre, j'aime regarder des films, des séries, et des vidéos sur l'internet. Donc, je passe longtemps avec les appareils électronique pour faire toutes ces choses-ci. Mais, je sais que c'est mauvais pour la santé et je essaie de réduire le temps que je passe devant l'écran.
La premiére chose que j'ai commencé faire est courir. Pendant la derniére semaine, j'ai couri environ quatre miles dans quarante-sept minutes. J'étais si fier de moi-même parce que je ne suis pas une personne qui fait de l'exercice souvent. J'ai décidé courir réguliérement pour maintenir la bonne santé. Mais le prochain jour, j'avais mal à les jambes et les bras aussi. C'était la premiére fois que je cours depuis longtemps et je pense que j'ai surestimé combién de la distance je pouvais courir. Quand on fait du sport, je pense que c'est mieux commencer avec un petit but et l'augmenter lentement.
March 23, 2022
Kinder und Internet
Das Thema "Kinder und Internet" ist heutzutage sehr aktuell. Darüber wird viel diskutiert und dazu gibt es sowie viele Vorteile als auch viele Nachteile.
Einerseites gibt es viele Nachteile, die Kinder verbringen zu viel Zeit im Internet . Sehr oft bevorzugen sie virtuelles Leben dem Reallen. Zum Beispiel, wenn sie Probleme in der Schule haben, wenn sie keine echten Freunde haben oder wenn sie niemanden zum Sprechen haben, dann finden sie die Unterstützung im Internet. Oder wenn sie einfach Computerspiele sehr gerne spielen, dann verschwenden sie auch zu viel Zeit im Internet.
Noch ein wichtiger Nachteil ist, dass es zu viel Böses und Unpassendes im Internet gepostet wird. Die Kinder können auch betrogen werden. Viele Betrüger "arbeiten" heute online. Und nur Erwachsene können dabei helfen, sie müssen den Kindern erklären, wie sie solche Situationen verhindern können.
Andererseits sind es noch mehrere Vorteile. Internet öffnet es sich den Kindern eine große Vielfalt der Möglichkeiten, sich zu Entwickeln. Im Netz kann man Fremdsprachen lernen und dabei mit Muttersprachlern komunizieren; Bücher lesen; Filme und Cartoons schauen und viel mehr.
Wie es schon gesagt wurde, viele Kinder benutzen Internet, um Computerspiele zu spielen, aber davon können wir auch einen Vorteil machen. Es gibt Spiele, die dem Kind gut tun und sich zu entwickeln helfen.
Abschließend lässt sich sagen, dass Internet mehr Vorteile als Nachteile hat. Wenn man Internet richtig benutzt, dann bekommt man nur Gewinn. Also die Eltern können dem Kind helfen nur die besten Seiten des Internetz zu verwenden.
March 23, 2022
Un crayon
Il y a beaucoup de crayons variés. Quelques sont plus grands que des autres. Certains ont une couleur marquante. De plus des crayons vont utiliser de la plupart des gens. Peu importe que c'est pour un dessinateur, un architecte, un ingenieur et cetera. Ce que je vais dire est que un crayon est trés utile.
March 23, 2022
Warum will ich Deutsch lernen?
Ich lerne Deutsch schon seit fast 10 Jahren. Am Anfang konnte ich gar nicht vorstellen, dass ich mich so sehr für diese Sprache interessieren werde. Als ich eine Studentin war, habe ich angefangen, Deutsch zu lernen und zunächst war alles sehr kompliziert für mich, trotzdem habe ich nie aufgegeben. Ich habe sehr viel gelernt, aber als ich mein Studium abgeschlossen habe, konnte ich nicht fließend sprechen und habe etnschlossen nach Deutschland zu fahren. Es war die beste Entscheidung. Je mehr ich Deutsch lernete, desto mehr wollte ich sich weiter in dieser Richtung entwickeln. Momentan ist meine Arbeit sehr eng mit der deutschen Sprache verbunden. Jeden Tag versuche ich mindestens 30 Minuten Deutsch zu lernen. Ich lese Bücher, sehe fern, löse online Übungen und so weiter. Es macht wirklich Spaß.
