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A & B Talk85
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, which’s the quickest train to Ueno station?
A: Gimme a minute. That would be the train on platform 2 at 3:50.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk84
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, this train stops at D station, right?
A: Umm, gimme a minute. Actually, no.
Take the 3:45 p.m. train on platform2.
B: Oh, gotcha!
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk83
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, this train stops at D station, right?
A: Umm, gimme a minute. Actually, no.
You need to get on the next train.
B: Oh, gotcha!
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk82
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, I’d like to buy a weekly pass. Can I do that here?
A: Umm. I’m not sure. It might be best to try asking the ticket window. Take you there if you want?
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk81
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, is this where you catch the Thunderbird train?
A: Let’s see... Actually, it leaves from the opposite side.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk80
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me. Is Souka station on this map?
A: Japanese route maps are hard to see, right? I don't usually use it, hmm, well, we’re here now. Souka station is right here.
B: Oh, I see. Thank you!
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk79
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy this ticket?
A: Sure. I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understand, but I'll give it a shot! So what's wrong?
B: First of all, I can't find the station I want to go to on the fare table. Can you help me find it?
A: Sure, but you can probably buy the ticket you want by telling the station attendant the station you want to go to. Of course, I can also able to help you buy it from the ticket machine. I leave it up to you. Which would you prefer?
B: Oh, I see. Then I'll ask the station attendant. Thank you very much!
A: It was nothing.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk78
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy this ticket?
A: Sure. I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understand, but I'll give it a shot! So what's wrong?
B: First of all, I can't find the station I want to go to on the fare table. Can you help me find it?
A: Sure, where are you headed?
B: Fukayama? I want to go there.
A: Oh, if it's far away, it's probably not on the table. I think you can find it on the ticket machine.
B: Okay. Thanks.
A: If you are far away, you can use this ticket machine. And if you press here, it will be in English.
B: Oh, OK, where should I press next?
A: Uh, this button, I think. it's this button, and next is this button, and if you type in what you want, you should be able to buy it.
B: Is this button OK?
A: Yes, right, I guess.
B: Oh, lots of tickets came out. Which ticket should I use first?
A: Well, the first one is this one. Next is this one, and last one is this one.
B: 1, 2, 3, right?
A: Yes.
B: Ok, okay. Thank you very much.
A: Also, as you may already know, you need this ticket when you go in and out of the ticket gate, so when you go through the ticket gate, don't forget to take the ticket back out again. If it doesn't come out, use the second one.
B: I see. I understand. Thank you very much.
A: I bet you. Have a nice trip!
B: Thanks! Have a nice day.
A: You too. Bye.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk77
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, can you tell me how to buy this ticket?
A: Sure. I haven't bought any tickets recently, so I might not understand, but I'll give it a shot! And what don't you understand?
B: First of all, I can't find the station I want to go to on the fare table. Can you help me find it?
A: Sure, where are you headed?
B: Fukayama? I want to go there.
A: Oh, if it's far away, it's probably not on the table. I think you can find it on the ticket machine.
B: Okay. Thanks.
A: If you are far away, you can use this ticket machine. And if you press here, it will be in English.
B: Oh, OK, where should I press next?
A: Uh, this button, I think. it's this button, and next is this button, and if you type in what you want, you should be able to buy it.
B: Is this button OK?
A: Yes, right, I guess.
B: I want to pay by cash, which button is it?
A: Hmm... well, huh? Where's it. I can't find it. I'll go get the station staff.
B: Yes, please.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk76
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: What does it look like?
B: The ticket gate won't open.
A: I see. Do you use a Ic card?
B: Yes.
A: Maybe the balance is insufficient. I think it shows the reason why you can't get out of the ticket gate. So can I ask you to try one more time?
B: Yes. I'll go then, okay?
A: Yes. Okay, your balance is low. You can recharge it there, so let's recharge it and try again. Do you want to charge? Do you want to pay only the difference?
B: Which should I do?
A: That's up to you. If you still plan to take the train, you should recharge it, and if you don't take the train anymore, you should pay the difference.
B: I see. I'll charge it then. Which machine is OK?
A: Um, yes, either one is fine.
B: Okay, I just put it here?
A: Yes. If you press here, it will be in English.
B: Oh, nice. Will it be enough for about 2000 yen.
A: Here is written the amount that is not enough. If you still plan to take the train, it might be OK to put that much in.
B: Okay. Yes! It's done.
A: OK, let's give it a try.
B: Oh, nice. Thank to you. Thank you very much.
A: Good for you. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk75
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, I don't see a place to charge, do you know where it is?
A: Around here, Oh, hmm, that's strange. I thought there's around here.
B: Right?
A: Oh, here it is!
B: Ohh, nice.
A: It's in a very inconspicuous place, right? I'm sorry, the hospitality system in Japan is not well organized.
B: No problem at all. It's all right. Thank you very much.
A: No problem. Have a nice day!
B: Thanks! You too.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk74
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: What does it look like?
B: There's no place to put my ticket.