March 23, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 58
Part no. 58
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (except, of course, when I described past events), so analyse it as if it’s unfolding as you read it.
Constable Twitten continues to interview Mr Arnold, the bank manager. Twitten enquires if anyone at the bank would be able to provide new information about the robbery*. Mr Arnold thinks it unlikely. If they recalled anything new, they would’ve reported it directly to Crystal himself when he came around the other day. Crystal visiting the bank is news to Twitten, so he is rather puzzled. Twitten voices as much**. Mr Arnold explains that Crystal turned up at the bank, along with a German-speaking woman, to interview him and the bank staff about the robbery. Though, the woman seemed to be in charge, not him. They were engaged in some sort of psycho exercise to retrieve deep-buried memories of Crystal’s about the robbery. However, the whole scene was absolutely appalling. She treated Crystal horribly, snapping at him because he couldn’t recall anything. Crystal seemed unable to stand up to her as though she had a firm hold over his mind.
*Just to make things clearer, the robbery took place over ten years ago.
**By “as much”, I meant that Twitten voiced his confusion (if it makes sense this expression here), asking Mr Arnold to explain himself further.
March 23, 2022
The book
Yesterday I found a book that I lost some years ago. I Remember that I brought it on holidays and I had returned some days before, so I searched it for all corners of my house, but I don't found it. Then I thought that possibly I lost it in the traveling back to home. How I was explaining, I found it in a camera bag while I was sorting a cupboard. This silly thing it was glad me the day. By the way, the subject of the book is about sketching with watercolor.
March 23, 2022
Learning From My Mentor
I really like to work with my mentor who always works effectively and productively.
When I work with him, I can learn a lot of things and get many insights of works.
Today, I had a meeting with my mentor and my boss.
Because he wanted to introduce us more things for understanding a work, he showed us a presentation file.
It had many charts and diagrams that I could understand the goal of the work.
The interesting thing is that he made a file at once. It meant that he already had a lot of materials.
Because he usually thought a lot and gathered ideas, he could make the file quickly.
I should learn about this attitude as well.
March 23, 2022
23 mars 2022 - Une saveur locale
Racontez comme dans un guide de voyage une expérience locale typique de votre région.
Tsuen Wan, un mélange du nouveau et du vieux, était une region industrielle dans les années 70-80. Alors il existe encore des bâtiments industriels. On peut y trouver des batîments de 6 ou 7 étages qui ont des magasins au rez-de-chaussée et des appartements au dessus. Ils sont vieux et existent il y a au moins 30 ans. Les magasins sont dirigés par des locaux et les produits sont diverses. C’est très convenient d’acheter des nécessités mais bien sûr, ça peut aussi créer des conflicts entre les habitants et les commerçants parce que le dernier crée beaucoup de bruit. Les problèmes de « vielle ville » existent bel et bien ici, et comme il n'y a pas assez d'espaces pour tout le monde, ce région a été « renouvelé » dans les années 00, mais seulement quelques entre d'eux ont été reconstruit et transformés en bâtiments moderne de 50 étages. Ce n’est pas une belle région prestigieuse mais elle a des caractères typiques de Hong Kong.
March 23, 2022
폐기물
일회용품 사용이 폭증하면서 쓰레기가 많이 배출되고 있다. 대부분 사람들은 한번 활용하고 버리는 쓰레기가 어떻게 처리되는지에 대한 관심이 없다. 그렇지만, 이러한 작은 습관으로 인해 인간 존재에는 위협이 가해지고 있다. 일회용품이 다수인 생활폐기물은 바다에 버리거나 불에 태우는 식으로 없앤다. 또, 일회용 쓰레기의 경우에는 다른 처리 과정을 통해 재할용이 가능하다. 일회용 쓰레기를 잴활용하는 데는 비용과 동력이 많이 필요하기 때문에 이런 방법을 쓰지 않는 경우가 일반적이다. 한편을 보면, 환경에 악영향을 끼치는 폐기물의 처리 방법은 사람에게도 피해를 끼칠 뿐만 아니라 심지어 인류 생존을 위협한다. 이는 쓰레기 배출이 유발하는 기후 변화와 지구 온난화 때문에 생긴 문제라고 할 수 있다.즉, 북극이 녹아가면서 해수면도 함께 올라가는 것이다. 그 결과, 바닷가에 위치해 있는 도시가 잠겨질 가능성이 높다. 그 외에도, 심하게 변해버린 사계절의 날씨로 인한 생활 속에서 힘듦을 겪는 사람 대다수이다. 이처럼 문제 해결책 중에 플라스틱로 만들어진 일회용품 사용을 자제하는 것은 하나이다. 또, 친화적인 물품 소비가 상승하면 문제가 해소하는 데 큰 도움을 줄 것이다. 그에 따라 쓰레기 배출은 감소되며 인간의 생존이 안전해질 것이다
March 23, 2022
Fast Food
ich persönlich wohne allein und habe keine Zeit zum kochen,deshalb bevorzuge ich Fastfood mehr als geckochtes Essen. Außerdem bin ich Arzt von Beruf und arbeite zu später Stunde, so wenn ich Hunger habe, bestelle ich Pizza oder Burger. Es schmeckt sehr gut!
In meinem Heimatland sind die meisten Frauen arbeitlos, deshalb finden sie zeit zum kochen. Aber um ehrlich zu sein die Kinder finden Das Essen mit Freunden Außerhalb mehr beliebter.
Auf der einen Seite wenn Man manchmal Fastfood essen würde, könnte man nicht nur besser Stimmung erhalten, sondern auch zeit sparen und den stress abbauen.
Auf jeden Fall, ist Fastfood für Menschen, die allein leben, eine gute Lösung, und das halte ich für Vorteile.
Auf der anderen seite, ist es Nachteil, dass Fertigessen Gefährlich für die Gesundheit ist.
Es hat viele Fett und macht dick und viele Krankheiten z. B Diabetes und Cholesterin. Außerdem man weiß nicht, woraus das besteht.
Meiner Meinung nach ist, wir uns Gesund bleiben sollen und das weniger Fastfood meinst.
March 23, 2022
Une histoire personelle
Il y a quelques années je suis tombé malade. Je ne m'y attendais pas à devenir malade et c'était un surprise pour moi. Avant, j'étais en bonne santé, mais maintenant je ne suis plus.
J'ai été obligé d'arrêter de travailler. Je l'aimais bien et ça me manque.
Maintenant, pour m'occuper, j'apprends le français
March 23, 2022
March 23, 2022
콘서트에 드디어 다시 갔어요 + 문법
저번 주말에 2년 만에 콘서트에 드디어 다시 갔어요. 오래 때문에 정말 신났는데 경기장에 도착하고 나서 가만히 앉을 수 없었어요. 더 기다린 후에 공연은 시작됐어요. 3개의 록과 메탈 밴드가 공연을 했는데 다 굉장히 좋았어요. 나갈 수 있으니까 정말 행복해요.
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1. 안돼요!
무슨 일이 있나요?
핸드폰이 가방에 빠진 것 같았어요. 우리 엄마가 화가 나질 거예요.
2. 매일 많이 연습하지만 축구 실력이 아직도 서투려요.
아니에요. 축구 실력이 정말 좋던데요.
3. 이 식사의 계산서를 계산할까요.
어, 아까 수지 씨가 벌써 계산하더라고요.
4. 기침이 너무 심해요.
차를 마시지 그래요?
5. 왜 너무 향수병을 느껴요?
대학생이었을 때 매주 주말에 저 편으점에서 라면을 사던 거예요.
6. 신문을 읽어요?
아니요. 왜요?
경찰관이 범죄 현장에 도착하면 폭력적인 남자가 벌써 사라졌어요.
March 23, 2022
March 23, 2022