A: Really? Let's go together.
B: Thanks.
A: Oh, really. There is no place. Sometimes there is a ticket gate where you can't use ticket. Only Ic card.
B: What should I do?
A: You should go to the station staff. Then they may guide you to another ticket gate or do something about it. Would you want me to go with you?
B: That would be helpful.
A: Okay.
July 13, 2022
A & B Talk72
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: Do you use a ticket?
B: Yes, but there is no place to put ticket.
A: Really? Let's go there together.
B: Thanks.
A: Oh, I see. I think you couldn't get through because you used the one for IC cards only. I think you can go through here.
B: Is there any way to tell the difference?
A: I have never paid attention to it before, but if there is a sign that says "IC" somewhere like this, it might be for IC cards only. If there is no sign, or if it says "ticket" somewhere, I think you can put in a ticket.
B: I see. Then may I go through here?
A: Sure.
B: Oh, okay. Nice.
A: Good for you. Have a nice day!
B: Thank you so much!
July 13, 2022
A & B 71
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! 🙇♂️🙇♂️
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.✍️
B: Excuse me, I can't get out of the ticket gate, do you know what to do?
A: Do you use a ticket?
B: Yes, but I lost it.
A: Oh, seriously, you may have to buy another ticket. But you'd better ask the station staff, first. I'll take you to where the station staff is.
B: Oh, thank you very much.
A: No problem.
July 13, 2022
Los acostumbres de mi familia
mi papá es australiano, pero mi mamá nació en Filipinas, pues mi hermana y yo somos medio australiano y medio filipino. Aunque, nunca he viajado a las Filipinas pero un día me gustaría visitar y conocer a mi familia de allí.
Mí familia y yo no pasamos mucho tiempo juntos, pero a todos nos encantan ver películas, y una teleserie que se llama ‘Married at First Sight’. Creo que es porque nos gusta hacer cosas diferentes en nuestro tiempo libre, a mi papá suele caminar, a mi mamá le gusta montar en bicicleta, a mi hermana y yo,, nos gusta hacer ejercicio en el gimnasio, y ambos somos jóvenes, por lo tanto tenemos muchos intereses similares.
Mis padres y yo no nos llevamos muy bien, porque soy demasiado independiente para sus gustos, y todos nosotros somos demasiado tercos para cambiar nuestras costumbres. Por el contrario, mi hermana y mis padres se llevan muy bien.
no tengo muchos parientes que viven cerca de mi casa. La familia del lado de mi papá vive casi a ochocientos kilómetros al sur de mi casa, en un pueblo llamado zoo. Además, los visitaba una vez al año en abril. La familia de mi mamá vive en un país diferente. A pesar de , mi familia y yo no nos llevamos muy bien.
July 13, 2022
Mi Familia y Yo 2
Hola a alguien:
Antes de describir mis padres, creo que es importante decir de sus carteras.
Hace siete años que mi mamá trabaja como limpiadora, y mi papá antes de nacer yo, lleva más de veinte años jubilado.
Ahora, les describiré.
Mi mamá es puntillosa y mantiene todo muy limpio, gracias a dios, ella es avergonzada como yo, es muy bajita, mi hermana y yo nos burlamos de ella por su altura. Por el contrario, mi papá es muy alto, y es muy severo, no tan divertido.
Mi hermana es más alta que yo, tiene el pelo oscuro con los ojos marrones también. Ella es locuaz, no es paciente y tampoco está limpia. Pero, yo esperaba que ella estuviera más limpia, porque compartimos un baño juntos y yo lo tengo que limpiar, ¡ella no se preocupa!
Mí familia y yo no pasamos mucho tiempo juntos, pero a todos nos encantan ver películas, y una teleserie que se llama ‘Married at First Sight’. Creo que es porque nos gusta hacer cosas diferentes en nuestro tiempo libre, a mi papá suele caminar, a mi mamá le gusta montar en bicicleta, a mi hermana y yo,, nos gusta hacer ejercicio en el gimnasio, y ambos somos jóvenes, por lo tanto tenemos muchos intereses similares.
Ha escrito mucho. Esperaré. Adiós extrañe.
July 13, 2022
¡Mi Familia!
Hola a alguien:
Hoy, me gustaría decirte sobre mi familia. Pues, hay cinco personas en mi familia; mi mamá, mi papá, mi hermana mayor, mi perrito Alfie y yo.
Cuando era pequeña, poseía dos conejillos de indias. Pues, teñía seis miembros en mi familia. Mucho, sé.
Cuando sea mayor, me gustaría un familia grande, con muchas mascotas. Me encantan los animales. Me interesan con como los ven en el mundo.
Ya, mi familia es reciente, pero cuando estamos en la casita, solemos ser muy ruidosos.
Yo recuerdo, cuando era niña, esperaba tener una familia grande, pero ahora, yo sé que el tamaño de la familia no es importante, pero el amor que existe es la casa más vital.
Y, mi hermana mayor, se llama Rachel, es más mayor que yo. Ella es muy irritable, pero, la quiero. Ahora nos llevamos muy bien, pero a veces discutimos, antes nos costaba más hablar sobre nuestros problemas porque no teníamos bastante madurez.
July 13, 2022
Sobre yo
Hola a alguien:
Me gustaría escribir un poco sobre yo.
Me llamo Francés, y tengo diecisiete años. Voy a cumplir dieciocho el próximo mes.
Mi cumpleaños es el nueve de agosto, y estoy emocionada porque tendré más independencia de mis padres.
El año pasado, para mi último cumpleaños, mi familia y yo fuimos al patinaje sobre hielo. Era muy especial porque nunca lo había practicado antes, y el lugar está a muy lejos de mi barrio, cerca de dos horas en coche.
Eso es todo. Gracias por me escuchas.
July 13, 2022
les stéréotypes à propos de mon pays
Je suis d’Angleterre. C’est un stéréotype que les anglaise mangont le mal nourriture. Maintenant j’habite en France et je pense que c’est vrai parfois. Le qualité du pain c’est plus pire en Angleterre normalement, au lieu de il y a toujours des petit boulangeries qui faisant le bon pain. J’aime bien le pâtisserie de France et je pense que, en Angleterre, on essaye de répliquer l’éclair au chocolat et le tarte citron, mais pas très bien. En revanche, il y a beaucoup du fromages, du viande et des recettes traditionnel que sont moins connus. Ces nourritures ne sont pas a la hauteur de cela stéréotype.
July 13, 2022
A Movie: Batman!
Querido Sasha:
Hola mi mejor amiga. ¿Qué tal?
Espero que tus vacaciones son buenas, y estés haciendo toda de las actividades que hablábamos antes de salir.
Me siento como no he hecho nada. Además, he siendo muy floja. ¿Hizo calor, no?
La semana pasada, decidí a cambiar esto. Vi una película nueva llamado “Batman”.
¡A mí me encantaba! ¡La acción, los actores, la música! Que fantástico. Ha olvido como bueno el cine es.
Especialmente, me gustaba el conclusion. Demasiados posibilidades para la película próxima.
Pero, lo vi con mi hermana mayor, y, ahora, ella no puede esperar hablando sobre motos y cómo son frescos.
Ya, por favor, visitarme pronto!
Te extraño.
Fran.
July 13, 2022
Walking in the Morning
This morning I went to the dentist for a rutine control; as all was correct, it was a fast visit. The dental clinic is not far of home, so is possible go walking. To return home, I did a little turn and come back walking on the sand, in the shore on the beach, wetting my feet. In the coming weeks I will try to go to the beach all whatever I can.
July 13, 2022
Aprendiendo Espanol y Frances
Hola, tengo 20 anos y soy de Turquia. Estoy aprendiendo Espanol por 1.5 ano y Frances por casi 6 meses. A mi me gusta aprender los idiomas es mi hobby y tambien creo que poder hablar frances, espanol y ingles es una gran ventaja en Turquia. Podria ganar mas dinero gracias a eso cuando consigo un trabajo y a parte de eso sorprender a las personas hablando con su idioma nativo es un sentimiento muy extrano y bueno :) Veo algunos videos en youtube con subtitulos o escucho algunos podcasts con el texto cada manana por 45 minutos en Frances y 45 minutos en Espanol.
July 13, 2022
13 juillet 2022 - Xinjiang (2)
Xinjiang est une région spéciale de la Chine parce qu’elle a son propre gouvernement donc on dirais qu’elle est plutôt autonome. (Mais bien sur, le gouvernement de Beijing aimerait le contrôler.) Comme elle est habitée par de Ouïghours, elle a son propre culture qui est bien différente de ceux en chine continentale. On peut y trouver de deserts et de grandes montages. C’est très beau. En raison de la position géographie, il fait tres beau chaque jours, presque sans nuage, alors on peut regarder le coucher du soleil facilement en chemin. De plus, c’est une très grande région mais je n’avais que deux semaines de temps de rester la-bas, alors je crois que j’aimerais bien me retourner pour profiter de la belle scène et de la gentillesse de locaux.
July 13, 2022
¿Qué estás haciendo?
“Qué estás haciendo?”
Mí mamá me pidió como sufrí por el internet, sentado en mi cama que no ya me desperté a pesar del hecho que son las once de la mañana.
“Estás estudiando? Sabes tienes que hacer tus exámenes en menos que tres semanas!”
Todos los días, si no estoy sentado en mesa, ella mira por encima de mi hombro. A veces, esperaba que todavía trabajar, en lugar de se queda en la casa. Yo supe que a ella le gusta esperarle a él antes de dormir. Nunca ella despertarse sin él.
“Estoy relajarme, Mamá, por favor te relaja.”
Ella jugué con el pelo, y tirado en su camisa como normal: su costumbre.
Yo abrí mi computadora y cerré la puerta. Me senté para ella, pero no puedo hablarle ahora. No cuando supe adonde mi papá estuvo.
July 13, 2022